arhi ss (d haunted villa)last part (part 6) pg 16 - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
aah shit!..i knew that creepwa..arrgh..he should burn
btw i hope he is not the ghost?
and chii cheap guys!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
continue soon other prt fastly,i wait 4 it
after all nice prt
poor aaliya
t4 pm,plz pm other prt
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow dear it was just awsuuum...so shyam again becomes the culprit...man he is really so evil...poor aaliya...feel sorry for her...it was a fab update dear n thnx 4da pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
hey continue soon...loved it..cn anyone explain explain me plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
wow nice part...
so shyam z d vilan...
eagerly waiting 4 nxt update...

thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
omg what a scary story
read all the parts
i just cried in fear in 3rd and 4th part
but interesting continue soon
and pls add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
awesome part
pls continue soon
pls pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
awesome part loved it thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey this part is for abcdew

as it was requested soo i am updating it ...



arnav shouts :aaliyaaa


arnav have a small flashback of his and aaliya and anjis childhood and their time spent together

arnav was both their mom dad ..frnd and evrything...
it was really pain full for arnav to handel the loss of his little sister...

then only shyam and nk come...

nk:ooh god who is she...


arnav:aaliya...

nk:ur sisiter????

arnav:yes...

shyam:she will kill all of us...

nk:where is khuhsi and la???

arnav:i dont know...

and then suddenly somethin pushes nk in air and he crashes with the pillar...

nk:help...

arnav:aaliya...

arnav:aaliya i know u are here plzz stop it dear plzzz

the wind blowing stops for a second...

nk who is unconsious and blood comming out frm his head...

aranv:aaliya...u were not like...u love me ...so plzz for me dont do..it stop..it alliya...

aaliya:bhai..

and arnav is able see aaliyas soul...

arnav:tell me who did it...

aaliya:imiss bhai..i am sorry i fought u for comming here...

aranva:aaliya i will not let the person alive ...just tell me...

and then shyam get scared and he helds a long iron rod in his hand and goes towards arnav ...

arnav hears...khuhsi..

khushi:arnav look back and she come betwween ..

the rod get stabbed inside khushi ...

blood start comming frm her stomach...

arnav:khushi????/

khushi:my death was destinated arnav ...
like this or that ..shyam alswas had to be the reason of my death...

arnav:no khuhsi ..i hav lost aaliya.not u verything will be alright... i will take u frm here...

la come their..

khsuhi??????????????????????

arnav:shyam..he tried to kill me... but why???

la:ooh gos she is bleeding...

arnav just stay with her and keep ur hand on her wound ..i go and find shyam...

arnav:look back now aaliya was not seen ...

arnav:shyam...
i will kill ...

shyam:who was hidding in the lobby cud feel the wind blowing ...

shyam:i am sorry ...plzz dont kill me...

then aaliya comes their...

aaliya:i begged like this...but u dint listen me na...

aaliya:u have to die...

shyam:no i dont want ..

and he runs frm their and bumps into arnav ...

he had arnav have a fight...

shyam::i am sorry...

arnav:why u didi it...why u wanted to kill me...

shyam"i dint wanted something told me to do it...

arnav:no she is my sisiter why wud she tell u to kill me????

shyam:i dont know ...

and then arnav turns around...

shyam thinks it perfect to run but all doors starts getting closed...

arnav:why aaliya why why u want to kill us ?????/

khushi:bcz he killed her..

lavanya brought khuhsi...
who was dying of pain...

arnav:khshui/...

khushi:aaarnaanv he killed ur sister...

arnav:became full anry and as he turned..he saw shyam was pointing a gun on him...

arnav:u???

shyam:yes me..it was me u killed ur sisiter...
it was me who killed ur frns...

arnav :i will kill u..

shyam:no arnav u wont be able to... i am who is going to kill u all ...

khsuhi:aaliya do some thing...

la lets khushi to rest on floor and her haed in la lap...

aaliya:i told u only u can kill him...

khushi:but he will kill ur brother...

aaliya:i can only help..

but khushi i need ur soul strenght for this...

khushi:i allow u to do anything...

and then i high wind blows ...colour dust wind everything blows...
and the gun frm shyam hand fells downs...
just near khushi hand...


it was near but khushi lost soo much blood like picking it up was difficult...

she tried everything but her body refused to move...

she closed her eyes..
rememberd all wht happened time with payal...aman la..and arnav..
she has do it for them for her and specially for him...

she opened her eyes and held the gun and shot...

shyam fell on the ground...

arnav went near khsuhi who was just closing her eyes...

arnav:kshuhi...

la:khushi...

and started crying...

then suddenly the light came back..
evrything became normal...
all blood diasspeared frm floor...

aaliya:came near arnav
aaliya:she will be alright...

arnav:aaliya..

aaliya:death was in her estiny but when u came destiny had to change...

arnav:aaiya...

aaliya:bhai ..i always loved u...

and she disappears...

and khushi opens her eyes...

arnav:khushi..

and la help her to move..
the 3 go out of the vill and see their car is alright...

la:just look back and remember all frnd...

khsui:lets go home..

arnav:our homje..
and they have a small hug...


and
aliya is shown smiling...


okok guys soo i then this ss here only hope u all were enjoying it...

and if u ant me to wrote another spooky ss do write me or pmme with ur imagination...




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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it dear...man shyam is sooo evil...he is always looking for reasons to get in trouble...oh man khushi!!!did she just come in harms way just to protect arnav...wow that was intense dear...but loved it how finally aaliya gets justice...well written dear...loved it very much and thnx da pm...👏

p.s do write more ss..love reading your work..😛
Edited by kitzdoll - 13 years ago

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