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Krati Choudhary

@kittu_arsha

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#181

Beautifully written ! :)

how you potrayes Kriya"s feelings ws amazing !

On a whole, Loved it !

Ps: Updated aftr Ages..just like mine :P

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Sanj

@-Sanj-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#182

Awsome Update...Loved it...

First Part of the Update Was Hawt...

Rey is feeling guilty...what he done with Kria...

Hope they Confessed soon...

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esha

@ArShaAngels

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#183

awesome updte...

luved it...

thnx for the pm...

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#184

Unique concept first of all...
N rey angry young man image doesnt suits him... I mean coz of one girl.. He hates evry gal on dis earth... Naaayansafi h ye:p
Poor kria.. Her first night..ahh..
N he forced homself on kria.. Hadd ae mtlb.. Ya toh baat e na kro agr baat kro toh itna.. Tht samne vala chup ho jaye..
Bt glad tht atleast he has time to care a bit fr her..
M luvin swaron.. Cuttooo...
Alas.. They r on one bed though wid faces opp. Bt progress ho ri h.. Hehe gd gd!!
Hmm.. Waitin to c hw l they become one n hw love wud find d way to swaron..
Eee :)

N thnx for d PM!

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#185

awsomely writen
its was really intense n emotional part
bt i love da chapter alot
beautifully potrayed dere feelings

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raina

@--RAINA--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#186

awsome update...
Lykd it...
Thankx 4 d pm
update soon

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varsha komuravelli

@kvarsha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#187

awesome updatee...

thnx 4 pm😃

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Snigdha

@Arsha1994

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#188

Awesum yaar
aftr so long
u ppl rock yaar
luvd d updt
it ws amazing d way u exprssd der feelings

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#189

Was waiting 4 this to be updated...

Amazing part guys

loved it to the core...

Thanx 4 d pm

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#190

Whoa . . . . Updated 🥳
am I dreaming? 😆
kitna mast sequence tha . . . . Kaash present me chal rha hota
effect of rain . . . . . Wet kriya= se*y 😉
how could he control . . . Kabhi to emotions foot foot ke nikalne hi they ☺️
gosh . . . . . He's wild 😈
damn . . . . Those bangles had to make it worse 😭
atleast he's guilty . . . . 😳
Inka kuch nhi ho sakta kya? 😔
dobara bhi baarish me khade hai dono . . . . Fir bhi koi farq nhi pada