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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

really amazing n superb part..

loved it alot...

really sweet one..

thnx for the pm...

Thank you for your lovely comment dear ⭐️ 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww so sweet update yr
enjoyed it

that kid part is really awesome
she loved kids me too even me tooo loved kids 😛
well how can she refused his offer to play game

very cutie pie update Thank you dear
update soon
thanks 4 pm
luv u Love u too 😛
Thank u dear for such a lovely comment ⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part- 3

Samyukta melancholy returned her house and began to complete her fragmented work which stay up due to interruption of her two different age friends.

After completion her undertaken work Samyukta sat on sofa with relief and thought about her leisure time. Samyukta took remote n thought of seeing television but soon she rejected because she very well known nothing is showed on TV with the expection of that boring daily soaps and she stood up to found out another optional thing..

Books would helps a lot at one's spare time and she moved towards her fine collection books in her room which are kept in small cupboard. .

Samyukta opened the door and most of all , one book is came out in her hand "love story "

On visual perception on that book Samyukta rememberd her friends words while giving to her before.

" read this book Samyukta, it will help you to believe on Love stories "

This book responcible only for increased her bags heaviness , in whole vacation she didn't touch once and today also by mistaken , she apologized for her deeds n kept back at it's original place

According to her contemplation, Love stories were not at all concerned with her

Soon she found out one mysterious novel n engaged in reading

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After couple of hours Samyukta ended her reading part and she decided to checked her neighbor house whether they arrived or not .but by her knowledge Grandpa and grandma would be returned because that temple is not far from their house

Soon she came out of house and there no lock seen on opposite house Samyukta confirmed n left for visit

The door didn't bolted from inside ,slightly ajar so samyukta directly went inside with parcel in her hand And saw old aged man sat on the armchair with closed eyes but he didn't sleeping that she very well known .

She entered inside and said in soft low tone but it was enough to heard " Grandpa"

on hearing a soft melodious voice Grandpa opened his eyes and said in happy high voice " samyukta beta , come here "

" grandpa here is your parcel by mistaken it delivered at Sharma aunty's house ,so she it gave to me. It must be send by your son" she said while giving it to Grandpa.

" yes thank you beta" grandpa said in gratitude but there was a line resentment on his forhead , and added " instead of this if my son comes then that would be the most precious gift for me"

Samyukta knew that he missed his son , and diverting his mood she asked " one year has been passed since we shifted here , so I don't know much about them , but they must have been very kind hearted so what I suggest , why don't you go there and stay with your son in Delhi . then your family become fulfil " she gave suggestion to remove their loneliness without his son n family.

It was not like that they were lonely as Samyukta and her mother are very close to them just liked their family members.

On that Grandpa answered " we don't want to leave this place where we born , Happy and precious moments are attached to this home"

Samyukta respected his feelings n chirply said hopefully with a smile " Don't worry , one day your whole family will be here with you " as soon as she complete her speech her attenssion got by sweet smell came from kitchen. she immediately went to found out foodstuff and saw her Grandma was preparing sweet dish.

" wow Grandma , Barfi , thank u God for giving such words great cook in my surrounding , In my house there is ma n here Grandma" she thanked to God which listened by Grandma and Samyukta stepped forward to taste , before she could touched , her hand is hitted softly by Grandma.

"No this is not for you " Grandma said while hittng on her hand

Firstly Samyukta was confused if it was not for her then who was became beloved than her ?

Samyukta asked " any guests are coming? "

Before Grandma answered her Grandpa came in the kitchen from leaving room and interrupt them

"yes my child , my Grandson is coming by tomorrow " he said happily

Samyukta unconsciously smiled on seeing happiness on their face , and she recollect the reason behind her called by them . and participated in their happiness.

Soon her eyes back her previous task to taste her favourite Burfi " aa Grandma , what if he dislikes it what u have made for him , so it is mandatory to taste by someone, I will do that job" and picked up one piece and ate " wow Grandma you are awesome , he will surely like it " she cheered with complement.

Grandpa was seeing her sweet act and then said " samyukta beta can you do one favor ,that you knew there is very far generation gap in me and my grandson that wont efface, so can you help him in to coalesce in this environment "

Samyukta nature was friendly then also she was not confident but to had reverence for him she nodded positively.

Grandpa was satisfied on her acceptance and said " his father is worried about him "

on that sentence she quietly said " fathers are more caring , but some are doesn't know their responsibility " and added with fake smile which is not seen her eyes " you don't worry , your grandson going to love this place and never leave u " after saying this left.

Even samyukta didn't show it on her face but it wouldn't hidden by two experienced old person

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Samyukta sat quietly in leaving room , she even didn't know when her mother came from office . she all engaged in her own thoughts .

"samyukta , samyukta , where are u beta " said her mother

It is enough for her to came in present " aa yes ma " she stuttered while looking at her mother

" why you are so lost " Supriya asked .

" no ma nothing , I m just thinking about tomorrows schedule , tomorrow is my first day of collage that's why " smyukta ensured her.

Supriya wasn't satisfied wit her answered but didn't say anything

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on the dinner table , Samyukta was all quite , her solemn behavior felt strange for Supriya because she used share all passed moments in whole day.

Supriya could not see her daughters sober behavior , and asked " did you missing your father "

This uncertained question by her mother Samyukta looked at her and grunted " no ma , I don't missed him " and left the table and went to her room.

Supriya knew her daughter very well that she never show her feelings on her face and felt misery that she couldn't became her father.

Edited by SonaliDhone - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
😆reso ji,
me 1st again⭐️

di aapne abhi tak mera ud nhi opada na!😡
egl wala.😡

~~**EDITED**~~
chalo ji ab sunlo hamari bak bak...
sunni tho padegi.
aur koi choice hi nhi h!
😉
aaj ka ud thoda jyada achha tha, 🤗
coz ismain mujhe arihaan ki entry ke thode clues mile!😍
i noe kuch romantic nhi tha, but mujhe phirr bhi romantic laga!😳

kyunki rt-mc jahan, vahan romance ke ilava kuch aur sujhta hi nhi h!😳

voh jb romance kate h, tak bhi romantic lagte h, jab nhi karte mujhe voh phirr bhi romantic lagte h!😳

''love stories novel tho main bhi nhi padati!...sirf sirf romance bhi thoda boring hota h!, thoda action, thoda mystery is must!
good choice samyukta!👍🏼

samyukta ko ek aur mission mila h!😆
arihaan ko city se introduce karane ka!
kinna romantic h na!...☺️...
i noe kuch romantic nhi h, bt maine bola na, mujhe rtmc ka sab kuch romantic lagta h!

barfi!...my fav is kaju ki barfi!😳
aapki????????😉

ur description ws as usaul so apt,👏

love u di.🤗
ud soon!😳


Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
wow !!awesome update dear
loved it thoroughly

samy is so cute...she was sad bt didn't show on her face lovely !!

Loved her friendly nature...she is so frank with her neighbours,kids,and even with grandma and grandpa...gd girl

barfi!!!omg!!!mujhe bhi barfi bhot acchi lagti h
hehehehe
samy wo tumhare liye nhi h tumhare hero ke liye h...hahaha

i guess grandson is going to be her hero soon
waiting for his rocking entry
mujhe laga tha ki is update me rajat ki entry ho jayegi but koi ni next me hi sahi

feel sad 4 samy...she missed her father! Sad yr
she didn't show bt ma ko phir bhi pta chal gya...mummy ko sab pta chal jata h

meri mummy ko bhi sab pta chal jata h mere face se...hehehehe

hope she is fine

let me tell u one thing that i love ur story
n ur writing skills

so pls update soon
thanks 4 pm
kal bhi update chahiye mujhe pls pls

luv u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
amazing update...👏
sam dear believe in love stories n in love too...cause soon you are going to fall in love...😉
n finally we got some news about arihan's entry...😛
n feeling bad for grandpa n grandmaa...they are alone...😔
but sam got a job...of guide...😆
but liked her effort to eat barfi...she tried and finally taste it...😆
n she was missing her father...oh...poor girl she didn't want to show it to anyone...not even to her mother...😔
n yes we want arihan in next update...plz don't delay his entry...😃
jaldi se le ke ao...😍
update soon...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

😆reso ji,

me 1st again⭐️

di aapne abhi tak mera ud nhi opada na!😡
egl wala.😡

~~**EDITED**~~
chalo ji ab sunlo hamari bak bak... tumhari bak bak sunne k liye hamare kaan taras gaye the
sunni tho padegi.
aur koi choice hi nhi h!
😉
aaj ka ud thoda jyada achha tha, 🤗 Thank you dear 😛
coz ismain mujhe arihaan ki entry ke thode clues mile!😍 hmm 😊
i noe kuch romantic nhi tha, but mujhe phirr bhi romantic laga!😳

kyunki rt-mc jahan, vahan romance ke ilava kuch aur sujhta hi nhi h!😳 vo to hai RM jaha jaha rommance to aisehi tayar hop jata h

voh jb romance kate h, tak bhi romantic lagte h, jab nhi karte mujhe voh phirr bhi romantic lagte h!😳

''love stories novel tho main bhi nhi padati!...sirf sirf romance bhi thoda boring hota h!, thoda action, thoda mystery is must! vo to hai 😃
good choice samyukta!👍🏼

samyukta ko ek aur mission mila h!😆 biggest mission of her life
arihaan ko city se introduce karane ka!
kinna romantic h na!...☺️...
i noe kuch romantic nhi h, bt maine bola na, mujhe rtmc ka sab kuch romantic lagta h!

barfi!...my fav is kaju ki barfi!😳
aapki????????😉 muze bhi bahot 😛
ur description ws as usaul so apt,👏 thank u 😛

love u di.🤗 luv u tooStar
ud soon!😳


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Posted: 13 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: ridzzi

amazing update...👏 thank u dear 😛

sam dear believe in love stories n in love too...cause soon you are going to fall in love...😉
n finally we got some news about arihan's entry...Tongue
n feeling bad for grandpa n grandmaa...they are alone...😔
but sam got a job...of guide...😆
but liked her effort to eat barfi...she tried and finally taste it...😆
n she was missing her father...oh...poor girl she didn't want to show it to anyone...not even to her mother...😔
n yes we want arihan in next update...plz don't delay his entry...😃 in next update there is entry of prince 😳
jaldi se le ke ao...😍
update soon...
luv u...😊 love u too ⭐️

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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
wow !!awesome update dear
loved it thoroughly

samy is so cute...she was sad bt didn't show on her face lovely !!

Loved her friendly nature...she is so frank with her neighbours,kids,and even with grandma and grandpa...gd girl

barfi!!!omg!!!mujhe bhi barfi bhot acchi lagti h
hehehehe
samy wo tumhare liye nhi h tumhare hero ke liye h...hahaha

i guess grandson is going to be her hero soon
waiting for his rocking entry
mujhe laga tha ki is update me rajat ki entry ho jayegi but koi ni next me hi sahi

feel sad 4 samy...she missed her father! Sad yr
she didn't show bt ma ko phir bhi pta chal gya...mummy ko sab pta chal jata h

meri mummy ko bhi sab pta chal jata h mere face se...hehehehe

hope she is fine

let me tell u one thing that i love ur story
n ur writing skills

so pls update soon
thanks 4 pm
kal bhi update chahiye mujhe pls pls

luv u
Thanks alot dear 😛
Glad to know that u liked it
love u too ⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40

Sorry for mistakes

Part ' 4

A pleasant morning candidly expressed it's tranquility , purity, nascence in the surrounding .

But something reverberate were perturbed it's serenity .

Presence of resound in the ambiance was inhibiting peace.

That were number of alarm clock in the Samyukta's room where Samyukta was sleeping piecefully , even that tumult would unsuccessful in severed her sleep. Samyukta is away from outer world while in her palm there was idol of Krishna which reposed in hand in perfect manner.

Samyukta used to shared her emotional feelings with Krishna which she could not shared with her mother.

Supriya came in Samyukta room after listening that continuous noisy sound and turned it off

" Samyukta , utho beta " she shrugged her hand which was adequate for Samyukta for rid off from her sleep

" yes ma , I have to wake up early that's why set three -four alarm clock around me but It seems no use " said with palm on her face to get rid from her sleepy eyes.

Samyukta rushed to get ready where Supriya chukeled on her daughter's innocent act and went in kitchen to prepared food.

Samyukta was all ready to go to collage after her prayer , when supriya brought to stand her and gave her tiffin box.

" ma I m not a school going girl , that you giving me tiffin box " said Samyukta

" I know that but for me you are always little princess , so now take it without any excuses " Supriya ordered her. Samyukta took it obediently and hugged her mother.

soon she left from their for collage .

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Samyukta collage was not far from her house or not so nearer. So she used to travel through Bus.

Bus soon came on bus stand n she entered and her Phone rang , one message came from her friend Nisha

" samyukta where are you , come early as possible in the auditorium , here we has principal introductory lecture "

" ohh Principals lecture , Thank god, I got my bus on time " she said to herself in gratification .
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After fifteen minutes she reached to collage '

S.V.P.M collage , a biggest degree collage in Mumbai, which had so many faculty science , commerse , Arts .

Samyukta was a second year Biotechnology student , Biotechnology which includes rescent advance technology in biology or Medical field.

Her aim was to became successful biotechnologist, as she already had that much talent and worthy to complete her ambition.

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Samyukta entered in auditorium ,and satisfied with thing that yet Principal had not came .

In the auditorium all faculty students were present

As she entered inside , all eyesight were stuck on mesmerizing Beauty

She didn't apply any cosmetics or make up on her face and even her lifestyle was not modern but she looked most elegant girl in her collage

Samyukta liked simplicity and that might be one reason which discriminated her from other girls.

Her adorable and smiling face was enough for any ones infatuation and crush on her

" hey Samyukta , here " one of her friend Nisha waved her hand from backside pillion and samyukta went towards and smile with relief and said " thank god I m not so late"

"yes, my dear you are not late ,but if you did little bit more delay then probably you must come along with Principal" teased Soniya

Samyukta ignored her as she know that soniya has habit of teasing unnecessarily and she sat on her place besides Nisha then she said with loud voice which was enough to listen by Supriya " If I came with Principal then all would get to know my spell"

In few minutes Principal entered , started her speech and Nisha said despairingly " she is going to consume our brain in next three hours " on that her sentence Samyukta chuckled.

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In the morning , grandpa's house ,

Grandpa was engaged in reading where his phone rang, he picked and said chirped " hello Arihaan beta , where are you and How long you will take to come here"

On opposite side Arihaan said " grandpa here flights are delayed for sometime due to bad weather , but don't need to worry I think I will reach before night" and he cut the phone.

After finishing that boring lecture All students were came out of auditorium , their situation was saying clearly How they enjoyed rather endured Principal's lecture.

This condition was not different for three girls that Samyukta , Nisha and Soniya

Samyukta said to her other two co partners " now there is any lecture ? "

" no" Soniya. answered her and added with a curiosity on her face " you know I heard one news from teachers that one new comer( fresher) is going to join with us "

" ohh At the Second year level " samyukta asked with the same curiosity as she pretended that she was indeed interested in that folderol talks but indeed she wasn't.

" yes and you know he did two ' three research project in first year itself , Samyukta get ready for your new competitor " soniya recommended.

" thank you Soniya for informing , but we all we see that who is stronger than whom , let him come first " smyukta thanked her and said " so Bye I m going home "

" hey what where are you going , isn't soniya informed you that we are going for shopping " Nisha halted her

"yes I did " soniya barked

Might be she told yesterday on the phone which missed by her , samyukta thought

" but not today ,can we go this Sunday, I have some important work " smyukta hummed

both Nisha and soniya raised their eyebrows which indicating that they wanted to know about her most important work than her best friends

Samyukta understood that they were not allowed her to go until they didn't knew the exact reason .

She had to tell them

" you know my neighbor grandpa which lives besides me , his grandson is coming , so want to be there "

On that, both friends were stunned " what , who , what is his aged , name '. ? " asked in continuously

" I don't know his name and his actual aged but from grandpa's talk it seem that he may be of same age " she hummed and gave answered them

" what yar , you didn't ask his name also " Soniya said

" it seems you are more excited about him , ok then I will send you his full resume tomorrow " samyukta annoyed on their useless questions

" It's ok samyukta, tomorrow come with all information about him " said Soniya

These girls were impossible thought samyukta and chuckled on her friends demeanour.

Soon she adieu her friends and left from there

After returned to home, Samyukta got to know that he had not yet arrived

She spend some time with Grandpa and grandma and went her house for noon nap

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In the evening ,

Samyukta was busy in playing with kids and she also took care of their studies , she

At the airport ,

A tall , handsome , good looking Boy walked with attractive features which draw the attraction of countless girls on the Airport

He removed his goggles and dialed a number and began to talk " I will reach their within 20 minutes "
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In night Around 8pm , there is dark outside ,

Samyukta was teaching kids , it was clear from their faces that they dam bored.

" di that's it , we can't do it , leftover we do it later , now it's time to play " sonu whooped

" but ''" before she could complete they disappeared from there .

Samyukta rushed outside to stop them .

But the kids were not there , she thought they might be in garden.

Here Arihaan reached at the gate and stepped inside

And on the spur of moment, wind blows and instabilityin the surrounding environment.

She stopped abruptly with strange sensation and anxiety.

she swirl around too see entrance'.

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