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Rose

@--Rose--

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#151

LOVELY update dear:-):-) Awesome:-) loved it:-):-)

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#152

reso jii

will edit soon.

~~EDITED~~

wowie,,,,,,,,,,,,di

so so so amazing.

lovely part

so, 1st of all i wud give the credit of this lovely scene our very own maize field...

maize field u rox...

hope to see few more romance here.

oops! i just forgot...

romance n avy n muski...

UN-POSSIBLE.

long way to go...

.okay, now lets strt wid ud ...

god, sameer is in no diff. condt den avy,

dono ko antique biwiyaan milne wali h...born frm same womb.

ek hi thalli ki chatti batti h dono...

hiv +ve...hehehehehe...

col joke, sooperbo accusing..

god, muski is impressed by him, yes she is...

she found him more striking den others...

but di, wat abt avy- din he found her the most beautiful, at least more than his london chicks...

our daring n dabang muski...

he sneezed...???

hahahahaha...

dat too on muski's palm..

''u r sure dat u dont have any disease like influenza or anthrax...'' god, this was a punch. a hammering one.

lovd it...

the way they blaming each other,

so amazing,...

her palm, and his sneeze.

he is considering her a killer...

i noe, our muski's look r killer enough.

she first glance wud hav surely cleaved ur core, i noe...

she is damn beautiful...

he caught her smiling...

nw he need a explanation...

oops! dats personal...

but muski, even aviyukt is personal too...😳

''and abt the threatening...all u need to be the bride itself...''

dont wry avy...she will be ur bride...pakka, promise one day,...but love her like hell ok???

she will b ur bride...

car kharaab ho gyi...

wow, ab paidal chalo ghar...

ok...intro bhi ho gya..

lekin simran avy ko SWEETIE bola rhi h...

hahahahahaha...

bechare ka status hi udd gya by god..

ladki bana diya...sweetie.

so cute.

''chubby cheeks, rosy lips...long lashes''.sachi main ek chotu baby lagta h...

avy, dnt evn dare to thnk dat u can suppress her...

forget it...

she is a bullet, which cn go right through ur heart...

killing it...

muski maiyan teri jai...!

love u di, for this hilarious ud

thnx,

ud soon

lov u again.

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago

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Mayuri Dev

@mddmayuri

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#153

lovely ud prahelika...⭐️

luved muski n arihan's scene ...it was hilarious...🤣

n arihan n simrans interaction was superb...

cant wait to read more...

plz ud soon...

Edited by mddmayuri - 13 years ago

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

hey sorry dear 4 late comment

bt the update was awesome
loved it

liked their first meeting...wowm lovely scene tha

eeeiii...he sneezed on her hand...
What a scene

so simran know him that he was little bro...she was very sweet as she welcomed him with a smile n affecionately
really he was so handsome that every girl cud fall for him to muskaan kyun nhi

loved their fighting...n she sat on him for several min n she didn.t know that
loved annoyed muskaan

waiting 4 next
update soon
thanks 4 pm
luv u

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#155

o di.

yeh prt tho main likhna bhool hi gyi...

''why r u sitting him on like as if u wanna give him ur hiv virus!'''

god, wat s dis.

so so damn damn..

amazing

dis ws ma fav dialogue...

god, wen i read dis, u noe, i literally jumped.

so mindblasting...

listen dis, ud award goes to simran

she won ma heart wid dis dialogue

she really snapped muski down wid dis

lovd her dis way

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#156

superb pihu...👏

that was really amazing and damn funny...😆

she is sitting on him and he sneezed on her hand...ab muski haath rakh k bhul jayegi toh yahi hoga na...their is no fault of avi...😉

and love both sis fight and avi's and muski's fight...gr8...😛

chubby cheeks,rosy lips and long lashes...🤣...ye saari khubi toh girls ki hoti hai...but avi...😕...🤣...sach main bada maza aya padh k...😆

continue soon...

luv u...😊

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Sonali

@sonalimurat

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#157

loved update very much

so Hamari Muski apni sis se bhag rahi thi n Apne Honewale se akar takara gayi 😉

she sat on Him ooohhh 😲 their fight was really awssome 😆

n Muski thought he is having big eye lashes which are of no use 😆

aweee he sneezed on her hand 😆

n She asked him ...does he having some disease like Influenza 🤣

Poor Avi got bor in two ladies

chubby cheeks,rosy lips and long lashes... 😆 😆

so avi ka intro ho gaya

Muskan n Avi in same house ... so definately high chances of tornado.😆

update soon

Love u ⭐️

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sweetnandu

@sweetnandu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#158

awww.. i just loved the update 😳😊

its so hilarious that i couldnt stop laughing😆

pls update it soon

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Shreya

@sparksfly

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#159

wow...dat was amazing !!! 👏

luvd it !!

Lashy fellow...Tinker Bell...very innovvative...👍🏼

itne romantic scene mein SNEEZ !!!! 🤣

kya lines likhe hain !!! brilliant !!! ⭐️ influenza...serial killer...

HIV positve !!! creative sis hai Muskan !!! 😆

Simran is very sweet ...bro ke jaise treat kiya !!!

even Avi likd it !!

sistr fights r very cute !! 😃

really intrstng story...do conyinue soon...

loads of luv...🤗

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pranita1202

@pranita1202

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#160

PART 1

loved the morning description

and way sunlight shines our sunshine muskaan

simran n her prince charming dreams

loved our smiley's (muskaan) description abt her prince charming

but girl fate has other plans

but no worry u will have u r prince perfect

u r love will make him perfect 4 u❤️

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