OS: Burning in your Love (Part 2 & 3 Links)

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Ishrafan11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

Wow that was amazing loved it

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sooryalekshmi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

GOOD WORK.
UPDATE SOON.
PLZ PM ME

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littlemoi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

This is AAMAAZZING!! Absolutely love the way you have written the OS!! Arnav and Khushi's emotions and the confession were just perfectly portrayed!!

Please continue soon!!

Please add me to your pm list!!

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UltimateBarun

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

Lovely!!! Specially what their hearts spoke I had tears in my eyes!! this will be awesome if they show somethig like this!!! LUV U!

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Japonica

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

This is such a lovely story, Smitar. The first 2 chapters were superb in the way you describe how each visualises the emptiness, meaninglessness and the futility of a life that goes on but without the presence of the other in it. It was very poignant and moving
Look forward to the whole wedding now.

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Stapleton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#166

nice update...

thanks 4 d pm

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-FarwiiDobaara-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

Amazing updatez <33 Love emm (=

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sinilakshmy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#168

i hope they both can't live separately,arnave can't sleep with out seeing kushi for one day also,then after six months he will make another contract to stay together.we hope for the best

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MarkZingerBurgr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#169

just read the first part of it. awww wat a heart wrenching one. the emotions of arhi were described in an excellent way. exceptional creation of ur work. hatts off to u. thnx a lot for the pm.

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MarkZingerBurgr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#170

loved arnav's heart. superb and a very touchy OS. arhi's trail of thought was amazing. both are not in a position to leave each other. awww poor ones. thank u sooo much for the pm.