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Posted: 13 years ago
teaser seems to b pretty confusing n misguiding from current mind set of maan ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome teaser👏
All the best for exam😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends. Today's update is really special and I have tried my level best to portray the emotions properly I hope each one of u would enjoy this update.Besides this I have made the new banner of TJP that I have posted in this part do tell me what do u think about the banner is it good?😳
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PART 39

Maan: Main bhi dekhtha hoon tum kab tak mujhse bhagogi Geet saza toh main tumhe dekar hi rahunga [Let me also see for how long u would b successful in running away from me; u can't escape from your punishment today]

Maan smiled at his own thoughts and started following Geet

Geet dashed with Dadima while she was trying to hide from Maan

Dadima: Are Geet bete aap aise bhaag kyun rahi hai? Sab theek toh haina? [Geet why r u running? Is everything fine?]

Maan: Geet kaha ho tum? [Geet where r u?]

Geet hides behind Dadima

Dadima: Achha toh ye baat hai Geet aapse chupkar bhaag rahi hai? Kyun Maan ab kya shararat kar di aapne jo Geet ko aapse chupne ki zarurat aan padi? [Oh so this is the reason so Maan what have u done this time that Geet is hiding from u?]

Maan: Maine kuch bhi nahi kiya Dadima job hi kiya Geet ne kiya [I did not do anything Dadima infact Geet was the one who initiated all this]

Maan bit his tongue as he knew that he had leaked out wrong information

Dadima: Geet ne kya kiya Maan? Aur aapke shirt k buttons kyun khule hue hai aur aapki chathi par ye nishaan kaise? [What did Geet do Maan and why r the buttons of ur shirt open? Wait I can see some marks on your chest what marks are these?]

Geet closed her eyes in embarrassment whereas Maan immediately buttoned his shirt

Maan: Nahi Dadima kuch bhi toh nahi hai aap yuhi sawalo mein ulaj rahi hai [No Dadima it's nothing u r simply getting confused by your own questions]

Dadima held Geet's hand and made brought her in front of Maan

Dadima: Achha Geet bete aap bataiye aap Maan se dur kyun bhaag rahi thi? Kya unhone aapko tang kiya? [Geet u tell me why were u running away from Maan was he troubling u?]

Geet: Nahi Dadima ye mujhe tang nahi kar rahe the par'[No Dadima he was not troubling me but']

Maan gave him a questioning look. Geet replied back by giving him a teasing smile

Geet: Dadima main toh yaha apni book dhundne aayi thi par ghar par koi nahi tha najaane ye kaha se mere saamne aa khade ho gaye aur ussi waqt lights chali gayi. Pata hai Dadima inhone shirt nahi pehni thi aur andhere mein main jab inse takrayi toh yun laga jaise k kisi bhooth k changul mein phas chuki hoon [Dadima I came here to take my book when all of a sudden the lights went off and God knows from where Maan came and stood in front of me; he had not worn his shirt and when I dashed with him it felt as if some ghost had taken me in his evil clutches]

Maan: (thinking) Achhaji itna bada jhooth; meri baho mein momh ki tarah pigal rahi thi aur tadap main raha tha aur ab ilzaam bhi mujhi par [This is not d truth Geet u were melting like a candle in my embrace igniting my own desires and here u r busy making arrangements so that I can land in trouble]

Maan: Dadima ye sach nahi hai [Dadima this is not the truth]

Dadima: Aap chup rahiye Maan ek toh humari bachhi ko dara diya aur ab aap chahte hai k hum unki baat bhi na sune [Shut your mouth Maan first of all u made Geet nervous with your stupid act and now u are not allowing me to listen to her ]

Geet: Wahi toh Dadima main darr k maare chila padi aur main girne hi wali thi k inhone mujhe apne baho ka sahara diya par Dadima inhe toh itni sib hi akal nahi hai [Exactly Dadima I was so scared that I screamed on top of my voice and I was just about to lose my balance when Maan gave me the support of his strong arms but Dadima he does not possess even a tiny bit of common sense]

Dadima: Aisa kyun bete? [Why is it so?]

Geet: Dadima ab dekhiye main ek ladki hoon toh inhe mujhe pyar se padakna chahiyena inhone itne kaskar mujhe pakda k inke danav jaisi ungliyaan mujhe chub gayi pata hai mujhe kitna dard hua [Dadima he should have supported me delicately but he was so harsh that his demon like nails left a mark on my smooth skin; it was so painful]

Maan: (thinking) jab tum mujhe apne hotho se chum rahi thi aur apne pyar k nichan mere jism par chod rahi thi tab mujhe dard ho raha tha haan wo dard kafi meetha tha [When u were kissing me and leaving your marks on my skin I was experiencing a sweet painful torture that time]

Dadima: Maan ye hum kya sun rahe hai aapne Geet ko takleef pauchayi [Maan what am I hearing did u hurt Geet?]

Geet gave a teasing smile to Maan

Maan: (thinking) Badi masti sujh rahi haina Shehzadi toh ab dekho main aisa jawab dunga k tumhari chaal tumhi par ulti padh jaayegi [I think u r in a mood of playing pranks Princess okay now wait for my reply you would get trapped in your own game]

Maan: Dadima Geet sach keh rahi hai par agar aap mujhe itna death rahi ho Geet ki ek chothi chot par toh aapko Geet ko isse bhi zyada daatna padega kyunki Geet ne bhi mujhe kum takleef nahi pauchayi aap chahe toh main uska saboot de saktha hoon [Dadima Geet is right but if u r shouting at me for my small mistake then u need to give a greater dose of this treatment to Geet as well as she too has committed the same mistake infact I can prove this]

Geet did not understand his mischievous plan

Dadima: Aap kehna kya chahthe hai? [What r u trying to say?]

Maan unbuttoned his shirt and exposed his chest which had lipstick mark on it

Maan: Aap khud hi dekh lijiye [U can see it by yourself]

Dadima was surprised; she looked at Geet who hid her face in between her palms and without wasting a second she rushed to her house

Dadima turned to face Maan but Maan had already left

Dadima started smiling

Dadima: Aap dono ko yun khush dekhkar hume jo khushi mil rahi hai wo hum bata nahi sakthe yakeen nahi hotha k ye wahi Geet jo humsab se nafrat karthi thi Maan k pyar ne Geet mein itna khoobsurat badlav laaya hai k aaj humare dono bachho ki zindagi khushiyon ki kaliyon se mehek rahi hai; sach kehthi hai ye duniya sachhe pyar badi taakat hothi hai [I can't express my happiness when I see both of u together; I still can't believe that this is the same Geet who used to hate us some time ago Maan's love has indeed brought about a beautiful transformation in Geet which has beautified the life of my children it is indeed the truth that true love possesses a great power]

She started walking towards her room

Maan tried to call Geet but Geet was angry and she did not receive his call

Maan started sending cute sorry messages to pacify her

Geet melted in a matter of seconds but she decided to trouble Maan hence she switched off her mobile

Maan: Lagta hai Madam kafi gussa ho gayi hai chalo ab toh kal subah hi unhe mana saktha hoon [It seems she is really angry I have to pacify her by any means tomorrow itself]

Maan kissed Geet's photo and allowed his eyes to take him in a world of dreams

Next Day

Geet and Meera had to do some urgent submissions in college hence Geet left for college early that day

Maan could not meet Geet in the morning; he decided to talk to her after coming from office

Geet was feeling hungry; she went to the canteen along with Meera

Meera had kept a fast and hence she did not eat anything

The taste of the food was really good Geet kept on relishing the food till her stomach was completely full

It was now time for their lectures

Initially everything was perfectly fine but after sometime a feeling of dizziness started becoming dominant on Geet

Geet tried hard to control herself but her problems were increasing all of sudden she got a vomiting sensation

She excused herself from her lecture and rushed to the washroom

Meera got worried and followed Geet

Meera: Kya hua Geet tu theek toh haina? [What's the matter Geet r u alright?]

Geet: Pata nahi yaar kuch der pehle chakkar aa rahe the aur ab ultiyaan aa rahi hai [Don't know dear sometime back I felt as if I would faint and right now I am getting this vomiting sensation]

Meera: Geet tujhe doctor k paas jana chahiye chal main aathi hoon tere saath [Geet u need to visit a doctor come I will accompany u]

Geet: Main doctor k paas khud chali jaayungi aur tu yahi college mein rukh kyunki humne jo assignments submit kiye hai uske presentation k liye hum mein se kisi ek ka yaha hona zaruri hai tu fikr mat kar main doctor se milkar jaldi laut aayungi [ I will visit a doctor but u need to stay over here as one of us has to present for the presentation u don't worry about me I will back soon]

Meera: R u sure?

Geet: Yes Darling I am

Meera: Waise tu kaunse hospital jaa rahi hai? [By the way which hospital r u going?]

Geet: Good Health Hospital

Meera: Okay. Take care

Geet left for the hospital. Meera informs Maan about Geet's health Maan immediately left all his work and rushed to the hospital

The lady doctor carried out all the test of Geet as she appeared pretty normal to her and she could not trace the reason behind this sudden dizziness and vomiting sensation

Geet was waiting for her reports

There was no major problem with Geet it was just a normal case of FOOD POISONING as the food that Geet had eaten in the canteen was not good; the dizziness that she was experiencing was due to her hectic schedule she was working day and night to get good marks and while doing so she was ignoring her health

Another woman with the same name "GEET SINGHANIA" was also waiting for her reports and that women was pregnant by mistake the nurse exchanged both the reports

Nurse: Ye lijiye Mam aapke reports[Mam here r ur reports]

Geet: Kya hua hai mujhe? [What's wrong with me?]

Nurse: Ghabrane ki koi baat nahi hai Mam aapko toh khush hona chahiye aap ma bannewali hai [There is no need to be nervous mam u should be happy as u r pregnant]

Geet got the biggest shock of her life; she knew she had to take a decision soon

Geet: Abortion karwane k kya formalities hai? [What r the formalities to abort a child?]

Nurse: Ye aap kya keh rahi hai? R u sure about ur decision? [What r u saying Mam? R u sure about ur decision?]

Geet: Yes I am

The nurse tells Geet about the formalities and leaves from there to inform the doctor

Maan lands at the hospital while Geet was filling the form

Geet was totally engrossed in filling the form and did not notice Maan

Maan was shocked at Geet's decision he snatched the form from her hand

Geet: Maan aap kab aaye? [Maan when did u come?]

Maan: Ye kya hai Geet? Tum ye kya karne jaa rahi thi? [What is this Geet what were u trying to do?]

Geet: Apne zindagi k ek kalak ko khud se humesha k liye judaa karne jaa rahi thi [I am trying to wash away a taint from my life permanently]

Maan: Tumhe ye haq kisne diya itna bada faisla lene ka? Tumne mujhse ek baar baat karna gawara bhi nahi samjha? [Who gave u this right to take such a big decision on your own? U didn't even feel necessary to talk to me about this atleast once?]

Geet: Kya batathi main aapko Maan k humare beech koi teesra anchaha bhoj aa raha hai jisse main nafrat karti hoon [What do u want to hear that some unknown burden is entering our life whom I hate from the bottom of my heart]

Maan: Khabardaar Geet agar uss maasum ko bhoj ka naam diya toh wo tumhare shareer ka ek hissa hai aur tumse judi hui har ek cheez mere liye anmol hai koi bhoj nahi [Don't u dare ti call that innocent life as a burden; it is a part of ur body and everything that is associated with u is precious to me]

Maan: Geet ek baat batau tum jo karnewali ho uske baad kya kabhi khud ko maaf kar paayogi? [Tell me one thing Geet would it be possible for u to forgive yourself after committing this crime?]

Geet: Haan par aap ye sawal mujhse kyun puch rahe ho [Yes; but why r u asking this question to me?]

Maan: Wo iss liye Geet kyunki aaj tak tum apne Mom Dad ko maaf nahi kar paayi toh maine socha k tum khud ko bhi kabhi maaf nahi kar paayogi [That's because u have still not forgiven your parents hence I assumed that the same would b the case with u as well]

Geet: Mera unse kya mel? [There is no comparison between me and my parents?]

Maan: Sahi kaha tumne wo toh apne aulaad se pyar karte hai aur tum apniaulaad se nafrat [U r right they love their child and u hate ur child]

Maan: Puri zindagi din raat mehnat kar tumahre sapno ko pura karne ki koshish karte rahe tumhare ma baap par tum toh apne bachhe ko sapne dekhne se pehle hi maar dena chahthi ho [They strived their entire life to fulfill your dreams but u r killing your child even before it could see its first dream]

Geet: Maan'

Maan: Tumhari muskurahat toh tumhare parents ko mil nahi sakhi par unhone tumhari berukhi tumhari nafrat ko dil kholkar issliye apnaya taaki shayad unhe dukh pauchahkar tumhe khushi mil sake kyunki har ma baap k liye uske aulaad ki khushi se badkar aur kuch nahi ho sakthi par ek tum ho jo apne bachhe ki muskurahat ko maut ko taufe mein de rahi ho [Your parents could never get the peace of your smile hence they embraced your hatred with open arms just to make u happy as they feel u r satisfied to see them in sorrow and believe me Geet every parent desires to see their child happy but u r a total opposite as u r happily gifting the smile of ur child in the arms of death]

Geet: Bus kijiye Maan [Pls stop Maan]

Maan: Kyun bus karu Geet tumne aaj tak apne parents ko iss liye maf nahi kiya kyunki unke paas tumhe dene k liye waqt nahi tha phir bhala tum khud ko itne aasani se maaf kaise kar sakthi ho jab tum apne bacche ko waqt se pehle hi maarne jaa rahi ho'tum humesha gunegaar rahogi Geet uss nanhi si jaan ka jisse jeene se pehle hi tumne usse maut de di [Why should I stop Geet? U have not forgiven your parents just because they could not give u enough time but what about u, u r snatching away the time from ur own child by killing it instead of giving it a new life? U r a criminal Geet and u would remain a criminal if u go ahead and abort this child]

Geet understood the depth of Maan's words'she was wrong and today Maan had made Geet realize the love of her parents

Maan: Humare bachhe ko tum abort nahi karwayogi Geet [U r not going to abort our child Geet]

Geet looked at Maan with immense respect when he declared "our child"

Maan was going to say something when the nurse interrupted their conversation

Nurse: I am sorry Mam aapke reports badal gaye the aap pregnant nahi ho aapko toh FOOD POISIONING hui hai [I am sorry Mam the reports got exchanged by mistake u r not pregnant it is a normal case of FOOD POISIONING]

Maan: Food Poisoning? Koi serious baat toh nahi haina Nurse? Meri Geet ko koi takleef toh nahi hogina? [Food poisoning is everything alright? Is it something serious? Is this FOOD POISONING harmful to my Geet's health?]

Maan's worried expression his state of panic were depicting his unconditional and boundless love for Geet

Geet was just admiring the man standing in front of her eyes who was busy asking endless questions to the nurse

She never knew she was so important but yes she was sure his life revolved around her traces

Maan: Geet tumhe apna khayal rakhna chahiyena kya khaya tha tumne jo tumhe ye FOOD POISONING ho gaya tumhe meri zara sib hi fikr nahi agartumhe kuch nuksaan ho jaata to main toh jeete jee mar hi jaata na [Geet can't u take care of yourself? What did u eat that resulted in this food poisoning? If something serious would have taken place then what would have happened to me I would have died at that very moment]

PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=riFpcvhObLM

Tum se seekhe koi pyar hotha hai kya

Rasmein hothi hai kya rishte hothe hai kya'

aa'aaa'.aaa

Geet stopped him by placing her hand on his lips. She could see immense love in his eyes and he could see a beautiful blend of love and respect in her eyes.

She started caressing his cheek and placed a gentle kiss on it

Humko bhi ae sanam hai tumhari kasam

chahe jo ho saza hum nibhayenge wafa'.

Maan was going to tell her something when Geet stopped him through her eyes. She kissed his chin'moved further down to his chest and placed a kiss at the place where his heart sang her name

Ehsaas yun dilake'

Ehsaas yun dilake zindagi ho'

Zindagi badal di'.

Without giving second thoughts Geet bent down and touched the feet of her God yes for her Maan was indeed the face of God. Maan lifted her immediately as her true place was in his heart and not his feet. He crushed her into a tight hug. Geet melted in his embrace immediately and after few minutes she herself broke the hug and with looked at Maan with immense love

Tune zindagi mein aake zindagi ho'

Zindagi badal di

Before Maan could understand anything she captured his lips into a soul searing kiss, Maan was surprised by this act of Geet but he understood her feelings...there was a feel of happiness, satisfaction, realization and most importantly the submission of her heart to his love in that one kiss'Maan too responded to her kiss and their souls became united with this one kiss that they shared

Zindagi badal di..zindagi badal di...

Nothing mattered to her today; she didn't care about the world nor did she bother about the people who were watching them..she went on loving him...kissing him as today she knew how lucky she was to have found a man like him..A man who completed her incomplete self by showering hr with his unconditional love and making her feel she is precious...yes she is special and today she wanted the world to know that this man belongs to her...yes he is only her man...her Maan...Geet's Maan

PRECAP: Union of Geet and her parents😳😊😳

So Guys I hope everyone is happy GEET IS NOT PREGNANT she will become a mother in future but it would be Maan's child😳

This update was really big so I expect long comments from each one of u I WOULD BE REALLY HAPPY IF I GET LONG COMMENTS FOR THIS PART

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me first 😊

lovely update 😊

oh maan is such a lovely person😊
hmm cant wait for geet to be pregnant with maan's child 😉😊😛
Edited by zaara2212 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
maneet masti with dADI GEET food poison reports changed maan making her realise her mistake and her parents view it



Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Balle balle maan k to mauz hogai...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the updat❤️
geet toched maan's feet.😳haye😍
W8ng 4 the reuniun of geet nd her parents.😃
do con soon😊
Thanx 4 the PM😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesoome upd.
loved it to d core...
thanx for d pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb prt di...maan is sch a grt person...
he made her realize abt her parents,awsome prt...
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update. loved maaneets moments with dadi n also maans unconditional n selfless love.

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