OS: Punishment

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

sincerely hope u continue this until Arnav finds out the truth.

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SereneLady

@SereneLady

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

Very cute 😳.. do continue if u feel like

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

Awww! How I wish this happened on the show!

But no both of them will act like brainless chickens. *BANGS HEAD ON KEYBOARD* :p

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rukuswasthika

@rukuswasthika

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

nice.do continue if u wish and i would be eager to read

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coolie001

@coolie001

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

It is a really gud one ...😊

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

Hay Yuks it's as good as usual!1 aahh it's ur 1st ArHi OS but i anyway loved all ur previous stuff on the other forum!.

keep writing more here too!!:D

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Neha

@melovemayur

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

Typical Khushi!! But nowadays she is pictured as a cartoon character in the show!!

Hmmm...Nice OS :)

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aishwarya

@09cutie

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

plzzz continue its very nice😊

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

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Very very well written. I could totally imagine the whole thing happening right in front of me.

I wonder why the CVs couldn't pursue the track of a little awkwardness between them before the next mis-understanding erupts. If they had a scene like this, it would be have been so much more powerful than resuming the Swami drama again

Or maybe they have something saucier planned.

Extremely well written! Loved reading it!

Edited by meera30 - 13 years ago