Let me be your light!-Arhi FF part 8- pg 36

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Posted: 13 years ago

very great start and arhi meeting. loved that khushi didnt really take much notice or offence to arnav.

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karisma

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Posted: 13 years ago

Go for it!!! Full-on!! It's simply beautiful!!!

needed u to write more stories! ok firstly i love the title!!! just gimme the light baby!😉

next, this is more intense somehow and m already luving it.. starting wiv

Both lacked light- the ray of hope. For him- it was from the inside; while for her it was from the outside. can hardly wait 4 how this will unfold!!

"the happiness when someone wraps their fingers around ours'; the comfortable silences; the soft breeze; warmth of spring; cold of winter." 😍beautiful!! beautiful!!👏

"I love holding the petals in my hands jiji! So soft and tender, if I hold it any tighter, it will wither and if I hold it any lighter, it will be carried away by the wind" 🤔(karishma thinking why don't i just quote the whole chapter n comment next to each n every line!)☺️

u've really got me involved in khushi's thoughts..

the ache she's hiding..it screams throughout that yes, someone needs to come for her..

my mind is going over n over that first meeting..😍

can visualise the big car on the narrow streets and Arnav behind the wheels, probably in a hurry as usual, and coming to a crashing stop when he sees a beautiful girl dancing in the middle of the road, right in his car path

i need more of Arnav ..

hmm what does he thk of payal? 🤔actu,not writing abt his thghts on payal worked 4 me..big time. means he dismissed her n luvd that the look in khushi's eyes stayed with him

asumi, this was beautifully written.. it's obvious that u've given the plot a lot of thought.. n i love the intensity..i know u'll add to that.. this was just a first taste

m hooked❤️

i LOVEDDD it!!

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anu

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Posted: 13 years ago

this is really lovely and waiting for the next part...

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sweetygirl28

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Posted: 13 years ago

Great start.. love the carefree khushi who is always concerned for her sister... they meet in the very first chapter wow! and she let him go without fighting wow!!