Married For Riyasat-Update-Chap 12-part II-Pg 89

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: mathli
nice yar

Thanks Mathili and welcome to DEK forum as it seems u have just joined today and this is your first comment.

We forumwasees promise u that u are going to love us 😊

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757315

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Posted: 13 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: shana0127

Well dear still thinking of the name for next as it is about Manyata's reaction in sane mind and Udayveers reaction to divorce papers and their further decision

Advice some justifiable English name yaar😕

dear all the words that can praise someones work is an understatement when it come to your work u are a great writer even great is an understatement .oh gosh i just cant think of a word in any language

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saneha85

@saneha85

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Posted: 13 years ago

#233

Amazing update. Yaar pix do update soon

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And how's about. Pyar to hona hi tha

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: saneha85
Amazing update. Yaar pix do update soon
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And how's about. Pyar to hona hi tha

dear I will update next weekend now, as I have really so less of brain and it takes all my brain bulbs to write this FF, and by the end of two updates in a weekend they all go fuse and it takes four weekdays of daily Manveer dose in DEK to replenish 😃

So pls wait till next weekend as I replace my fused brain bulbs to write again😆

As for Pyar to hona hi tha ,well dear I dont write that FF😕

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

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Posted: 13 years ago

#235

Shana it was amazing! Lovd ths chptrx u r amazing writer swty i hope manyata dnt regret spending night wid uday after she came to her senses i hope evry misundrstanding getx clear n0w i have to wait wh0le week to read an0thr update y cant u update twice or thrice a week:/

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Zainab

@--Zenu--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#236

Shana meri jaan ...what n update dear! In really don't have wrds to describe this...thus update made me feel everything as if I am really wtchin it on ma screen ... Loved it to d core ..even majnu was dere still it was a beautiful update yaar ...awaited 2 see Manyata's reaction ...thnks a lot 4 d pm & fulfilling ma wish * wink* love u tons pls pls update as soon as possible ..if possible pls update nxt chap tomorrow ...😃

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Prerna

@prernade

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Posted: 13 years ago

#237

wow...i am speechless..i had tears in my eyes as i read ur update...uv#s thoughts were expressed so beautifully..and manyata the poor idiot finally expresses her feelings..she has indeed become a woman now..i think all that separation from her love uv really matured her into emotionally becoming a woman aur physically toh he he he hamare prince udayveer ne baaki ka kaam tamam kar diya...

cant wait for ur next update..heading suggestion in english would be
Reflections and Repurcussions

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Mahibeejay

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Posted: 13 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: shana0127

<font color="#000099">Thanks dear ,
whatever it was , was a kind of patch up isn't it 😃</font>

Hahahahahaaa...it was sort of...but as u know Manyata is drunk so as soon as she came to her sense she might loose memory or can't remember what happend between them...and by Patch up I mean to expose Jay and Akash also to resolve the divorse issue...sorry I am just suggesting but it is all up to u...u know the plot and story much better than me... And story goes in which direction I am going to loved to read...so thank you...and please update soon dear...

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: prernade
wow...i am speechless..i had tears in my eyes as i read ur update...uv#s thoughts were expressed so beautifully..and manyata the poor idiot finally expresses her feelings..she has indeed become a woman now..i think all that separation from her love uv really matured her into emotionally becoming a woman aur physically toh he he he hamare prince udayveer ne baaki ka kaam tamam kar diya...

cant wait for ur next update..heading suggestion in english would be
Reflections and Repurcussions

Loved that bold one 😉

Wow dear u gave such a nice heading .I will have that name for next chapter muua to u 😊

thanks for solving my problem,at least now i don't have to use my little brain thinking for name 😃

Edited by shana0127 - 13 years ago

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DEK_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#240

thaattt was sooo amazing!i loved it!and read it multiple times already!!! and i simply can't wait for the next part..simply cannot!!i m thinking i m gonna stop reading this ff now..and will come back to it only after you have updated like 5 chapters!

and manyata confessed that she loves him..wow...now i hope that soon uday also convinces her tat she is not an item..she is HIS princess..