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Originally posted by: glossyglassy

Absolutely amazing update!!!

the sneeze part was very funny..😆

Loved ur description esp at the end...waiting to see Muski's reaction

Update soon

Luv u...😊

Originally posted by: ridzzi

amazing superb...👏

so mr.NRI ko india ka mausam kuch raas nahi aya...😆

no worries jald hi a jayega...or i can say...a gaya...last part...😉

continue soon...

luv u...😊

Originally posted by: rashi.rose

Wowww AWESOME update:-) Avi in India wow:-) I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT so much:-):-) cant wait for next part:-) you are an AMAZING writer:-) thanks 4 pm :-) plz cont soon:-):-)

Originally posted by: dhwanimehta23

finally they met!!!!
very nice update😉😉

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Really ! Lovely Update !! Ur A Great Writer !!

Originally posted by: tejjo

Awww...this is not done yr
u stopped it at that moment which was so intresting ..

Rone ka mann kar rha h mera ...mujhe pura padhna h
warna mein strike kar dungi sachi mein

chalo chodo koi ni nxt update mein padh lungi

bt this is called awesomesttt update yr
i love u 4 this

hehehehe...really he didn't hv patient to hear whole story
he thought that old man going to marry
really amazing scene
loved it
luv u 4 this

liked his father's blackmailing session n he succeseded

1 thing i must say 4 avyukt 'BIGDA RAYEES'

loved the last scene
bt u stopped it in between
so cont soon pls pls pls

thanks 4 pm
luv u

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

after a long time a long nd awesome update... but what was that in the ending????? 😕 😕 😕

Originally posted by: sparksfly

sorry 4 l8 reply...😭...me in 12 so...u noe...🤢

d ud rockd !! 👏

really luvd it !!

d words u use r amazng !!

luv d scarcasm !! ⭐️

n d shift of scene...

hope ur well now...do continue soon...

luv u...take care...

Originally posted by: tejjo

i want a update
update
update
update...

Originally posted by: SonaliDhone

sorry dear for late commenting 😕

very Nice update Piuli 👏 👏 👏

loved it thoroughly 😛

n ur discription is awesome

soon Muskan is going to found out his fandom 😛

Thank god finaly Avi become ready to come in India 😛

nahi to Muskaan se mulakat kaise hoti 😳

n Avi India is not that u listened from ur friends

apart from Maleria n Food poisoning ... there is beautiful natural creations - "God Gift "

and one of God special gift soon u will meet her --- Muskaan 😃

No you have been already meet her 😛

loved their scene 😳

first meeting is superb superb superb 😳 😳 😳

loved it

want to see next

plzz dear update sooon

lov u ⭐️