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Bibliobibulus

@Bibliobibulus

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#541

Awww.. That was sooo so so beautiful.. I was sniffling my way through it, with a smile on my face at the same time.. Arnav was just lovely, sweet and sensitive, and wonderful.. I love that Khushi was so contented and at peace.. The bond between father and son was beautiful to see.. Just loved the entire series.. So sad it's ended.. Sigh.. But on such a lovely note.. Thanks for the PM :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#542

Originally posted by: mollycoddle
simply fabulous.loved it

Thank You! :)

Glad you enjoyed it.

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#543

Originally posted by: meera30
You know I could almost cry that this is ending.

This epilogue was the best I could've asked for

And you know what was the best part? The relationship between Arnav and his baby son that you have so beautifully described. In many ways, his hurt from his own childhood can be mended only when he gets the opportunity to right everything in his own way with his children.

And Khushi's role as the bond that ties them all together as a family is just perfect

I will miss this SS.

This one is for you for writing it so well! 🤗

Awww! Really?! That means a lot!

Will it be too pathetic if I told you I had a lump in my throat ending it? I just didnt want to...I debated making it a full FF/ a string of OS' yada yada yada but then I decided that maybe those wont be such good ideas. :p

@Bold - Very true. I have tried to portray it here with his "very own demon fighter" part...and Khushi is the glue for it all and also without her, none of this would have been possible...she is the 'Hi' of 'ArHi' :)

Thank You so much! Glad you liked it! :)

And Thank You for being such a wonderful reader! :) 🤗

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aakriti

@aakriti120

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#544

heya

that was a really cute epilogue...

it was cute to see ayaan from a baby to a kid going to pre school...
arnav as a dotting father?i can only imagine him doing that..and he wanted to teach him at home himself..aww...

arnav khushi ayaan swing scene was really cute and touching especially the way he introduced him to to his grandparents..

arnav and khushi were awesome...loved the way you described their realtionship..

and i loved akshay too..i could imagine him being the big brother protecting the lil one..

will look forward for your future stories..

many many thanks for the pm..: ]

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..Kritz..

@..Kritz..

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#545

Even I didn't want it to end at all... I just wished you kept on writing about their happily ever after, it was so brilliant!!👏
I kept going AWWW all the time when Arnav either thought about Ayaan or interacted with him...it was so heart warming that I am truly falling short of words. An awesome closure👍🏼
Lol so Dr. Armaan managed a special mention here😛

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#546

Originally posted by: -_-harsh42
Moi place :D

*edits*

*Kaan pakadke maafi maang rahe hai, late reply dene ke liye..* 😳

Arnav!!!! I'll never, ever, EVER get enough of him!!
And Khushi?! classic example of a loving wife! The way she took care of Arnav's insecurity was fabulous!!
And Aynu??!! Such a cute name!!! 😃

The way you showed the bonding between the next generation of Raizadas was too good, Rae!! 😊

And finally, Armaan is friends with Aynu?! Moi loved that fact!!

Aisa update diya ki, hume bhi ab update karna hi padega!! 😛

As I said in the chat saara comment ek taraf, last ki line ek taraf! ;) :D *smirks*

And you get forgiven for the late reply too because of that! ;) :D

You liked 'Aynu'? It just came into my head! Lol! And I wanted to show that the Raizada bonding continues! :D

Thank You, Harshu, for being such a wonderful reader and friend listening to me rant and whine about this story! :)