Swaron SS: it's about time - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanx for the epilogue cause we really love your SS...Swayam lying on Sharon's lap was really sweet and I can't wait to see the gang's reaction when SwaRon announce that they are together !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Heyyy .. I am SO sorry for commenting ..THIS late .. the last chapter ... taht had to be the most perfect SwaRon confession ever .. got a lil carried away these two .. ☺️ .. err ... but they really seem to be liking each other .. so that fits ... 😳 .. nothing seemed OTT or forced ..Just that it was about time .. so it all fell into place .. I love the way u portray SwaRon .. just the way Ive visualised them .. Both stubborn idiots , irrevocably in love 😳


And YAYYY Epilogueee u are continuinggg .. eeep 😳 I love the bit where he is lying down with his head in her lap .. sighh .. so beautiful these two .. plz do PM me 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautifully written please update soon and safest place is swayam's bedroom ..😉 Love the way you have shown Swayam and Sharon in your FF...please continue writing and do PM me :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey that was awesome.
finally they are gonna tell deir frnds.
plz pm me on ur next update.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Epilogue

Part 2

She was pacing in the rehearsal hall with nervous agitation.

They had thought about telling their friends. What they didn't think about was how on earth they were going to break the news to them. It is driving me crazy!

She almost felt him this time before she saw him.

She turned around and saw him standing there, smiling at her.

And involuntarily, she thought about what had happened the last time they were together here.

And from the look on his face, he was thinking about it too.

She could feel her cheeks getting hot.

"Hey." He said.

She almost ran into his arms, as if being close to him now would make up for all the time she had tried to run away from him.

"Hey!" she mumbled into his chest.

"Why so tensed?" he asked, whispering softly into her hair.

She looked up into his eyes and sighed.

"Because I have no idea how are we going to tell them about us!" she said.

"Don't worry, sweetheart! Like you said! We will dump it on them!" he said unruffled.

"I hope it's as easy as it sounds!" she said.

"If we do it together it will be. Trust me." He said, kissing her on her forehead.

They stood like that, in each other's arms, for a while, when suddenly they heard footsteps coming in their direction. They sprang apart and tried to look nonchalant.

"So guys, what's up?" asked Rey, as all of them entered the hall.

"Yeah, what's the important news?" asked Vicky.

"Um….I have some news….I mean we have some news….actually…um…what I wanted to say….I mean what we wanted to say is that…um…..." she stammered, uncontrollably.

Thankfully, he cut in before she could say anything else.

"We are together now."

Wow! He really did dump it on them! She thought.

For a moment, there was pin-drop silence.

And then Rey voiced the question that was on everybody's mind.

"As in together, together? For real?"

"Yes" she confirmed.

There was another round of pin-drop silence.

And all at once, everybody started talking.

"Woohoo! Finally……"

"We have been waiting for it for so long…….!"

"I know! It's about time……"

"I knew it! I knew it all along….."

When their excitement somewhat subsided, they congratulated them and of course pulled their leg a bit. So much so that when they were done, even Swayam could be seen blushing.

He looks so damn cute when he blushes! She thought dreamily.

"Huh-hmm….." said Tanni, clearing her throat "Bhabhi! You have your whole life ahead of you to stare at him oh-so lovingly!"

She turned red like a tomato. But not the one to take that sitting down, she said in a falsely sweet voice-

"Taani?"

"Yes?"

"You are still not allowed to call me Bhabhi!" she shouted.

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This is really the END!

Edited by tanha_swaron - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
HAHAHA he actually dumped the news on them. Loved this SS. Although i wish you would not have finished it but still loved the ending . And judging by last dialogue i think Taani and Sharon relationship would also be one hell of a ride. Awesome work. Do PM me if you write any other SwaRon FF.
Edited by marauder - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Haha,Swayam actually 'dumped' it on them,didn't he?
Aww,that was a nice ending sweets.
But...do you REALLY have to end this??:((
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Posted: 13 years ago
this was awesome one.
It was a great end .
]Lovely one.
thanks for the pm.

Continue writing.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sakina-

Haha,Swayam actually 'dumped' it on them,didn't he?

Aww,that was a nice ending sweets.
But...do you REALLY have to end this??:((


Unfortunately, I really do have to end this.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tanha_swaron


Unfortunately, I really do have to end this.

And WHY so?😭😭

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