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Posted: 13 years ago

#221

Oh well loved the way arnav made a fool of himself. I love this arhi. They are too cut to digest.
Its nice to see that payal gave khushi arnav ki kasam to make her dance. Then when arnav laughed at his own stupidity it was obvious he now needs khushi in his life. His conversation with his mother was crisp and emotional. He realise that his mother was right and in a way he can't live without khushi.
Yes these two are in love with each other and thy just have to realise that.
Coming to the present ... wanna know why they are no together. Also I hope arnav gets his khushi back soon.
And last but not the least you have got to update soon.

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anjaliarnav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#222

awesome!!!! such a lovely part...plz continue...update nxt part soon..

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Sona257

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Posted: 13 years ago

#223

Loved it!

Thanks for the long update. 😊

Khushi danced with Kevin and OMG! Arnav was super jealous.😉

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teri_susan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#224

Loved the part.Curious to know to know what made them separate,continue...

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arhi_maneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#225

VERY NICE UPDATE! VERY FUNNY! KEVIN WAS GAY! ROFL!

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the_breeze

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Posted: 13 years ago

#226

hey fab update again!!! 👏 Awww Arnav calling her up and pretending it was for work related stuff was just tooo cute!!!! ❤️ Hmmm Khushi must have been luking stunning in the red dress and the heels (whistles ☺️) boy was she shocked when she found out they were gonna announce the engagement in front of the whole media,, that girl has a serious case of stage fright!!! Arnav approving of her work, Khushi's improvisation and the subsequent exchange that followed brought to the fore that this ASR does give others a chance to show their talent and doesn't erupt like a volcano everytime something slightly goes off track 😆

I thought that Arnav removing the rubber band from Khushi's hair, complimenting her and being all flirty was done by him in order to make her comfortable and calm her nervousness down'. It is heartening to read how he responds to her feelings in subtle yet significant ways' 👏 Putting his arm around her for support, asking the media to back off from asking her questions, complimenting her about the pictures and even going to the extent of stopping them from appearing in the papers' 😍

Also I find it really adorable that they made an album cum scrapbook and the fact that Arnav still has it and goes through it stands testimony to how much he misses her and wants her back' (you made a lil blooper here, called Arnav as Angad in a sentence) Whoa girl you choose a mighty hot dance!!!!! 😳 I am surprised Arnav dint go all kung fu on poor Kevin' Ahh jealous Arnav is a HUGE treat!!!! 😉 I also loved the fact that you have portrayed ASR as a man who isn't perfect in everything, eg in this update was the dancing, felt bad for Khushi's toes he he Also he doesn't believe in getting people to answer to him by hook or crook, he let Khushi choose when to answer and when she said "Arnav ki kasam" it took this to a whole new level of cuteness!!!!!!! 😎

Lastly, you said Creepwa ain't gonna be in this FF, so I am totally gobsmacked as to what drove them apart, Khushi doesn't seem to be doing any wrong at all, all the family loves her is it something to do with her past, her parents????? 😕

do update soon dear! take care and thnx for the pm!! 😊

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ardis

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Posted: 13 years ago

#227

omg loved it that was really adorable. thanks for the pm

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angeldream14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#228

loved it.
its easy to be angry n hide ur pain but still pepole can see that u r in pain.

but if u smile n hide ur pain its very difficult .

no one can see the hurt behind every single smile.

it like be brave n smile in pain or be a coward n hide behind anger.

learnig to smile in pain keeps u alive in lonely days.

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dexamethasone

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Posted: 13 years ago

#229

I had to make this account just so I could comment on your fic!

I've been reading it through google search till now but I really wanted to comment after part 6.

Firstly, thank you so much for taking the time out to write such a beautiful story! I've read your little notes at the end of each part and hats off to you for writing a part and giving us an update the day before your exam! I dont know how many writers have that kind of dedication!

Now coming back to the part it was written marvelously. I love how it went from cute to funny to cute then suddenly to emotional/sentimental! And you make those shifts so smoothly that everything flows instead of seeming choppy! The changing between Khushi and Arnav's POV's was done very well too! I've never been one for arranged marriages but after reading this fic...I'm thinking...maybe Arranged marriage isnt so bad😳😆

I found myself blushing when:

- Arnav removed her hair band

- Arnav complimented her on the dress

- Arnav put his arm around her

- Arnav laughed at himself for being jealous of Kevin

- Arnav and Khushi's interaction in the car

- "Arnav Ki Kasam" had my face red and burning hot!

The last few paragraphs though...brought tears to my eyes! Once again, splendidly done Katie! You know you're a good writer when what you write out from your heart, reaches someone else's heart and makes their day! I checked this fic every single day to see if you updated...I think I'm addicted!

And since you've mentioned "other fics", you can be sure that I'll stalk those and read them too!

Desperately waiting for the next update!

p.s: almost forgot...What the heck happened between them? I have a feeling Arnav did something really terrible to make her leave...maybe he insulted her greatly. or maybe he cheated on her (unintentionally), or since he's so possessive, maybe khushi felt tied down and thats why she left! I dont know...too many possibilities!!

Add me to the PM list as well please! I've added you as a buddy!

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rhearuhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#230

Awwhhh it was sooo sweeet...jealous arnav was a treat to read ...what could have happened can't imagine ..loving every bit of the story ...do update soon!