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meenaluma

@meenaluma

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#361

awesome update

loved it

so much of emotions

u cant leave it like this

cant wait for next part

pls continue soon

Edited by meenaluma - 13 years ago

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#362

That was one hell of an update! Beautiful!

She left him before him knowing the truth. Payal's words were so perfect!

Even if he stays with you, it will be out of guilt, not out of love...

But who knows? Maybe he would have stayed for love. But yeah, leaving was the best option she has. And Payal - she had been battling her own world. What was the matter between her and Akash? I mean, that can even be irrelevant in context of this story, or maybe not - but it hurt to read about that anyway.

And I liked this Yash. He seems like a great guy. But yep - I know that Khushi is not married to him! Am I right? And when Arnav finds this out; especially about Jiya being his daughter and that Khushi had kept it from him - he is going to kill her! Even with her reasons to keep the truth from him, Khushi is hurting his feelings deep!

I hope everything goes right!

Beautiful update! Waiting for more!

Edited by Pearl_mystic - 13 years ago

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Abi

@PepsiGirl101

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#363

AWWW!

The pain of Arnav's heart touched me deeply.

The broken hope and love in Khushi brought me to my knees.

But the tears dropped from me when Arnav and Khushi were lost in each others memories.

Beautiful update, I loved it.

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spurthi

@spoorthi

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#364

lyraa i was waiting for u to update this ff😊
omg!!!! its simply awesome
loved the way u have written it
very emotional
hope there is no love triangle
plz continue and update soon
thanks for the pm

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nims6

@nims6

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#365

i feel their pain through your words...poor souls...even though they love each other they cant be together...its beautifully written,,,...

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ChocoBloc_12

@ChocoBloc_12

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#366

I've just read all three chapters now :)

I'm so emotional after reading it, honestly each update was written beautifully, each word had depth an feeling to it... each emotion, whether it being pain, regret, loneliness, longing...it was depicted so well,,..i felt every emotion with your words...

It's a different concept...and it has so much mystery in it...so much questions...honestly my mind is going haywire with predictions lol

The pain in Arnav breaks my heart, he feels rejected and so much regret, i'm just really excited to see how this story develops... :)

Well you've got me hooked to this...i'm a sucker for angst filled updates LOL

Thanks for the PM :)

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Yellow.

@Yellow.

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#367

wowww this is so beautiful 👏

arnav's pain seeing khushi's state and thinking about her accident was described perfectly...got to see glimpse of the past. payal was very right every relationship should have trust also not only love and that was missing from arnav and khushi's life...

loved the father daughter interaction.. jiya is so cute... she dried his hair and was talking everything about her and already had taken a promise from her dad that he has to tour her once rain stops...

so is it yash who saved khushi from that near accident after she left hospital in the past??? from your note i could think may be he is her guardian, friend 😕

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646714

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#368

😛👏...amazing writing...i luvd it..tanx 4 pm😉

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s0n00smi

@s0n00smi

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#369

nice... :)

we waited for this update long ...

Jiya is M. Ahuja s daughter ?😊

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#370

Yash is nt khushi's husband..so no love-triangle..gr8! So no fear of breakin hearts..
frm d FBs n present dscription Yash seems to b a nyc guy..n he must b rich too..xplains BMW n luxurious cottage..
Jiya is a swthrt..she's so cute..
From d FBs its evident dat both payal n khushi had to suffer wid no fault of theirs..
I wud prefer Khushi to nvr 4gv him..d cnsequences of wat he dd is dat nw khushi's on a wheelchair😔
bt arnav seemingly is suffering and regreting.."It is hard to wait for something when you know it's already missed.. it is harder to give up something when that is all you live for...''---true heart wrenching lines..life cn b so unbelievably cruel..
Tears were all he had left. Tears, pain and memories.--struck my heart hard..such painful words..