SS: PAYING FOR HIS DEEDS very imp note @ page 48

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OK I HAD ENUF of khusi bein dat much gawar n arnav misbehaving so much😡... so in this OS khusi is not dat much gawar n there is a big secret abt her past...[DIV]😊

Arnav was now aware of the real truth...but he was now more stressed out coz khusi hated him alot and it was all bcoz of his deeds...as ARNAV is ARNAV so he didnt say sorry to khusi although he is extremely guilty but his ego wasnt letting him go down...on the othr hand khusi knows nothng abt arnav knowin half n full truth...

Arnav was back from office and today he had sum plans in his mind to woo his angry wife😳 but destiny had sumthng else fo them...😲
When he entered the house...horror struck his face by the sight infront of him...Anjali was drowned in tears naani n maami were trying to hold her...

Arnav:What the...di..
kya huwa??
naani: chote ...aacha huwa ki aap aagaye..woo damadgi
maami: aare sasu maa...woh kamina shyam boliye...
nani : chote...woh kamina shyam hamari anjali bitiya ko dhokha diye rahe...wooo toh insaan kehlane k laayak vi nahi...

Arnav :tell me clearly naani kya huwa...

Maami :hum batawat he arnav bitwa...woo bloody shaam...aaj aachanat se aaye rahe aur kahe ki woo humari Anjali bitiya ko pyaar toh ka pasand tak nahi karte...woo toh ush phati sari...matbal khusi bahuriya ko pyaar kare rahe...khusi bohot roye rahi...lekin woo kamina jabarjasti unko bandook k taak par rakhke terrace par legaye...bitwa hum log police ko phone kardiye he...par bitwa uss ke sar par bloog sawar k bitwa kahi koi...accident na hojaye...

After hearing dat Arnav ran for his poor life towards the terrace...

at terrace

Shyaam;kyun khusi ji kyun...hum aap se itna pyaar karte he aur aap...

Khusi:(wid disgusted look) pyaar...pyaar ka matlab vi jaante he aap...aap jese insaan k mooh se pyaar jesa pawitra sabd sova nahi deta...aare jis insaan ne aapni itni pyaar biwi jo aapko bhagwaan ka darja dete hein...unse hamdardi tak na kar paye woh insaan pyaar ki baat kar raha he...

Shyaam :khusi ji hamne rani saheba se kavi vi pyaar nahi kiya..

Khusi :toh fir baccha...wese hum aap jese insaan se ye sab kyun keh rahe hein..
aur chahe jo vi ho...hum aap se kavi pyaar nahi karenge kyunki hum sirf aur sirf Arnav ji se pyaar karte hein...

Shyaam :KHUSI...

Khusi:chillane se sacchayi nahi badal jayegi Shyaam Manohar Jha...

Arnav :khusi...

khusi :Arnav ji...

Arnav :Shyaam khusi ka haath chodo...

Shyam : tch tch..nahi saale sahab aab ye hath toh hum marne k bad hi chodenge...

Arnav :SHYAAM

Shyam :khusi ji aap keh rahi thi na ki hame pyaar ka matlab pata nahi...bhai toh aab sabit karte hein...humne suna hein ki pyaar karne wale saath jite he aur saath marte vi he...ye zaalim duniya hume saath jine toh hatgis nahi degi toh...(wid dat he jumped from terrace pulling khusi along wid him)

Khusi :ARNAV JIII...

Arnav:KHUSIII...




so gals i re edited...hehe...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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WELL I WOULD LIKE TO REQUEST U ALL TO SHOW UR REVIEWS IN D FORM OF COMMENTS...
I WOULD LOVE TO READ THEM
I M NOT PROMISING FO DAILY UPDATES BUT WOULD LIKE TO SAY DAT I WULD TRY MY BEST TO SATISFY U ALL😃⭐️

fo part 2 plz scroll down...😃 part 16-page 36
part 3 in two part at page no 3... part 17 -page 40
part 4-page 5 part 18 -page 43
part 5- page 6 PART 19 -PAGE 45
part 6- page 10
part 7- page 13
part 8-page 15
part 9-page 17
part 10-page 19
part 11-page 22
note - page 23
part 12-page 25
part13-page 27
part 14-page 30
part 15-page 33
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesomeee, u left it on a very crucial point 😲 continue soon plzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OK U HAV 2 continue!
It's awesome! Plz plz!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice... thank god that everyone came to know abt shyam's truth... but OMG! shyam pulled khushi along when he was jumping... hope arnav can save khushi just in time... can't wait to know what happened to khushi! please update soon! very eager to know what happen to khushi!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnx gals i hd written part 2 as well but it got deleted just now😭
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ok part 2 will be here
arnav immediately ran downwards only to find his khuisi in swimming pool filled wid blood...her blood...he picked her up n started patting her cheeks...all her memories were flasinh infront of his eyes..the way c used to laugh..talk...tease...dance...drool...fight..what the...what was he thnking...why used to...its will..both of them will after she'll be ok...
aakash informed him adt d ambulance's arrival...the journey frm RM to hosp was filled wid khusi's memo fo every1
every1 was praying fo her...
she was nw taken to OT and operation had started...
now both the gupta's n raizada's were there.
6 hours had passed bt still no news abt khusi
every one was bg cryin..consolin...n prayin...
only 1 man was burning...shoutin and crying silently...ARNAV
Anjali hv arrived there she was fine now...she had decided dat she'll nt cry fo such a creep...who neva valued her emotions...
she went towards arnav n put her hand on his shoulder...
anjali:chotte..
he culdnt take it ne more n hugged her n started cryin...
anjali:nahi chotte nahi...mat royiye...aapko toh unke liye aur mazboot hona he...khusi ji ko kuch nahi hoga...aache logo k sath kuch bura nahi hosakta...
suddenly payal gasped and rushed towards garima...
payal:(still sobbin) amma hum kartik baiya ko kya kahenge...kese batayenge khusi k baare mein...humne toh unhe khusi k shaadi k baareme v nahi bataya...aur abb ye sab...woh toot jayenge amma...unhone kitne veswaas k saath khusi ko hume soapa tha...hum uska khayal nahi rakh paye...amma hum kartik bhaiya ka samna kese karenge...
garima was too much shocked to reply
very1 was too confused to comment...
maami:hello hi bie bie...ye khoon vari taan...ye naya characterwa kartik kaun he...
befo payal culs say nethng doctor came out...
arnav ran towards him..
arnav:docter how is she...woh thk toh hojayegi nah.?
docter:Mr.Raizada aapke wife ko sir pe bohot gehri chot aayi he..hum se jo ban sakta thah wo humne kiya he...baki 12 hrs unke liye bohot critical he..aagar unhone ye 12 hrs paar kar liye tabhi hum kuch kar payenge...
precap:khusi ko hosh aagaya he...👏
hey dearies thnx fo reading...the next part will be very soon...depending upon the responce frm u all😃😆😆
Edited by Rocxy - 13 years ago
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plz plz not only lyks i want comments as we...😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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again a amazing update 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Can you add the English translations for part 1 and 2
Please update soon

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