Married For Riyasat-Update-Chap 12-part II-Pg 89

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fia21

@fia21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: shana0127

Thanks Fia but why so shocked well the very chapter name indicated ,this was bound to happen.😉

i still feel like adding few more moments to it , and I will

As for weekend torture then yaar,I have so less of brain and so much of work,so pls yaar give me some time so that I may think and write some better plot

Lol, that's not shock. That's over the top excitement 😆😉
Well, it's perfect the way it is. But if you still feel like adding some more to it then go ahead, but do PM me when you do 😛
Awww I can understand. As I said,I am just crazy and hyper and love annoying the people that I love. I'd be waiting. Update whenever you can 😊

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BlueRobbin

@BlueRobbin

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Posted: 13 years ago

#252

⭐️Ah!!!!!!!!!!!!!

all the parts r soo amazing!!!!!!!!!!!👍🏼, someparts i was like😳😛

i really can't wait for the next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😊

Oh also want Uday to find out the it was not Manyatas fault, and that JAI AND AKASH had planned that to frame her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃

plz update soon😉, ur a Fabulous Writer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏

Edited by BlueRobbin - 13 years ago

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GrilledCheese

@GrilledCheese

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#253

great update!

glad manyata confessed..wondering what the repercussions are now!

hope that divorce doesn't happen somehow..

continue soon!

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-JEHAN-

@-JEHAN-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#254

amazing...brilliant work di...👏👏👏

and yeah thanks alot for ur so sweet PM...and sorry for quite late comment actually after i was waiting for ur update and when u updated i read it and i slept..😳so sorry for commenting quite late...so after reading for the forth time i am finally commenting...

loved ur update aloottt!!

i waited all night for ur update but it was worth waiting...

i love all the convo between manveer all lines manayta confession...lovely...

awesome wrok di...👏👏

continue soon...

will love to update the next parts...

i am so excited to read what gonna happen when uday will come to know about divorce papers...omg...but in this update ahaaa...uday was amazing...😉lolll...😆love him...

Edited by -JEHAN- - 13 years ago

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

Sparkler

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: -JEHAN-
amazing...brilliant work di...👏👏👏
and yeah thanks alot for ur so sweet PM...and sorry for quite late comment actually after i was waiting for ur update and when u updated i read it and i slept..😳so sorry for commenting quite late...so after reading for the forth time i am finally commenting...
loved ur update aloottt!!
i waited all night for ur update but it was worth waiting...
i love all the convo between manveer all lines manayta confession...lovely...
awesome wrok di...👏👏
continue soon...
will love to update the next parts...
i am so excited to read what gonna happen when uday will come to know about divorce papers...omg...but in this update ahaaa...uday was amazing...😉lolll...😆love him...

Thanks Jehan, it does not take much time to write my FF but this update was real messy one as I wanted to make it intimate still keep it clean .God I was really running out of refined and courteous words.

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-JEHAN-

@-JEHAN-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: shana0127

Thanks Jehan, it does not take much time to write my FF but this update was real messy one as I wanted to make it intimate still keep it clean .God I was really running out of refined and courteous words.

then let me tell u ,u did it...👏u did what u wanted to do...really 👏👏👏

that was intimate scene but u have awesomely kept it clean...by ur simple and refined word...

awesome di...and i love last lines the very last para of ur last update...loved it...u wrote it soo well i can feel their emotions...i am so addicted to ur ff...loved it...so next update on next sunday??

Edited by -JEHAN- - 13 years ago

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saneha85

@saneha85

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Posted: 13 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: -JEHAN-

then let me tell u ,u did it...👏u did what u wanted to do...really 👏👏👏
that was intimate scene but u have awesomely kept it clean...by ur simple and refined word...
awesome di...and i love last lines the very last para of ur last update...loved it...u wrote it soo well i can feel their emotions...i am so addicted to ur ff...loved it...so next update on next sunday??

hey great work done and thanks for ur pm :D

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

Sparkler

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: -JEHAN-

then let me tell u ,u did it...👏u did what u wanted to do...really 👏👏👏
that was intimate scene but u have awesomely kept it clean...by ur simple and refined word...
awesome di...and i love last lines the very last para of ur last update...loved it...u wrote it soo well i can feel their emotions...i am so addicted to ur ff...loved it...so next update on next sunday??

Friday ,Saturday, Sunday,I will try to update two chapters next week depending upon the plot.😊

Edited by shana0127 - 13 years ago