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LAKSHMI

@barunslakku

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

nice..plz do continue..loved it..
watiing for the next update

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roldc

@roldc

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Please please continue. That was beautifully written and I am glad that Arnav is beginning to question Khushi's motives and the tender moments that they shared on Holi. I hope the CVs start building the story on these lines soon.😉

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zafi

@zafi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Awesome.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Loved it.

Looking forward to the next update.

Thanks.😃

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Lovely concept, I love that Arnav's mind is moving in the right direction.

Please continue. I would live to read more.

Thank you for the PM.

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Great start wonder how he is going to try and find out the truth. Loving reading his thought. Can't wait for the next update.

Thanks for the pm.

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Suchi

@ChitraF

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Great start.. please do continue..

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win7

@win7

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

love, love, love and love.😛Arnav here has brains and common sense and he has put on his thinking cap.

Thank you.

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SJPattinson

@SJPattinson

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Very nice.

Finally Arnav is thinking.

Please do continue.

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angellovergirl

@angellovergirl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

definitely want the next part!

thanks for the pm

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anuramesh26

@anuramesh26

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

thank god! or thanks to you ASR is thinking!! You must be kidding u dont finish it off like that - "happily ever after" 😒

No way! until u elaborate on how the mu got cleared! (anyway for the actual mu to clear we have to wait until the IPL is over )

PLEASE PLEASE!

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