Burning in your Love (Part 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, & 13)

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beccky

@beccky

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Posted: 13 years ago

#341

hey that was one lovely update.. he finally completed that hamesha hamesha... i hope something like this happens in IPK...

aww. that was so niccee... btw thanks for the PM...!!!

Do continue soon..!!! :)

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Yazzy91

@Yazzy91

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Posted: 13 years ago

#342

Awww was really enjoying this update! I loved it! Im so glad khushi cleared her doubts, but arnav has a lot to do to get rid of all that hurt he caused before marriage!! Awesome update as usual!! xxx

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cherry227

@cherry227

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Posted: 13 years ago

#343

lovely! like this romantic arnav :)))

thanks for the pm :D

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cherry227

@cherry227

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Posted: 13 years ago

#344

the way this story is going is beautiful... lets see how does arnavs shaatir dimag help him in meeting khushi :D

pls update soon... thanks for the pm :)))

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Nira khan

@nirbasito

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Posted: 13 years ago

#345

Thanks for the PM

That was sooo beautiful

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aditi07

@aditi07

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#346

awesome update..Brilliant writing!! loved the way khushi voiced out her insecurities👏
ArHi story could never be ArHi story if it was only abt mushy & sweet stuff...what makes it different from the rest is their complexities..insecurities...ego issues.. unable to own up to their feelings...confusions ...difficulties in trusting the strength of each others' love...& thats wat we got in the today's update!! Loved it👏👏!!

loving that how at one time its such a beautiful love story where arnav is totally in love with khushi & has finally owned up to his feelings openly, but at the same time khushi is too scared of sudden showering of arnav's love upon her!!! The same khushi who always wanted arnav to confess his love...was waiting for it for so long.. is now scared that when he has actually confessed it...she is just not able to believe it...she is just not able to believe if its forever or not...she is not able to accept the strength & surety of his love for her!!
she is just not able to let go of her past experiences with him...his words that he had spoken in past..which are rite now at a stark contrast of his present actions! she is probably scared of this drastically changed arnav...a change which appears so fast & sudden to her coz she doesn't know that all those times he was Actually lying to her Just to run away from his feelings! she is scared that what if he changes back to what he was...or this phase was just a temporary one..what if he realizes that he made such a big mistake! & thats y she made him promise her he'll tell her when he regrets it!!
Gosh... lovely expression of khushi's emotions!! now arnav should realize that to how deeply his words..his rejection had hurt & broken khushi..they hv made her unsure of everything!! & its only his love which can bring her back to trust him fully!!

superb update..loved the fun part too!! guess family is not letting go of single opportunity to irritate & irk arnav😆... Sangeet with only females...awww feel so bad for arnav😆😆...wonder what he'll do now...will he try to sneak in??.. really curious abt it!!
continue soon dear😊

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pere

@pere

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Posted: 13 years ago

#347

The way you used the dialogues from the Heer Ranjha act was brilliant!

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Abi

@PepsiGirl101

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#348

loved the update. beautiful song line quotes and love how there getting closer! :)

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saba

@ASR6262

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#349

beautiful thank u so so much for pm me continue soon

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#350

awesome update loved how arnav decide that bubbly would stay glad payal and akash will adopt her loved the way khushi voiced out her insecurities to arnav making him realize how bad he damaged her by making her feel so insecure in their marriage and always bring her aukat and her middle class mentality loving that arnav is totally in love with khushi and has finally owned up to his feelings openly, but at the same time khushi is afraid of arnav's because he always ill treated her love before and made fun of the values she had loved the update well written awesome thanks for the pm