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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

tooo sweet. loved the thoughts after

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sun_shine_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Amazing piece of writing.

I have thoroughly enjoyed the story. Arnav missing Khushi's presence, Khushi punishing herself by not eating, he feeding her at the end - these scenes were depicted so beautifully.

Hope to read many more stories from you.

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Filmyshilmy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

they are so made for each other.

loved it.

Edited by mouramen - 13 years ago

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

that was a sweet story... loved imagining khushi, like a petulant 5 year old, refusing to eat... the two feeding each other was simply aww!

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Yuks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Thanks so much everyone for liking this fic! I dont really plan to continue. I intended for this to just be a stand-alone one-shot. A small glimpse into what could have been

Im so grateful to all you reviewers for your kind, kind words

Yuks

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Yuks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Thanks to

dknala, pinklillies, archie_79, Amanram, IshBin, sueheart, vimig, kanu_nvlkh, stargaze111, saarah96, rempy, mishtee123, manis, Suni, Archu61, sithu08, prabha75, hoopoe, arshi-ipkkndfan, budz, matilda123, vinayak123, Prasanna_dhanu, arjuhi_143, aayesha, nada_a, Hriju321, tingting, mz.brar, azizeh123, sval000, Arhiland, star_fan1, susams, barfi, chandana.s, anuramesh26, Arnav_Khushifan, pallavichadha, clover, ddee1001, crazy_pr, gudiya74, awww, random94, printy, Ashavi, SyedaFaiza, annab, ThreeDs, craziefan, swapnabshetty, diya09, sulochana90, khushi25, Guguminti, ramya90, coolgal49, Rihana2088, kashev, sejaldegadwala, nuts, mchandel, bindupoduval, lovelystar, sam88, Tinkers, ruby20, sidra786, pollypolly, napstermonster, meera30, rina25, melovemayur, pkaps, vidya.sanjay, srirao, freakybat, bhaktiii, coolie001, shagun-rocks, ...Doctor..., nancynair, devsum, ipkkndfan_29, abavi, neverbefore, Maddy1270, sun_shine_girl, swati-89, bluetaj, veenuasr, pikudika, -Stutz-, mishti_17, nikita_88, mommamia, rubinahansa, reyabear, mj_applehead, mandy15, S.Stephy, Lily2011, greenarrow, karishma125, Bunny_Bear, zafi, lara3110, arsh_sp, Pearl_mystic, darksydeangel, -Zara-, monsi08, zaniax, LyssaPie, areeba_blossom, GoGreen, hindu4lyf, divya4salmanyk, Prasanthi, princessunara, AngelTeen, Roark, -MaanKiPari-, mrk-1, mollycoddle, abisamratgunjan,

Everyone who liked!

Also to everyone who commented. I will reply to comments soon

Yuks

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SimmyOwais

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

loved it please add as a buddy

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Yuks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: devsum
sincerely hope u continue this until Arnav finds out the truth.

Thank you! I actually am intending this to be a stand-alone one shot.
I dont see where I could take the story and the current track is too jumbled to unravel.

Yuks