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sRistee

@crazy44

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#531

m here !

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aww aww !! i read this update like 5 times already , and i still cant get enough!!😉

it was beautiful rae !! 😊

arnav and khusi they are the perfest set of couples !! just meant to be !

awww arnav , i am going crazy over him !! how can he so adorable 😍😍

and when he said "You will find so many new friends here! Socho ghar ke saare logon and uss Dr. Armaan ke ilaawa other new friends!" awww arnav sounded so jelous here😉 😉

RAE it was amazing !! purely magical !!

thank you so so much but writing this beautiful piece !!

and i am desperately waiting for your new work *dreamy *

thanks for the PM

*going back to re-read this story 😃

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#532

Nice end to the story. This would go down as one of my fav ffs on Arnav and Khushi. I really hope in the serial they would atleast show Arnav and Khushi have 10 percent of understanding that you have depicted here. Thanks for the pm.

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indy12

@indy12

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#533

absolutely wonderful ending! will miss this 😳

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Neha

@melovemayur

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#534

'And so its over...sniff sniff...I actually didnt want it to end at all!'

me too!! I love this story! n Ayaan is such a cutie pie!! n Arnav too!!

I love it when ArHi has a boy!! coz I always see a Arnav in him!!

Thanks Rae for this wonderful story n PM too :P

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#535

That was absolutely beautiful, Rae. The moments were wonderful. Well, I am speechless and I can't say anything else. I just wish it had not ended so soon.*sighs*

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#536

Awww... so so sweet.
I loved to hear Arnav's insecurities. And the strong bond between ArHi is simply beautiful

Yuks

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#537

Awww the end was superb. Arnav singh Raizada has really come a long way. He and waking up in the night , talking to the starts a really treat to watch on. Loved how Khusi made him understand to throw away his fear.
I like the way you showed Akshya and Ayan's bond just like Arnav and Anjali. Too cute..

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#538

Originally posted by: Psychedelic
Res!! :D

*edit*

Awww!! I'm floored! This was so cute!! :D

Thank you Rae for the nice long epilogue! :) Loved every bit of it.

And the tu tu main main of Arhi continues now they are fighting to give comfort to the other? And their eye talk!! Shows how much the relationship has changed. :D I've always loved the idea of a swing in that poolside. I think it was in Munchy's Spiral Staircase where I first saw a mention of the swing. :)

LOL When Arnav spoke about homeschooling Ayaan himself, I had this image in my head of a suave looking ASR fully suited with a bluetooth and laptop and a multicoloured book with ABC written in huge letters clutched in his hand! :P

The first day of school was no less than a bidaii scene! It was really really cute.

Thanks for the PM! :D looking forward to more FFs from you! :)

Thank You so much! :)

And Tu Tu Main Main ke bina ArHi ArHi kahan? ;) :D

@Bold - Hahahahaha! When I read this, I imagined the Arnav when he was giving the presentation before the hanky scene during the Swami track! SO HOT! :O <3

Glad you enjoyed it.

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appy

@appy_12

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#539

Oh Rae!!

I'm almost in tears rey! This was just so beautiful.. Can life be this perfect? Can Arnav be such a cute father? Can the Raizadas achieve this ever??

Okay, back to the real world from IPK land!

I loved it Rae, totally loved it! That is one cute family you've created there, and for that I bow to thee, lady!

I have no words Rae! Just beautiful. As cute as the baby Ayaan you've created, as beautiful as the Khushi we see everyday, and as satisfying as the rare ASR smirk we get to see! :P

Oh, and as awesome as you! :D

Loved it! I am sure.. No, I promise you.. I will read this SS again and again!! :D

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#540

I love you sooo much !!!
That was the cutest sweetest and the most amazing epilogue Ive ever read to a story...
And to say this , I dont know why..But something just tells me that Unbelievale just beat Hamesha to make its spot in the first place of my fav SS !!!
This was such a mushy mush and cute epilogue I felt like pulling everyone of the family's cheeks including even Lakshmi ji !! Hayeee the birth of Ayaan seems to have just made Arnav and Khushi mature to a totally unknown new level...And still their love for each other just increases and they are still the same people who fell insanely in love with each other.
Arnav and Khushi being the protective parents !! Hayeee I just cant stop coochy-cooing...Reminds me of so much of my cousin whom Ive seen growing up..And especially the part where Arnav doesnt want Ayaan to go to school because of the fact he may miss him !! Awww. !!!And the way Khushi comforts him with all the love in the world...And Akshay and Ayaan share such a sweet bond
Love was just brimming out through every word of this SS Rae !! This journey with you throughout the SS...I sooo love you I cant even express how thankful I am for you writing this one...
I loev you.You are one of the friends Id never ever wanna loose

Chalo in emo talks to band karke, is happy happy ending wale story ki khushi me ek jaadoo ki jhappi aur pappi ho jaaye ??🤗*Kisses Rae on her cheeks*mwaaah
You are just a total sweetooo