ArShi OS : The night after the Act Heer Ranjha

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aakriti

@aakriti120

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

heya

awesome part...

really loved it...

brilliantly written...

thanks for the pm..: ]

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Susmita M

@sman2195

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

👍🏼 👏 😍
That was wonderful Appy...wow!!! Another wonderful piece:) thank u for the pm. What's next!???

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WittyKitty

@WittyKitty

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Extremely well expressed for a First OS!

👏👏👏

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Inaya Haya

@lilmzsunshine

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

nice emotions, I liked the transition from the stage show, and the show of emotions.

-S

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Devi

@devibnair2009

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

good one..really enjyd.. plz PM wen u update

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livelyrose90

@livelyrose90

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

nice one thnx4 pm 😃 doesn't seems ur 1st os

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arshieverlastng

@arshieverlastng

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

it jst simply nice...r u gonna cntinue ths?thn make it in nice way

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Badra

@SublimeSanaya

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

hi babes ...

nt bad for the first attempt hun ... k .. let me be frank .. it was quite good .. luved it to the end ...

if i am being honest .. the only reason i read the OS is the name .. "gutter OS" .. tht has a ring to it .. dont u think . ... tht was pretty convincing or rather promising ... 😉 .. sorry yaar cannt help but i do have a very very gutter mind .. and i am truly honored to say so .. lol

anyways .. luved it ...

- - badra

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Ishrafan11

@Ishrafan11

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Wow amazing os so cute and romantic loved it

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Stapleton

@Stapleton

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

fantastic os...

Khushi please stop fighting with your thoughts...whether i accept it or not I still care for you and i will always be there for you whenever you need me. I will always be the sheild so that nothing bad can touch you. atleast today please dont pick up further fight...i am extremely vulnarable...please and he cluched khushi.

i loved those lines... vry beautiful description

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