MG ff 'BE INTEHAH' teaser on 27,update nxt mnth - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

134

Views

25.5k

Users

48

Likes

745

Frequent Posters

Infinity. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#31
Happy B'day dear...


Superb update
loved it..

waiting 4 nxt
cont.soon

thankx for pm

vrinda22 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 13 years ago
#32
loved it..bichari ..maan kissed scarf..so she did not take it back from him..
AliaSharma thumbnail
Engager Level 2 Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#33

HAPPY BIRTHDAY 🥳🥳



and about update...
loved it... 😳
cont. soon.. 😊

Edited by AliaSharma - 13 years ago
spvd thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#34
till part 9
awesome...
Geet is such a bubbly naughty girl...
cont soon dear...
Tarina.R.Totini thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#35
THANKS FOR ALL OF UR WISHES AND COMMENTS LOVE U ALL...


ND SPCL THANKS 2 VALLI22 4 MAKING ME UNDRSTAND HYPRLINK ...THANK U SWEETY...






😳PART 10😳


In principal's room...


Principal " maan ...i knw ravi for many years ...Tht's why he has trusted me wid ur security reasons...& i hav
nvr seen him so mch worried for anyone..."


He paused & again said " Not evn for his own son...u mst be vry important for him... "


Maan ws jst staring at nowhr through this conversation...He's been many times through this "type" of conversation
& it was nothg new 2 him...


Principal continued " i don't knw why ur security is so mch important 2 him bt i hav given my word 2 him tht u'l b alwaysss safe in cllg...
& i m a man of my words"


Maan loked at Princi nd nodded in affirmative...


Princi continued " so i'l b taking the responsibillities of ur security in cllg...
In this cllg there'l alwayz be sum guards at the gate nd no1 who id nt assosiated wid the cllg or it's puposes r nt at all allowed here...
So u r safe here...Whn there'l b any function held in here there'l b sum spcl arrangemnt 4 ur security...
So u don't worry at all...
If u go out during the cllg hour u hav 2 get my permission 1st.."


Maan murmmered under his breath... "ghar kya kam jail tha ab cllg bhi jail bana dia...
aur yeh toh pakka ravi sir ka kum k mele me bichra hua bhai lagta hai"


Princi looked at Maan seriously saying " tum ne kuch kaha ...???"


Maan shook his head in negative nd said... " plzz continue..."


Princi " okk...thn ab tum ghar jao...nd han be safe "


Maan " okk sir ...i'l be going now...bye nd gud night "


****************************************************************************************************************


Maan came out of the principal's room & sighed...Everytime it ws the same thing...He really wondered will there b anyplace where he'l b able 2 take
breaths freely widout any fear or any problems...He shook his head in negative & thought wht the hell he's thinking about ...whn he knows there is no other
way of living...



Maan started going towards the parking place towards his bike...He jst saw his bike...& started going towards it...
Bt he stopped in his track whn his eyes caught the sight of a very familiar figure near his bike...
He jst knew tht somethg ws going to be very wrong...



*****************************************************************************************************************


Geet's working hour in the library was finished...Bt she was not in a very good mood...& GEET HANDA being in a bad mood is a very big thing...
At least she thought so...She was cursing Maan endlessly...HOW DARE HE JUST KISS HER SCARF & INSULT HER LIKE THAT...
On the other hand she couldn't do anything to answer him back...Huh...grrhhh...




Geet came in the parking lot 2 get her car back...When she saw Maan's bike parked jst on the other side of the parking lot...She thought sumthing & smirked evilly...
She took a piece of brick nd went towards her car...She started her car & parked it jst be4 maan's bike...She came out of the car & stood B4 Maan's bike
holding the brick in her hand...



*******************************************************************************************************************



Maan came running towards his bike to hold the damage ...Bt the damage was done...When Geet saw Maan cuming towards her...
She slammed Maan's bike's headlight with the brick nd enterted her car...She started the car nd paaased Maan with a evil smile on her face...




Maan jst stood there with his mouth hanging open...Wht ws wid this grl...????? She can do anythg 2 get revenge...
Then Maan sighed becoz this time it was his fault...This time he irritated this mad grl...Nd HE HAD 2 FACE THE CONSEQENCES...


Maan jst started his bike nd went 2wards his Mantion...



********************************************************************************************************************


Sumwhr in DELHI...



A guy wearing a black formal wear was looking outside of his office widow...His office ws very sofisticated...
Richness nd sofistication ws oozing out form every part of the room...Wheather the sofa in black or his glass desk or his black leather
chai.evrythg ws screaming tht it belongs 2 a powerful person...The office ws on the 38th floor of his building...The whole Delhi could be visible from there.
This view ws giving him a feeling tht HE WS THE UNCROWNED UNDERWORLD KING OF THIS CITY...He ws enjoying the sense of powerfulness whn a knock on the door disturbed him...



He said in a deeap voice "come in"


A girl entered his cabin with a file in her hand...Fear ws visible in her face...


He turned towards her nd gestured from his eyes to speak up...


Girl "dev sir woh..."


dev sat on his big leather chair nd said in a cold voice " speak up "


Girl " sir woh...we couldn't find his xact location but he is in delhi now..."


Dev smiled a little nd the girl sighed...


suddenly He pulled a gun from his desk & shot her on her head...Evryone outside of his room were shocked 2 hear the gunshot but it was nt a nw thg 4 thm...


Dev laughed a little nd said "i don't like unfinished job..."


Dev called his secratery on his intercom...A girl came in the cabin nd saw the deadbody...She was not at all surprised 2 see all this.
She ws being paid 4 doing her job silently...& has seen worse than this...


Girl " sir ,,,u called me..."


Dev pointing towards the deadbody " yes...tara...clean this mess up...& get me a meating wid jonathan"


tara "sure sir...anythg else...???"


Dev "no that'll be all..."


Dev took his laptop nd walked towards the door...Suddenly pulled tara by her waist saying... " u look haawwwt in blck ."


tara smiled seductively saying "i thought u lik me without these..."


Dev gave her a passionate kiss saying "..meet me at n8 "


Dev got out of his cabin nd tara started his work...


Precap


"i cn't feel anythg 4 anyone.."

Edited by Tarina.R.Totine - 12 years ago
kamiya thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#36

loved your ff
plz pm me
i send you a buddy request
princesssarah thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#37
hey dear...
this is an awesome concept...
loved each and every parts...
geet's way of getting revenge was superb...
now waiting to see their friendship...
please update soon..
and sorry for being late but anywayz ''BELATED BIRTHDAY WISHES''
update soon dear...
spvd thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#38
part 10
nice part...
OMG Dev is so disgusting...
Maan and Geet's fights are so funny...
cont soon dear...
Infinity. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Awesome part dear
loved it

Loved Maaneet nok-jok😆😆😆
😲 Dev s Underworld Don
waiting for next
continue soon

thankx for pm😊


😆



Remya_Pillai thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
#40
wow!loved the ff...loved the mystery u r keeping along with it..
waiting for more..
and pls pm me..

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".