ArSha FF-Pehele Pyar ka Ehsaas#3 **The End**

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

was expecting something like that...

plz update asap

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Tish i hate it wen ppl are drunk.

and this part it was gud at start i loved how muks comforted shaks wen she needed it and she made her realise.

u also made it very clear how things get worse wen one is nt in his conscience.

thanks fpr the pm.

hope this does not spoil their relationship but i fell this act wil have a brutal effect on their relationship as shaks wil nt spk with amar or rather hate him and amar is seriously gonna regret wen he comes to know the truth.

plz update next part soon.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Sorry but this time i have nothing to say just update soon.
I am damn confused n thinking that Kunwar did it intentionally, it may be planned but i don't want them suffer. 😭

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 13 years ago

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Puja

@puja_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

I dint lyk dis part...hw can amar do dis...dat ws so cheap...i knw he ws drunk bt phr b...plz agle updates mai sb kuc thk kr dena arsha ke beech...abi abi to unki luv stry strt hui thi...bt i guess jb tk luv stry mai ladai na ho tb tk mazaa ni aata...hope nxt update is a hppier one...update soon...

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Well, loved it as always..!!

And loved it a lil bit more than always... Not disclosing the reason for that..

First of all... Awesomely written...

But Now the thing on my mind is... How are you going to get him out of this situation! Coz dis is very well irreversible damage!!

Ur making this one way too interesting!! Love the plot twist... So, she has now pretty much made up her mind... All I wanna know is... Do u plan to send her away for 3 years... Ur making my mind go into hyper drive with all the questions.. As to what happens next... And here I was going to sleep peacefully!! hmmmpph!!

Loved the forever in the end..!! 😉

Love U my Rockstar!!⭐️

Promise me you will update super soon!!

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namylovkriyansh

@namylovkriyansh

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

sorry to say but this should not be seen for arsha,i m disappointed

use your thoughts but in a proper way

i know it ff but you are spoiling arsha image by all this,not even in dreams we can think about such things about our arsha

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

tish i love ur writing ...bt personally i m hating dis update...actually inki jagah koi aur hota to may b love it...bt ahhh!!!!!! unfortunatly dey are ARSHA...n i want ARSHA to b happy
bt i must say twist is intrstng bt i m thnking tu sb thik kaise kregi n are u planning to sending her NY 4 3yrs...if u den plsss nooo...i want dem together wo b happy
n nw plss update nxt part soon as i cn't wait n hope ye sb ek dream sequence hi ho

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aishasully

@aishasully

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

dis was a bad one tish wat hav u dne poor themm damn kunwar was drunkk man tish not ny update oh mann i hope he regrts or both of demm plz update next soon

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21Neha21

@21Neha21

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

tish i just loved d twist...

u r an amazing writer...

n d update was so beautifully written...

pta nahi y but i have a feeling dat amar did all dat intentionally to make shakti go to new york to fulfil her dreams..as he knew she wil never leave him..

but i m waiting eagerly to know what gonna come next..

waiting for d update eagerly...