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Posted: 13 years ago
#11

Awwiiieee... super duper cute updates...

haw,,, swamini Bua didn't do anything!!!! that's surprising...

waiting for Virman to get married...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
n thnx for making Manvi recover so soon... i hope this happens in the show...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
next part. this is very long so i might do the shaadi in the next part. sorry! dil thaam kar behet jao.

Everyone was very happy with the fact that manvi had gotten rid of her illness although, she still had to go for regular check-ups, but that could be done in Chandigarh. Dadaji insisted that the chaudary family come to Chandigarh with them and have a private party about manvi's instant recovery and then arrange Virat and manvi's engagement and marriage. with the sound of their marriage, Virat couldn't help but grin from ear to ear, and this made manvi and everyone else smile and laugh too.

Dadaji had ordered a big coach to go to chandigarh, but inder chachu, kadambari chachi and shlok went in viren's car, and Virat and Manvi went back in Virats car. Virat and Manvi had been listening to music and talking with each other, but Manvi was tired and fell fast asleep.

When they got to the vadhera mansion, dadaji ordered ramlaal(the servant) to take the chaudary family to their rooms, and told Virat to take Manvi to her room. Virat took her to the room and before she could say anything, virat closed the door behind them, placed manvi's bags on the floor and pulled her in his arms, while walking backward until he was near a wall, he spinned around and held her at the wall and leaned forward.
"Virat, yeh tumara charm muhjpe work nahi karta" Manvi stated looking in his eyes, they both knew that she was lying. Virat leaned closer and asked "now?" manvi shook her head. they continued this and just when Virat was going to kiss her, they heard a cough, they both looked around and saw that viren was standing at the door. They both looked down, and Manvi blushed.
"Shaadi ke baad nahi rukh sakte kya?" asked viren chuckling.
Viren told Manvi to freshen up and took virat with him.

sorry, it is actually really short, becaise i have to go, as soon as i come back..i'll carry on
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
back...
Viren told manvi to freshen up and took virat with him. Manvi took out her baby blue salwaar kameez with matching blue bangles and went to go and change, she was walking down the stairs and Virat couldn't take his eyes off her.
"hayeee nii, virat, kaha kohgaye tum?" asked kadambari chachi.
Manvi looked down, and went to sit near vanshika aunty who had saved a seat for her.
"manvi beta, tumara aur virat ka engagement 3 din mein hain aur shaad agle haafte, tikh hai na?" vanshika aunty asked, and manvi nodded.

engagement
it was their engagement and manvi came down the stairs with jeevika wearing a pink and silver lengha, while virat and viren were waiting for they're beautiful girls downstairs, virat was wearing a white and silver sherwani, and viren was wearing a red one and jeevika was wearing a red sari. Manvi sat down on the chair next to virat, and it was time to exchange rings. Virat took manvi's hand and put a silver ring with a small diamond on it on manvi's hand and manvi put a gold ring on virats finger. It was time for their dance and they danced so nicely together.

all the different things were done, the mehendi ceremony was quite boring for manvi because she couldn't dance., sangeet was done, and virat's family with jeevika included all danced to saj dhaj ke because manvi and viat danced to that on jeevika's sangeet. and the chaudary's danced to'nazar se nazar mile' everythig was done and now it was time of the shaadi

shaadi
Manvi was wearing a beautiful red lengha when she came down the stairs to an impatient Virat, they're eyes locked, but Manvi snapped out when she heard her di teasing her in whispers. Manvi went to sit down next to Virat who was dressed in a red and white sherwani, he leaned to his side and whispered to her "meri bandariya bothi achi laghrahi hai" Manvi smiled and whispered "chep, tum kham nahi hoon" and they both smiled to each other, just after they took 7 pheres, they heard "rukh jao!" everyone looked around, swamini bua and Maya were standing just a few feet away from Everyone and Maya had a gun in her hand. Manvi and Virat froze and Manvi was shaking all over, she held onto virats arm. Maya came closer with the gun in her hand, with swamini bua accompaning her.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
Wow!!! Absolutely perfect!!! Loved it to bits! Thanks for the PM :) x <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
really loved it...
i donno what i'll do to this Swamini bua...🤢
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
I'm back! next part of the story...
Maya came closer with the guyn in her hand, with swamini bua accompaning her. Virat wasn't interested, or scared about Maya's acts, he was more scared about Manvi and her health. Manvi had just recently got better, but she wasn't that strong yet, although she tried to be. The doctors told them that no tension or anything traumatic should happen to her, and now this.
"Maya, why are you doing this?" asked Virat as casually as he possibly could.
"Because you're mine Virat. Tum meri hoon" she replied.
"Maya, i dislike you. mein tumhe maaf kardiya, par mein tumse pyaar nahi karta"
"Haan, because of this..thing!" she shouted pointing at Manvi.
"MAYA!!!! BAS!!!" shouted Virat, as everyone got even more scared as he shouted, Manvi was seriously shaking now, and even coughing a little.
"What would be better Virat? tum suffer karo while mein tumhari nawi(new) patni ko shoot kare, or you watching your wife suffer as you get shot?" Maya asked, and everyone was watching her with a disgusted look on their face, apart from swamini bua of course. Virat stepped closer, with a romantic, sweet look on his face, leaving Manvi behind. Manvi was shocked and she was sobbing badly, Virat felt his heart break watching manvi shake and cry.
"You're right Maya" said Virat, walking towards her nicely. He went up to her as Maya let her hand down, Virat put one hand on her face and one hand on the hand that was holding the gun, Maya let loose of the gun as Virat took it in his hand, she span Maya around and held the gun to Maya's head as Maya screamed. "You're right Maya. I loved you, well thats what i thought, until i fell in love with Manvi" Virat stated.
"V..Vir..Virat. please, i'll leave. I'll go back to london, sach mein" stuttered Maya.
"Tikh hain" replied Virat, letting go of Maya "on one condition"
"haan, haan" replied Maya, anxiously.
"I will get a driver to take you to the airport and make sure you get on the plane, unlike last time" Virat told Maya, and Maya finallyagreed and left. manvi was standing where Virat left her. shaking and crying more than ever, she was just soo scared and she was with Jeevika and Viren. Virat walked up to her and kneeled on the floor, holding his ears. "Sorry, mujhe maaf kardo?" he asked and Manvi bent down and hugged him. She was embraced in his arms, tightly and neither one of them wanted to let go.

Vadhera house
before they knew it they were at the vadhera house, they had played some games, and Manvi won the game where they had to find the ring in the milk. Now, she was waiting upstairs on the bed for her husband.
downstairs...
downstairs, nobody would let virat go to his room. and after everyone left him, his viren bhai and Jeevika bhabhi came to annoy him. He took a deep breath and faced them both.
"Kya hua mere bhai, both impatient hoon tum" Viren said.
"Nahi, voh bas..neend...neend arahi hain muhje"
"achaa? neend? soneh jare hoon, ya kuch aur?" asked Viren as Virat blushed.
"just because you wern't with bhabhi on you're night, doesn't mean i can't be with mine. Mein apni pathni ko pyaar karta hoon" replied virat, laughing "and at least i didn't climb through the girls' window drunk saying 'dharasal mein aisa nahi hoon, mein bas voh jeevika ke yaad arahi thi, tho mein agaya" said Viren, mocking his voice.
"mazak karo beta, tikh hai, jao" replied Viren, and Virat happily walked up the stairs to his new wife.

Upatairs..in the new Mr and Mrs vadhera's room...
Manvi was sitting on the bed, waiting for Virat, he walked up to her and took her dupatta off her face, and sat at her legs with his hands holding his ears. "sorry" Virat said and Manvi's face shot up. "kyu?"
"aaj ke liye, maya ke liye" he replied. Manvi smiled "tumhari kya galti hain Virat? tum joh bhi kiya, tikh hi kiya. get up na yaar" Virat got up from the floor and put his arms on Manvi's shoulders, she leant forward into his arms and he embraced her. He pushed her away from him and sat her up. He slowly took off her bangles and kissed her hands, he took off her earings and kissed her ears, then he took off her nose ring and kissed her nose as she blushed. "Kya hua Mrs Vadera, bade sharam arahi hain tumhe?" Virat asked and Manvi put her head down while shaking her head. he walked to the back of her, took off her necklace and kissed the back o her neck over and over again, then he undid the back of her lengha top and kissed her back downwards, they undressed each other, virat lay her on the bed and they made love all night.

The next morning
Manvi woke up while virat was still asleep. She crept out of bed and went to the bathroom to get ready. she wore a pink salwaar- kameez and had washed hair. Virat was still sleeping and it was half an our till breakfast, she walked up to virat and told him to wake up but he wouldn't listen, he was fast asleep, so she sprayed water from her hair on him while her face was near his, Virat scrunched up his eyes then opened them to see his beautiful new wife over him, he quickly grabbed her and pulled her on top of him. "Virat, Virat, choro mujhe. kya karahi hoon tum?" she asked.
"Kyu choro? tum patni hain meri" He chuckled, holding her tighter.
"Virat, koi ajahga" replied manvi "Please choro"
"arre, aur mujhko kya milega?"
"Virat.."
"you have to pay the price" Virat told Manvi. And manvi knew what that was. she leaned forward, and gently kissed Virat's lips, she broke the kiss and said "tikh hai? jao, dress hokar aajao. Virat made a puppy dog face, grunted and then went to get ready. when he got out he was wearing a green shirt and jeans, he pushed manvi against the wall and kissed her...
to be continued...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg I was so scared about Maya and the gun and everything but you resolved it very well! Well done! awwwieee it was sooo romantic! Kya baath hai?!?! Loved it loved it loved it!! Continue soon pleaaasseee!!
Edited by Preeti_Shadia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
next part...
he pushed manvi against the wall and kissed her...
*knock knock*
virat: arre yaar, yeh kebab mein hadi kaha se ayee? He said, frustrated as Manvi laughed at him. "acha beta, aise hai kya?" she said, and pulled her back into his chest. "Virat, tum kya kar-rahi ho? koi door pe hain" said manvi, anxiously.
"Virat, Manvi. Breakfast ka time hogayi aab" said Viren from behind the door.
"Virat, choro mujhe" Manvi whispered. she could see from his face, what it would take for him to let go, so she quickly kissed him and ran to open the door, where her jeevika di and jiju were standing.
"morning di, morning jiju" said Manvi in a happy voice, as Virat joined her at the door.
"bade khush lagrahi hoon tum dono, raat bothi achi tha kya?" asked Viren, as jeevika giggled and Manvi blushed.

sorry..got to go...i'll finish it in a while xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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next short little part

At the dinner table
they were all sitting happily on the dining table, but nobody was talking to swamini bua, although Manvi didn't know nobody was talking to her, manvi didn't talk to anyone because she thought she would get told off.
"Manvi beta, tum khana banaloongi aaj?" asked dadaji as everyone looked up at her, apart from swamini bua.
"haan, bilkul dadji. kya banoa mein? mere matlab hain, tum kya pasand karte hoon?" asked and replied Manvi
"kuch bhi beta" replied dadaji
"par Virat, tum math finish karlo, viren ke tarah. hum bhi hamari baho ke kahna taste karle ke mokah dedo" said Vanshika as everyone laughed.
Manvi was about to start eating, when Virat grabbed her hand. Although he got an evil look from Manvi, he didn't let go. after a lot of evil looks, Virat finally let go and smiled at Manvi. they got lost in each others eyes until they were interupted by kadambari chachi, getting excited "hayeee nii, yeh jodi tho bilkul sharukh aur kajol ki tarah hai" as everyone laughed, virat looked down and manvi blushed.

in the kitchen
Manvi was at the stove cooking, when Virat walked in with a mischievious grin on his face.
"arre, ded futiya. tum badi hogayi kya? tum stove pe reach kar sakti hoon"
"arre chep. mein itni bhi choti nahi thi. Aur mein choti hoon, kyu. problem hain kya?" asked manvi cheekily
"Haan, problem hain" said Virat trying to keep a serious face.
"shaadi kyu kiya phir?" asked manvi
"isliye, ke, mein tumse pyaar karta hoon" replied Virat, leaning in closer to her.
"arre yaar. my food will burn. move na" Said manvi as she pushed him out of the way, and finally served the cooked food.

i know its really short. but its finished!?
Edited by virmanloveraish - 13 years ago

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