Arhi FF:Mirage Note pg 158 for next thread link - Page 30

HAHAHAHA loved it when Khushi punched the guy and call him Bhai Saab

lovely... what dialogues... bhaissab part reminded me of my colg days whr a guy was troubling me while standing in a bus always pushng back so wen i got irritated i said ...BHAISAAAB YA TO AAP AGEY HO JAIYE YA PICHEY...and bloody his rely was HUM AGEY PICHEY TO HO JAYENGEY PAR AAP HUMEY BHAISAAB NA BULAYEN.

OMG just read all seven chapters together wow how different is this story...luved it!!! And ooo arnav as a baddy now that would be tooo hot...I can imagine how sexy he wud look...ur so good at writing :D can't wait to read the next update :)

i lykd d way khushi reacted !😉

So I finally read the story today and i have no words, im in love. the first most important point - your writing, its just amazing! very very well written. I totally understand the little genuine typos or other whtever mistakes but this had none. good job! second point - your story, who in the world would think of arnav as a part of mafia, i love how you gave a new personality to the character, its fun imagining a new persona for a change. i really enjoyed reading. i would like to know more about arnav's past and I absolutely cannot wait till arnav and khushi meet and hopefully recognize each other!! this is something so different from other stories (not that i dont enjoy them, i love them too). I personally love romance between a criminal and a normal person ;). Cannot wait for your next updates. Please dont hate if I bug too much for quick updates. Oh and also i like the title. soo umm please keep writing as fast as you can and update as soon as possible!! :D

ch 7 was good. So don't worry about too many choices or ideas you have...cos your FF has gripped all of us. Looking forward to more. I love arnav and khushi of your story.
would miss the updates for the next 2 days...thanks anyway.

Aweomse part! Yayy Arnav saw Khushi!

And the stalkerazzi continues! YEEY chapter 7!! That was a great update! Arnav is doing his thaaang, dazzling La :p and khushi, shes always beautiful but more so in red of course. So i can imagine arnav staring at her. But he doesnt remember her, that understandable. Will she remember him? His face was covered in blood... Oh well we'll see! Plus, thhis feisty khushi is TOO awesome! She hit him in the face! Plus that reaction: bad move, bhaisaab! EPIC. Plus, arnav finished it. BOOM. Knock out. I wonder if aman knows whats happening, he is so attuned to arnav :p cant wait for them to meet, this is gonna be of epic proportions. Plus, youre doing really good I must say! :D please dont doubt yourself!

Nice punch ! Hehehehe
like the way the story's headed :)