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Posted: 13 years ago
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Pls translate into english , dying to read it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb os.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
That was very interesting.
Wow, Khushi has a brother? How interesting.
Loved it.
Can't wait to read more.
Thanks.😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really really nyc loved it a lot can u plz pm me further wen u update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏 Please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanx alot for liking gals 😊
n a hearty sorry gals coz i can't translate it 😔 i get very few time to write a update and i would have written it in english but the story demands hindi language but i would definitely try to work on it... hope u all will understand 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing fanfic! keeps to the reality of the characters!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was the next day OE the accident 😔 everyone was very sad seeing the bubbly and chirpy Khusi lying in a hospital bed like a vegetable.
After the doctor have said about the 12 hours first he was very hopefull but as the time started passing the guilt of his deeds started covering him. everytime he sees his recovery less wife he would remember the ruthless things he have done to her. his every cruel move was flashing infront of his eyes 😭. 5 hours had passed already like hell but...khusi had not even moved her eye balls...Arnav was loosing his hope...
Arnav:Khusi...i know i have been a freak to you.. i have hurt u alot... tum mujhsey bohot naraz ho na??aur hona v chahiye mujh jese pati se khush vala kaun ho sakta he but kya kare jaisa v hun hoon toh tumharah hi pati na...aur pata he meri mom kya kehti thi...woh kehti thi k ek married life thavi aachi hoti he jab pati patni apne har gam ko ek dusre se bate...i know what u must be thinking now... yehi na k mein toh tumse kavi thk se baat toh nahi karta tha toh apni feelings share karna toh dur ki bat he...but AAb yesa nahi hoga...i love u khusi mein tumse bohot pyaar karta hoon...mein sab kuch thk kardunga infact sab kuch thk ho chuka he..aab hum khusi khusi rahenge aur bohot sare bacche peda karenge...
Anjali let out a soft gigle she had been observing his then silent brother now taking so much to his then chirpy wife who was now so silent...she had been praying for khusi as she know that if something wrong would happen then her chote will be shattered 😭
in a way she was blaming herself as well for being the reason for so much pain in her chote's n khusi's life...so for them she had decided to be strong... now she have determined to be the strength of her family not the weakness 😊

8 hours have passed but still no recovery of khusi😭
Edited by Rocxy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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don't know what's happening...me update from mobile so please bear with my mistakes 😊 remaini part of part 3 is here 😊 please do like and comment 😳


seeing his motionless wife Arnav lost it and started shouting


Arnav: ENOUGH ENOUGH...BOHOT HOGAYA...I CAN'T TOLERATE IT NOW...I AGREE THAT I AM BAD AND DAT I AM AT FAULT BUT MERI ITNI GALTI KI TUM MUJHEY ITNI BADI SAJA NAHI DESAKTI SAMJHI TUM...[:X]
TUM MUJHEY CHODKAR NAHI JAAOGI...(he was now holding khusi in her arms)

listening Arnav's sudden outburst everyone gathered in the room... Anji was trying to hold and console him

Anjali:chote...chote ...hamari taraf dekhiye...kuch nahi hoga khusi g ko kuch v nahi thodi hi der mein sab kuch thk hojayega..kuch hi der mein woh uth jayengi aur sab se pehle jaise baat karne lag jayengi...bas kuch der aur chote...

Arnav : NO DI...NO...BOHOT NARAJ HOGAYI HEH WOH MUJHSE...MENE USKE SATH BOHOT BURA KIYA NA TOH WOH MUJHEY CHODKEY JANA CHAHTI HEY...😭


NANI: nahi chote yesa nahi kehte...kuch nahi hoga khusi bitiya ko...woh tkh hojayengi chote...apki khatir...apke pyaar k khatir unhe thk hona hi padega...

seeing the great ASR in such helpless condition everyone had tears in their eyes...

Arnav was feeling dizzy... he gathered all his strength to raise himself on his feet and went towards his quite wife ...

Arnav:did you hear khusi...tumhe mere liye...hamare pyaar k liye thk hona hi padega...(and then he fainted in his wife's arms )
everyone panicked

Aakash:i think bhai ka sugar level drop hogaya heh...

a pair a unknown eyes was observing the situation very carefull from a distance...any guesses who he can be???
phew!!! finally part 3 updated...please share your views as comments... would love to read them 😊
Edited by Rocxy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome OS - Loved all the parts.👏 Please continue and PM me.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was just awsuuum dear...pliiiz cud u pm me wen u update as i would love to read more of your work...thnx

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