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Applebee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: Gargee
"I DO NOT want to know about all the beds you shared... I..🤣

Bang On Hon! Really well written... again- thanks for the PM and Update soon!

I try.. oh how I try... 🤣 Thank you for sticking around while I fumble around with this... 😳

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Ankita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#242

m late!!! 😔

The update was awesome as always... This is what i have always loved about Khushi.. How she never reacts the way ASR thinks she will.. LOL.. And such honest replies!! me likey!! me likey!!

And I loved how dey slept on the same bed!!

And pretty pls keep Shyam as far away as u can for as long as possible!!!

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Applebee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: aria009hera
m late!!! 😔

The update was awesome as always... This is what i have always loved about Khushi.. How she never reacts the way ASR thinks she will.. LOL.. And such honest replies!! me likey!! me likey!!

And I loved how dey slept on the same bed!!

And pretty pls keep Shyam as far away as u can for as long as possible!!!

LOL! They had to get the ball rolling! I read some BEAUTIFUL FFs here at IF but what I never understood was how could Khushi, a girl raised in such conservative environment just jump into a man's bed? I guess this was my way of explaining it to myself. 😛 I know, I analyse too much 😛 BTW, you're not late! A lovely sight as always! 😊 Oh. Shyaam is staying away. His role is pretty crucial but small... So YAAY!

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Cytherea

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Posted: 13 years ago

#244

And another update!! *dancing with joy* lol

Where do I begin? At his show of consideration? Or at her brutally honest words? I loved how Khushi manages to catch his off guard every single time.. The way you write about her character makes it seem so real. As for Arnav, I love how his character is evolving- slowly but surely! You're an amazing writer

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Applebee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva
And another update!! *dancing with joy* lol
Where do I begin? At his show of consideration? Or at her brutally honest words? I loved how Khushi manages to catch his off guard every single time.. The way you write about her character makes it seem so real. As for Arnav, I love how his character is evolving- slowly but surely! You're an amazing writer

semester's over. I have waaay too much time at hand. Meh. I'll probably drive ya'll crazy very soon with my constant updates. Plus, I have become addicted to writing THIS! 😛 I am glad. Really glad that you liked this chapter, because honestly speaking I was very worried about it 😆 Thank you for the feedback! THANK YOU! Because reading lovely ones like yours makes me want to write even more and more!

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amzzy gold

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Posted: 13 years ago

#246

omg

fnaksd 4 da update

lu lots amzzy

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hararnav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#247

its going to be tougher on arnav than khushi:-))

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Koeli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#248

its beautiful. I loved arnav's every move. how he handled khushi...i am in love with this part. Dreamland i would say. Keep updating...i will be waiting eagerly for tomorrow's night.

I specially loved these lines

"Khushi... there are no rules to this things" he smiled, a brilliant flash that seemed to fascinate her. She stared at his mouth. Made him feel 20 feet tall. "How about we take this a step at a time?" He said, and then, inspired, added "You can dictate the pace. You will take the final decision for us to be together - when we will be together".

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Applebee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: Appy_Indy
its beautiful. I loved arnav's every move. how he handled khushi...i am in love with this part. Dreamland i would say. Keep updating...i will be waiting eagerly for tomorrow's night.
I specially loved these lines
"Khushi... there are no rules to this things" he smiled, a brilliant flash that seemed to fascinate her. She stared at his mouth. Made him feel 20 feet tall. "How about we take this a step at a time?" He said, and then, inspired, added "You can dictate the pace. You will take the final decision for us to be together - when we will be together".

awww thank you! I am really glad you like it! I wont be updating any more tonight but tomorrow, well watch out! :D Have fun until then! 🥱