~FF: Forever Yours~ Update Pg 21

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Amazing update...finaly every1 know the reasn of her leaving...
Cnt wait 4 the nxt update...
Thanx 4 d pm

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aishasully

@aishasully

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

nyc 1 but dude y cliff hanger mann y i bet its her mom damn dis is bad but do updatte soon

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Jeeya_Angel

@Jeeya_Angel

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Nice update dear.

Finally KriYansh was in each other's arms. N yeah nice selection of song. Suited the mood.

I am wondering that person separating our KriYansh could be Kria's mom. 😡

Will surely wait for the next update

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

both parts were awesome...loved it very much

these parts were very heart touching and i had tears in my eyes while reading these updates

you are too good at writing ...great job

waiting eagerly for next part

continue soon

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

tune toh senti kar diya rey...

was expecting that it was kria's mom but how wud she end up there that was the problem...

chalo lets see what u have in store...

loved it...

update asap

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

this is the comment to both ur parts.

Its awesome.

hey ya hani this is asma (my intro).

u write really weell.

Thanks god i read both the parts together else i would have gone dead.

wish smritti accepts rey nd the whole gang convinces ther.

Thanks for the pm.

Update asap.

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star_2012

@star_2012

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

owesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

please cont..soon and pm me...xxxlove

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

accha one more thing...

kriya's fear, sadness, anger and pain was beautifully depicted.

plus the dress she was wearing and her mom took her away it was like princess getting locked in a room...

loved it

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Hey can I call u honey as it is near ur name and it is easier to remember nick names for me and also my name is shivani call me shivs or shivu or shivi and also i m 14 and yeah i loved ur ff and the two updates were fantastic and thanks for the pm