Arhi~I Want You!~ FF *Thread 2*

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rockinggirl5

@rockinggirl5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#351

I loved the update, god I want to kill this Sheena, I can't wait to read the next part. Please continue soon.

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desicurry

@desicurry

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Posted: 13 years ago

#352

wow so lovely

i like racing ur story

pls keep updating :)

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Mrs.Varun Dhawan <3

@-chamkilli-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#353

hey nadiaa i'm terribly sorry i couldn't comment sooner sorry

wow two updates in one day,superb i'm so happy yay and both were beyond this world no joke

okay so i loved both these update as usual.now back to the story for chapter 19 so cute when khushi said "Who can stay under this monster like exterior hides a sweet lovable person". She smiled and pushed his two strands of hair back from his forehead.omg now even she finds him attractive and cute,and pushed the strands of hair back like how he usually does how sweet.it was beyond hilarious when arnav was cursing and keep repeating bloody hell or well actually anything with bloody in it.seems like he uses a new word in this story like he usually says what the haha.you are so amazing nadiaa and creative love all the dialogues.i felt so bad when khushi was going home instead of going for lunch w/ ranveer then poor ranveer said "Khushi what about our lunch today". Khushi had completely forgotten she realised arnav was listening to their conversation even though he was on the phone.i thought this was the dialogue of the day when khushi said "Uh sorry Ranveer...I am really tired because me and sir got locked in yesterday all night...sorry brother maybe next time"? poor ranveer he was wondering where did bhai come from.anyone would be heart-broken,but serves him right for flirting w/ asr's gal.wait i think asr forgot to smirk when he heard that.wow now asr is forgetting things too well that is a first.so wait does sonu and anjali live in the same flat since both are dating and go to the same university.how stupid can this anjali get if sonu were to give you the bracelet as a gift he would long back wouldn't he and he wouldn't do that because he likes only taking money from her and not giving gifts.it is definitely a girl's he might be dating or sia's like another if (India-forum) member said.looks like aman has two jobs now one asr's manager and ranveer's adviser.aman is the best adviser ever he give good advise like when he said "Well if that is the case Ranveer you should back off...because if ASR is interested in her , he won't look down on you favourably.." yes exactly you have to back off because khushi sirf aur sirf asr ki girl hai.she is off limits hehe.so funny he ran off before khushi could reply back (ranveer) i can not believe Sheena was flirting w/ asr right in front of khushi.i can not believe when Sheena kissed on his cheek and hugged him,then asr saw khushi fuming and pouting seeing the scene in front of her and asr thought of playing along.even though this helps a bit realize her feelings but it was so heart wrenching seeing khushi like this.i can't believe asr when he said "Sheena what a pleasant surprise...we haven't met in years". He grabbed her seat and asked her to sit down. "Khushi go and get two coffees and some cakes and biscuits". Khushi made her mouth in an O and looked on shocked."Khushi close your mouth and go". god asr she isn't a waiter you know, send aman or someone.love it when khushi said chi chi chi i so can imagine how saying that haha.it was so sweet when asr say sheena flirting w/ him and saw khushi back and feeling left out and uncomfortable and he decided to change the subject so sweet of him.i so hate sheen especially when she said "ASR I regret my decision to break up with you it was the worst mistake I made...we were good together".

Khushi began fuming and getting all these images of them together. Her eyes got filled up with uncontrollable tears. i felt like crying my eyes out when khushi was crying.poor khushi sheena prepare to die.then asr said "Yah whatever! Anyway lets talk business".thank you god asr you had said this or else i would be bashing him to death i think i'm not the only one to think this.again why had she kiss him for the millionth time when leaving gggr.that is right khushi never let the guy know you get affected or jealous or else they will take advantage of it.so sad asr was hurt that khushi is heart-broken.he really does love her hopefully she will realize it before it is too late i'm joking(said it the way the man in housefull in in a Australian accent).The precap is scary sheena tries to seduce arnav,but i know arnav will never get in bed w/ her or anyone, especially because i read the next chapter already hehe.sheena here some amazing advice get a life and never throw yourself on someone that just makes you look desperate.clearly asr is not interested in you.phenomenal update nadiaa loved it,do continue soon just beyond supreme i am speechless that is how much i love it.you do just an amazing job portraying everyone and all situations.thank you so much for the pm hope you liked my comment.sorry i don't think i can write a long comment for part 20 sorry i am just so exhausted.you wrote such a sweet chapter that to make my day even more sweeter i ate a strawberry cake and wrote this comment/passage.have a wonderful day. oh before i forget when i read chapter 19 and waiting to read chapter 20 this was my expressions

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Mrs.Varun Dhawan <3

@-chamkilli-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#354

so wait msk is gonna come awesome nadiaa

Originally posted by: Mahi-Maan

WOWWW BABY YOU STILL REMEMBERED ABOUT MSK???👏

Sometimes I wanna move the story real fast and when i think i decide it will look odd so i stop...I am excited about MSK phase but sorry we in 2nd phase yet and he will come in 4th

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Mrs.Varun Dhawan <3

@-chamkilli-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#355

hey nadiaa i am terribly sorry as i said i can't comment too much

so points yes ok loved it overall as usual i loved it to bits.your story has now became my addiction to read more and i can't get enough omg.

ok i cant believe sheena can go this low yuck makes me wanna puke

so adorable when arhi danced so sweet luv it.i can't believe sonu he has a gf already and now he is going after his gf bff yuck

cant believe arnav called khushi as his gf awesome.omg i swear i now will kill sheena

if arnav gets hurt as it says in the precap sheena will send goons to hurt arnav

maybe he will be hurt and hospitalized and then khushi will cry and think arnav is sleeping and blurt

her feelings out and he will listen or he will kick butts and not get hurt at all you never know

anyways i feel to strangle her and i have always hated bipasha basu to the core now i hate her even more grrr no offense to anyone who is a fan to her

i just loved the update

do continue soon thank you so much for the pm

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Romi

@aqsa1

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#356

I started to read your story today and I am addicted. It is awesome. I hope Khushi realizes that she has to give up her heart one day or another to Arnav.( She isn't admitting it) I hope you continue soon.

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-Emma.K-

@-Emma.K-

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#357

I LOVE THIS! Everyday, I come home from school hoping that you have updated the story, cause it's just so amazing!! 😃 Please keep up the brilliant work, you're an excellent writer!👏

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Aarti

@aartipartyy

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#358

Wow, Loved the update!!!!!!!! :D

Update soon please :)

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Vika

@vikadesigirl

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#359

Nice updates... so He called her his GF in front of whole lot of crowd.. not liking sheena dear... but without even knowing she will bring arhi closer., well more like khushi.. realizing that she is love with him.. uh-oh the precap.. looks daring...

thank u for the PM and loving ur rapid updates...