New Maaneet FF TUJHKO JO PAAYA #5 link#6 pg131 - Page 44

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Thanks for your love and support dear friends. I am extremely sorry for the delayed updates guys but ur Piya is held up with office work hence I am finding it difficult to give regular updates. Here is the next update I hope each one of u will enjoy reading it.

Besides this I wanted to inform you'll that after some updates I would be introducing some twists and turns in this FF till then enjoy these happy updates😳

I dedicate this update to my friendkuhu28



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PART 43

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Every touch of his was making Geet realize the depth of his love' she was only his and he was proving it by loving her in one of the most beautiful ways

Geet became more demanding as Maan continued to shower her with his love by claiming and tasting every inch of her upper body without removing the towel

He was communicating the love and respect that he holds for her by touching her soul with his blissful and magical grace

She allowed him to claim her and infact she was all ready to submit herself completely to him but Maan knew his limits and he ensured not to cross those limits

They continued to love each other and ensured their dominance on one another by removing every trace of the chocolate paste from each other's body; they continued to shower one another by loving and soft kisses as well as hungry and demanding smooches

Sometimes their innocent love took a wild turn, and they kept on portraying their wild side by giving each other a sweet torture of animalistic love bites

But overall they were satisfied to have found each other' and today was just a blissful beginning of their new life as both of them were unaware that a sweet surprise was going to knock their lives very soon which would provide them with a licence to take their relationship to a new level

They didn't have the account of time; they were unaware for how long they stayed in the bath tub as every moment was a paradise for them

Finally Maan scooped Geet in his arms and helped her out of the tub

He carried her to the room and placed her on her feet

She hugged him immediately as she was not ready to come out from his protective folds

Maan kissed her forehead and opened her wardrobe and selected a beautiful suit for Geet and requested her to wear it

He was going to walk out of her room to give her privacy but Geet held his hand and stopped him from taking any further steps

There was no place for any secret or any barriers between them, they were soulmates and they could share every small and big thing with each other, this is what Geet thought

Maan understood her unsaid words and dropped his idea of going out of the room, and immediately turned around so that his back was facing Geet

He too conveyed his feelings through this action of his, Geet was his pure angel and it was his duty to respect her dignity

He knew she was his possession but their love was way beyond physical pleasure, their love had a divine touch to it and he would never let the touch of divinity to fade from their relationship

Geet felt touched by Maan's gesture

She was indeed lucky to have him, without uttering a word she allowed the towel to slip down her curves and within a matter of seconds the towel was touching her milky white feet

As soon as the towel made way to the floor Maan closed his eyes and picturized his Geet in the most beautiful and mesmerizing form that his eyes had ever seen

He was admiring his Geet in a bridal wear with his closed eyes she was looking like a true angel not even for a second did he allow the thought to cross his mind that in reality Geet's towel was lying on the floor, such was the greatness of Maan's love

Same was the case with Geet she never felt so safe and secured in her entire life, Maan's mere presence was enough to make her realize that she was not naked infact she felt as if she was dressed with Maan's pure and unconditional love

She took the suit that Maan had removed from the wardrobe and kissed it with utmost love as if trying to breathe his fragrance through it

Maan smiled generously as he lived another dream through his closed eyes

He could clearly visualize both of them sitting at the mandap wherein Maan had kissed Geet's forehead before decorating her maang with the sindoor of his love

Geet had dressed herself completely in the suit by that time she was only left with the dori of her kurti

As she tried to tie the dori, her finger touched the lovebite that Maan had gifted her thus taking her to the memories of the blissful moment that both of them had shared few minutes ago

As Geet was busy tying the knot of her kurti, Maan was also totally engrossed in his dreams wherein he was tying the mangalsutra around Geet's neck thus taking their relationship to the heights of eternity

Geet comes and hugs Maan from behind thus requesting him to give her an entry into his dreams

Maan turns around and admires his angel with all his love

Geet: Lagta hai aap koi khoobsurat khwab dekh rahe the jiski chamak abhi bhi aapki nigahon mein jhalak rahi hai [It appears as if u were living a beautiful dream I can still see the spark of it in your eyes]

Maan: Maan ka har khwab Geet se shuru hotha hai aur har khwab Geet par khatm , tumhi meri zindagi ka sabse dilkash khwab ho jise main har lamha har pal jeeta hoon [Every dream of Maan starts and ends with Geet, u r the most divine dream of my life Geet and I live this dream in every moment of my life]

Geet allowed herself to slip in his protective folds

Geet: Itna pyar kyun karte hai mujhse Maan? [Why do u love me so much Maan?]

Maan hugged her back

Maan: Kyunki main khudgarz hoon Geet [The reason is simple I am selfish Geet]

Geet: Kya matlab? [What do u mean?]

Maan:


"Aapke chehre ko dekh Khuda se rubaru hothi hai ruh ye humari

Mushkurate hai aap jab baharo se khil uththi hai zindagi ye humari

Aapke nazro ke palghat par beet thi hai sukoon se raate ye humari

Aapke ghane zulfon ki chau hi, taazgi ki bauchar hai humari

Aaghosh mein simat jaate hai aap jab mehek uththi hai har saas humari

Aaj ikraar karna chahte hai hum

Nahi pyar karte hum aapse

Pyar toh har koi kar saktha hai

Magar humari nazro ne humesha se hi aapki puja ki hai

Yahi humare zindagi ka sabse bada sach hai aur, yahi chupi hui hai humari khudgarzi

Aap humare rab hai aur hum chahkar bhi apne rab ko khud se dur nahi kar sakthe

Yahi wajah hai humari mohabbat ki

Kyunki ye sach hai humne kabhi aapse mohabbat nahi ki hum toh aapki Ibadat karte hai aur humesha karte rahenge"

[I come face to face with the Alimighty as soon as I see ur angelic face

My life blossoms like a flower everytime it sees u smiling

My nights pass peacefully at the shores of your eyes

The nightdark hair brings a magical refreshness in my life

My breath becomes fragrant each time u hide yourself in my loving folds

I have to confess today

I don't love u

Anyone can love a person

But my eyes have always worshipped u

This is the biggest truth of my life, and here lies my selfishness

U r my Goddess and I can never stay away from u

This is the only reason why I love u so much

As this is the truth that I don't love u but I worship u and will continue to do so forever and ever]

Geet was trying to look at Maan's face but her eyes were not giving her the permission to get a clear view as her magical mirrors were completely wet with tears of happiness

Maan: Geet inn motiyon ko apni nazro mein aane ki ijajat mat diya karo warna inki wajah se tum mujhe thik se dekh nahi paayogi aur ye main kataiyi bardash nahi kar saktha [Geet don't give permission to these pearls to enter the territory of ur eyes as u won't be able to see my face clearly in their presence and this something that I won't allow to happen]

Maan pressed his lips on her eyes and allowed the tears to flow

He licked the entire path of her cheek and removed all the traces of the tears from there

Geet: Maan aap' [Maan'u]

Maan pressed his finger on her lips and stopped her from going ahead

He pulled her possessively by holding her waist and looked directly into her eyes

Maan: Geet agar tumhe yaad nahi hai toh main tumhe bata du k tumne mujhe yaha kisi khaas wajah se bulaya tha aur wo baat abhi tak tumne mujhe puchi nahi [Geet let me remind u I am here to tell u the answer of an important question that u wanted to know from me]

Geet: Haan mujhe yaad hai [Yes I do remember]

Maan: Par mujhe wo sawal thik se yaad nahi kyat um mujhe wo sawal dubara puchogi? [But I can't recollect ur question properly do u mind to ask me the question again?]

Geet could see a mischievous glint in his eyes

Maan brushed his lips gently on her petals and whispered huskily

Maan: Sawal pucho na Habibi [I am waiting for your question Habibi]

Geet: Wo main Dadima ke aashirwaad ka matlab jaana chahthi thi [I wanted to know the meaning of Dadima's blessing]

Maan smiled at the smartness of his angel

Maan: Kaunsa aashirwaad Geet [What was the blessing Geet?]

Geet shivered with Maan's look

Maan's love filled look was enough to make Geet insane but today he was giving her seductive looks making her completely paralysed

Her breaths were coming unsteady

Maan traced her neckline with his tongue and once again repeated his question

Maan: Tum detail mein samajna chahti thina? Bolo Geet? [U wanted to understand the deep meaning of this blessing na answer me Geet]

Geet was lost in Maan's charm

Geet: Haan [Yes]

Maan: Toh batau wo Aahirwad kya tha [So tell me the words of the blessing]

He gifted her with a series of soft gentle kisses from the length of her neck to the side of her face

Geet was not in a position to answer but with great difficulty she uttered these words

Geet: Dudho nahao phuto phalo [Have so much money that u bath with milk and have such a long life that u can see and play with your grandchildren]

Maan let out a groan and bit her shoulder aggressively

He started lifting her kurti from and exposed her belly partially

Geet :Maan ye aap kya kar rahe ho? [Maan what r u trying to do?]

Maan: Apni zindagi ko humari aanewali zindagi ki sabse badi khushi ka matlab samjane jaa raha hoon [My life I am going to explain u the meaning of our most beautiful moment of our coming life]

Maan allowed his hand to caress her belly as if trying to indicate the depth of his words through his actions

PRECAP 1: Bolna halke halke bolna halke halke😳😳😳

PRECAP 2: Dadima, Rano and Mohinder give a strict punishment to Maaneet😲😲😲

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Part 44: Page 117


Edited by piya- - 12 years ago
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Geet: Lagta hai aap koi khoobsurat khwab dekh rahe the jiski chamak abhi bhi aapki nigahon mein jhalak rahi hai [It appears as if u were living a beautiful dream I can still see the spark of it in your eyes]

Maan: Maan ka har khwab Geet se shuru hotha hai aur har khwab Geet par khatm , tumhi meri zindagi ka sabse dilkash khwab ho jise main har lamha har pal jeeta hoon [Every dream of Maan starts and ends with Geet, u r the most divine dream of my life Geet and I live this dream in every moment of my life]

Geet was trying to look at Maan's face but her eyes were not giving her the permission to get a clear view as her magical mirrors were completely wet with tears of happiness

Maan: Geet inn motiyon ko apni nazro mein aane ki ijajat mat diya karo warna inki wajah se tum mujhe thik se dekh nahi paayogi aur ye main kataiyi bardash nahi kar saktha [Geet don't give permission to these pearls to enter the territory of ur eyes as u won't be able to see my face clearly in their presence and this something that I won't allow to happen]

beautiful dialogues...
How r u are 2 write poetic dialogues?Hats off 2 u.
Maan finds Geet an Angel in d bridal attire.No wonder.She has never found so secure b4.Maan i so caring.Geet wil b secure in his arms
Edited by jasminerahul - 13 years ago

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