Let me be your light!-Arhi FF part 8- pg 36

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-JollyJabeen-

@-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: karisma

ASUMI!!!!! nope she won't! she luvs comics too ( i hope!🤣)

omg UNAGI!!! [Ross] LOL LOL LOL!!!

LEGEN..wait for it..Dary! [Barney]

*running off before asumi decides she doesn't like comics after all!*🤣

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LOL ayeya karamba! Im running too!

Sorry Asumi!😳

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Shruti Gupta

@Shruti21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: karisma

Ditto!

it has been like forever...😔

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-FarwiiDobaara-

@-FarwiiDobaara-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#233

Really eager to read more..

*Stalker Alert!! 😈

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Ritu

@.khanak.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#234

Update😭😭

Or I will stalk you😈

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-JollyJabeen-

@-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#235

RES!!!:)😳

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YAYAYAY yo updated! And woohoo i'm first!

Totally loved the 2 updates! They were absolutely brilliant<3

Awww their going on a trip! WAHAYY! Awww Khushi is so cute, Love herrr🥳

Awww! Arnav's beggining to understand Khushi more, well slightly at least!

I also LOVE the Payal-Khushi bond here, Atleast we get to see Payshi (Just made it up🤣) scenes!😛

Edited by -JollyJabeen- - 13 years ago

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#236

That is cute Arnav coming in caravan.. Means Arnav and khushi coming in that.. She would end up there.. Heehee lovely update

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N0306

@N0306

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Posted: 13 years ago

#237

I actually commented before reading chaPter 7 but I was right.. It is going to be fun..

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karisma

@karisma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#238

"Smiling when you feel like it and cry when you want to, because life ain't black or white, its grey"

how apt was ur quote. u made the smile on my lips widen automatically when i reached that..😳

do u know the feeling u get when u itch to touch something, for the purity in there to fill u and wash away all darkness ..?

do u know the feeling when u hesitate to touch a pure white fabric lest u taint it ...??

do u know the feeling when uv lovingly cleaned up ur cherished brother's room ..n then U find him standing at the door in his mud-splashed shoes,tired but his eyes shining brightly with the effects of his recent win..?

..or when u sit still in the car, trying not to fidget koz ur hands r mehendi-clad n u dt want to spoil the beige seat ... ?

that's how iv been feeling since i've read ur updates.. they are innocent,clean and pure and I don't want to mar it which comments that do not meet up to the level you've set

so m going to continue on a very practical tone (ermm..try to☺️)

each update was pure perfection🤗

i love how Arnav didn't feel like leaving her behind at the back of the bus..you didn't say it but it was there to see

"He dint know why, but he wanted to explain the surrounding to her. Moving back he looked around to see all of them staring at him. He knew she dint belong there, the ambience was too quiet and elderly for her. "

as you said, he didn't know it at that point but that's what it was.. he felt bereft. he lingered behind until babuji had to tell him she'd be okay, which he took as he cue😍

i love the tender way he carried her in his strong arms and super tender way with which he placed her on the seat😍 dreamland ashu! totally!

n his explanation to her.. he didn't have to. surely Arnav Singh Raizada didn't have to but the fact that he did it on his own, without being prompted...😍 he cares...n again he doesn't know it..he cares for her already..

more than the practical way he described her surroundings to her, there's a protective surge that pushed him to do it, to make sure she knows where she is, that she'll be fine.. that's the reassurance he was giving her ..and himself

i'll have u know i thought u'd make arnav go back to the caravan, with him coming up with a flimsy excuse of it not starting (arnav doing that purposefully) for him to join her at the back of the bus.. i thought that koz he soo clearly didn't want to leave her..tho he protested audibly

he protests too much!lol..don't worry Mr Raizada, ashu has got plans 4 u! lol

(AT THIS POINT, I LEARN THERE IS A 3RD UPDATE SO M GONNA RUSH MY COMMENTS NOW! LOOOL SORRY 4 RUSHING...YOUR UPDATE IS MY PRIORITY ...NIHAHAHAHAAA!!!😈)

eRMM.. how about i continue this later in my next comment..?

c yaaa

(sowiee ..can't wait! too tempted🤣)

Edited by karisma - 13 years ago

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paircube

@paircube

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Posted: 13 years ago

#239

What I like about your story is the unconventional ideas. The caravan for example. Also there is this level of cuteness that I love. The other really cute thing that makes me read your stories is the quotes you add in each chapter.
Coming to arnav and khushi I think the highlight was the need he felt to describe her surrounding to her.
Waiting for them to discover each other even if it takes a while.
Update soon.
And keep it cute.