~FF: Forever Yours~ Update Pg 21

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys! I'm new to this forum and have fallen in love with D3 but ever since Shakti left the show seems empty to me. After watching the tellychakkar interview I've been feeling better so I am going to write an FF based on Kria's return! Which I am hoping she will...please GOD!!! The story starts 3 months after Shakti left the show'.BTW in this FF Kria is not a depressed rone dhone wali ladki...she is strong and she IS sad about whatever happened in Mumbai but she is trying to get over it and find another way to dance without Smriti finding out.
So here is the Prologue!
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The story starts in Dehradun, where there is an apartment and in that apartment Kria is sitting on her bed with her two friends Jas and Misha, devising a strategy on paper'huh? Yes our lovely Kria is all set to get back into dance and with the help of her two friends it seems she might even accomplish it.
Jas points out a place on her iPhone, 'What about here? It seems like a nice, decent place'.
Misha shakes her head, 'Honey, if she goes there I think before Aunty kills her she might kill herself', Jas thinks for a bit, 'Oh yeah...'
"GUYS!! Think!!! Mom, will be back home soon and then we won't have enough time! This is our only chance to try and convince her', Kria gets up and starts pacing around the room.
'By the way, Kria could I use your phone? I just remembered I have to call my Mom', Misha winks at Jas and they both nod secretively.
'Uh yeah...here', Kria hands her phone to Misha who goes into a corner while Jas tries to distract Kria by making her think about how to persuade her Mom.
Meanwhile, Misha secretly takes her phone out and notes down Swayam's number from Kria's phone, because my friends...our lovely Misha and Jas have devised their own plan in order to get Kria and Rey to meet so they can sort out their misunderstandings.
But wait...what about our lovely Louisans?
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Basically they've all grown and matured...not!
They are all the same...except for one MAJOR difference...FINALLY Sharon and Swayam are together!!! Yay!!
And Rey is NOT with Taani...she is still trying to get him to notice her but Rey is more involved with dance. Yes, Taani's uhmmm...cheating was exposed when it came to rehearsals and Sharon took her place, because now she's with Swayam, the name Weaklings doesn't matter to her anymore!
The Dazzlers are keeping an eye out for a sixth dancer because they want to start their team again, but this time they need someone REALLY good to match up with the Weaklings team.
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Let's get back to Dehradun...Looks like our friends have finally come up with a plan and are discussing it with Rani Laxmiba- I mean Smriti..
'Aunty this is a once in a lifetime opportunity! And we'll be going with Kria anyways!' Misha tries to explain to Smriti.
But Smriti has her Rani Laxmibai face on and is not budging from her decision, 'No! I don't want Kria to leave me alone!'
'But Aunty this isn't even near St. Louis! It's in Goa! This is a HUGE conference that is held every year so that students can come up with different ideas to help them think of new ways to learn. Also, a lot of potential employers come there to look for trainees, I think it is a REALLY good opportunity for ALL of us!', Jas says pleadingly.
Smriti thinks for a bit, 'How many days is it for?'
'ONLY three days Aunty!' Misha tells her quickly praying in her head that Smriti will agree.
'Okay...but Kria you have to promise me that you will go to visit Nana and Nani afterwards! I've already promised them...so no if or buts! If you got to the conference you WILL have to go there too!' Smriti tells Kria.
Kria sighs heavily and says, 'Fine...but Mom you have to trust me okay? Don't come looking for me or anything? Promise?'
Smriti nods and hugs Kria, 'Promise', Jas and Misha join in the hug and Kria hive fives both of them behind Smriti's back!
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Precap:
Kria reaches the hotel where they are staying...and goes up to her room with Jas and Misha! A few moments later the St. Louis gang reach the same floor and go into the room opposite Kria's!
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So guys hope you liked it! If I don't get much good response for this I'll discontinue it. Creative criticism is welcomed and I'll have the first chapter up very soon! Promise!
If you want to be added to my PM list add Hanibee_PM or like this post and I'll make sure that you are in my list.
Thanks guys!!!
Love, Haniibee!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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1st one loved its love forever for two soul can not be sepreated they meet when desteny plan for both
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When you update please pm to me
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waiting 4 ur nxt update... nice concept...
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Amazing...i just luved it...addded u n also the PM id in my buddy list so do pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it...wud lyk to see kriyaansh together.and yes...taani's exposed-nyc 1.hate taani lyk helll...pehle kriyaansh nd ab swaron k beech mei a rahi hai...(in da show i mean)..ur ff wud seriously provide for some relief amidst this turmoil goin on in d3...pm me wen u updt next.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome start...loved it very much
please continue soon
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itss awesome i luvv it plzzz continue nd do pm me i luv yr FF
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Plz continue and I have liked the post so plz add me to the list and the start was amazing loved it thanks for this ff
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update. Do continue. nd pm me the next time.

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