Burning in your Love (Part 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, & 13)

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aadyakali

@aadyakali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#321

Loving the foreplay and Khushi's insecurities are very real...i so hope cvz gi thru yr story it is happening and it make total so so so what we all want to see in the show..

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#322

Wonderful! I love that she shares her insecurities now. It means she trusts him enough to open up to him
He's ASR, Im sure he'll figure out a way to sneak in and watch the ceremonies

Yuks

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prerna

@prernawaghray

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Posted: 13 years ago

#323

hey... just caught up with ur ff... its lovely dear... endearing :)
plz pm me if possible :)

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shagun-rocks

@shagun-rocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#324

that was BEAUTIFUL!!!!...& i can totally fathom khushi's predicament...had i been in her place i would've felt the same uncertainty too...needless to say it was very well written...would b waiting eagerly 4 d next part...thanks a ton 4 d pm...luv ya...🤗

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-daffodils-

@-daffodils-

Navigator

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Posted: 13 years ago

#325

edits later

arhi in rain is a treat to me...eventhough he just nipped her earlobe...it was tooo intense...

full essence of love and desire...he is so caring...becoz he was watching,whether she had reached home without any mishaps...also his frustration on knowing that sangeet was deneid for grooms...

was really lovable...i loved it...only one word...aweee...

Edited by -vaidehi- - 13 years ago

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neha2005

@neha2005

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#326

lovely update! thanks for the pm!

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desicurry

@desicurry

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Posted: 13 years ago

#327

typically kushi, bangs her head against the top of the car window hahah

loved this update

keep updating :)

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nims6

@nims6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#328

it was sooo romantic...i loved it to the core...how can you write every part so beautifuly...i wondr...i just love this feeling...i just love you...beautiful...thats the word i would love to call it...

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

#329

thank you smita for the pm... that's the first thing I look for once I log in... feel really bad for both khushi and arnav: she is still unsure of his love and he has to work overtime to make her realise how deeply he loves her! khushi and arnav under one umbrella so remind me of raj kapoor and nargis! loved the line: If only he had known that it would rain. He would have parked the car two streets away!

poor arnav, no chance to seduce khushi... will he take a page from nk's book and disguise himself as a lady, to attend the sangeet? won't that be a sight for sore eyes 😆!

Edited by Maddy1270 - 13 years ago

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Harshnee Vora

@harshnee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#330

luved it. continue soo. part 11 was amazing and emotional and khushi still feels insecure about arnav feelings but he clears her doubt with his lines of love. the rain walk and heer- ranja dialouges was beautifully written and looking forward to see how arnav gets into the sangeet. thx a lot for the pm