Arhi FF:Mirage Note pg 158 for next thread link - Page 31

Ahh just loved it! :)

Originally posted by: waterunder11

So I finally read the story today and i have no words, im in love. the first most important point - your writing, its just amazing! very very well written. I totally understand the little genuine typos or other whtever mistakes but this had none. good job! second point - your story, who in the world would think of arnav as a part of mafia, i love how you gave a new personality to the character, its fun imagining a new persona for a change. i really enjoyed reading. i would like to know more about arnav's past and I absolutely cannot wait till arnav and khushi meet and hopefully recognize each other!! this is something so different from other stories (not that i dont enjoy them, i love them too). I personally love romance between a criminal and a normal person ;). Cannot wait for your next updates. Please dont hate if I bug too much for quick updates. Oh and also i like the title. soo umm please keep writing as fast as you can and update as soon as possible!! :D

wOw arnav admiring khushi thats too gud and khushi hit that guy dat was awsumn
wow i m just loving your ff
plz update soon il mis it for d nxt 2 days
but u r awsumn

hey rachel,

Originally posted by: bablio09

hey rachel,

loved your update. so neither of them get hurt. (my prediction was wrong) i am really liking the way the story is progressing. your scenes are such descriptive that its so easy to visualise. 👏

thanks for the note of friday / saturday.

btw are you in the ME cause we in the middle east have friday saturdays off 😊

loved it

I read Chapters 1-7 in a go and to say it was interesting is an understatement. You got all the flavours here, mafia,friendship,loyalty,money,power,games and ofcourse romance.

im so sorry for the late reply...i was actually busy and was not able to reply...bt im happy to read these chapters together...the story so interesting...so arnav is there for lavanya...hm...and he is already attracted to khushi...i hope they remember their first meeting atleast khushi...im waiting for your update...

This was amazinggg. What I loved the most was that when the guy was following Khushi out I totally expected Arnav to be the one saving her etc but it was the total opposite and Khushi was able to handle herself! Looove her feisty attitude! <3
Anddd also love this concept of Arnav being in the Mafia, one of the most unique concepts I've read! I really hope you continue the track of him being a gangster right through and then maybe a lot later down the line he will be choosing between Khushi and the life in the Mafia that helped him when he really needed it. Hehe I dunno, just a thought. Really can't wait to see how this progresses, one of my favourite FF's for sure and I'm sure you'll do great with it! :')

WOW love this! Arnav in the mafia? Totally hot! LOL and the writing is beautiful too! Amazing! and khushi is fiesty too! cant wait to see how their relationship will be cuz im lovin it already!