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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
scary..
so aliya z d ghost...& anji never came...

update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
part 4

okok guys i was not able to controll my self after reading all ur s comments soo i decided to write part 4 also today...

guys few part will be or might be not suitable for childern but i will do it in blue soo if soo want to skip plzz u can...
and dont dare to read it at night./...
arnav:aaliyaaa

khushi:aaliya??????????????/

arnav:it means anji never came with me...

khushi:wht are you saying it arnav...how can it be possible...

arnav:she wanted me to be here...

khushi:i think someone was joking with you...

arnav:okok the phone call was fake then how come is that she is not in any pic ...

khushi:i dont know but why wud she kill all of us???????????

arnav:i dont know but try tio likn whenevr anything happened anji was not their with us...

khushi:no it was not...

arnav:when the car broke it was bcz of anji shouted...

when that dead body came anji was not near car...

khsuhi:ooh come on arnav when aaksh was killed anji was their only sleeping near u...

arnav:i am not getting anything ...

khsuhi:arnav you tell me the whole thing where aaliya went...

arnav:she went out with her frnds...
she was not happy theyb took her for a trip to dehradhun...

khsuhi:just like me...then...

arnav:aaliya called me she was scared she told me that evryone is dead their and something will kill her...

khushi:i am not getting it any thing ...

arnav:but we cant leave evryone alone with her...

suddenly all light goo off...

lavanya:aaa

nk:wht happened...

la:lights wht happened...

shaym:someone has the lighter...

nk:i have and he ons the lighter and sees towards everyone...

shyam:i am f9...

nk:la...

nk :ooh where is she

shyam:anji where are they both...


arnav and khuhsi come running...

arnav:wht happened

shyam:lights have gone...

khsuhi:where is la..

nk:i dont know anji is also missing...

arnav:ooh noo..

khsuhi:lets find them...

arnav:are their any candels here...

shyam:yes i saw some in kitchen...

arnav:okok i get them ...

and give evryone a candel...

nk and shyam go together...

aarnav and khsuhi...

arnav and khsuhi again go to 1 floor...

arnav:u wait here i go and check this room..
khushi:i am scared...

arnav:u just wait outside...

khushi:okok

then arnav goes ino the room...

khsuhi candel bew away she get scared but then she sees a light comming...

she goes towards the light and sudddely agin a force takes her...

she sees...

a person a draging a girl harshly...

girl:plzz leave me ...

man:shut up...

girl:plzzz just leave me ... just do it plzzz

man still dragging her...

khushi follows them...

and that man takes the girl in his arms and she is forcing a lot...

khushi ..
cud see a lot of scars on her hand but not her face ...
not even the mans face...

that man took her forcelly to room no 13

and then the door locked...

khsuhi heard...

girl:leave meee

khsuhi:heard noises noices of breaking of thinngs ...like mirror broke...

she held the knob and opened the door...

she enters the room no 13...


and wht wa shappening she closed her eyes 1...

the man was just forcing himself on that girl...
girl:leave me...

man:just tore her dress frm sholder ...she was crying but like it was vain...

no one was their to hear or help her ...

then she saw 1 boy he was recording all this...

khsuhi felt like throwing up...

the man know opened her heels ...

and threw it ..it broke 1 of the mirror their...
2 more boys came and held that girl and the man opened his shirt...

girl:plzz dont dont do it...

but like the man was deaf her pleading was not ..
girl:u guys were my frnds dont do this ...plzzz

and then he just forced himself...

khsuhi went forward to stop...

but then saw the girl...
she was aaliya...

khsuhi :aaliay

and she goes to stop him but then...
aaliya:u cant stop it...

khushi:aaliya...

aaliya:it was already happened...

khsuhi:soo u r

aaliya:yes i am dead...

khsuhi:got scared...

aaliya:u dont want to know the resaon why i got u here???????????/

khshi:reason????///

aaliya:yes khushi...the reason...

aaliya:bczz wht is happnening here ...was also going to be with u...

khushi:me?????????????

aaliya: yes too u...

khushi:i dont know anything .. why u killed us ..wht have we done to do???????

aaliya:bczz only u cud help me khuhsi ..only you...

khsuhi:me...how?????

aaliya:i want revenge now...

khushi:frm whome????

aaliya:frm all... frm evrybody...

khuhsi:even frm ur brothe aaliya./...

he ;loves u the most will u try to kill him also...

aaliya:i wud never do that ..never khushi...

bhai is my evrything and i never tried to kill him...

khsuhi:soo who attaced him and la???

khsuhi:i protected him khsuhi...

and then somethinghappend and everything back to present...

la was on bed...

?????

aaliya:she is alive... she has a pure heart ...i dint kill her...
she is safe here...


khsuhi:but why u killed other??????????????/

aaliya:i dint kill them all...

i never did...

khsuhi:then who was it ..who did...

aaliya:i just told them the truth...

khsuhi:then who did it???????????????????





Stapleton thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
wow it's interesting...

continue soon...

thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
ok this is geetting a wee scary n m reading at night so m getting the chills at the moment...but it was awsuuum n wea is anji...pliz continue soon n thnx 4da pm dear...it was just fantastic..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😭 for aaliya!!!!!!!!!!
awesome update!!!!!!!!
looking forward for part 5!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
felt bad for aliya
if she didn't kill others then who can it be?
it was very scary
can't wait to read more
plz update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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d same was going to happen with khushi ? m confused..😕..poor aliya..😭..whoz d 1 killing around ??😲
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chocoangel

d same was going to happen with khushi ? m confused..😕..poor aliya..😭..whoz d 1 killing around ??😲


this is the main susupense...
u will get to know abt it in next part
and abt the killer too..
and yes u will also know how thw same was going to happen with khsuhi...

aaliya will show her it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kitzdoll

ok this is geetting a wee scary n m reading at night so m getting the chills at the moment...but it was awsuuum n wea is anji...pliz continue soon n thnx 4da pm dear...it was just fantastic..


as u had few confusions soo i tell u in clear...

arnav has found that anji never came with him to the villa it was aaliya who took them their and the visions that she get are her own she just get reminded of the past...

and anji is safe that her own house..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
who did it????😕...nice one.thnxs again for pm..😊

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