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Applebee

@Applebee

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: farheen75
OMG...mr raizada's gonna make her go insane...if he continues like she is gonna go up in flames and plz u have to update the next chapter to take us out of our misery...loving this ss a lot...thanx for writing such a beautiful story and sharing it with us.

Why, thank YOU for reading and commenting. If I write, it is because of the support and encouragement comments such as yours gives to me. So yaay! Enjoy this one while I cook up the next! 😆

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Koeli

@Koeli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#222

Boss that was a cliff hanger.
Never felt so drooly. Please please update soon.
I am eagerly waiting for khushi to feel wet now.
I meant how on the earth she can resist him and his hardness

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hararnav

@hararnav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#223

good,,, khushi's brain is finally wrking.. she understood wat her hubby dear wants

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Aisha

@asha...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#224

I caught up...you know exactly how to keep a reader on the edge of their seat...😆

Very gripping... :D

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lara3110

@lara3110

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Posted: 13 years ago

#225

That was awesome. You are building up the momentum😃

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prerna

@prernawaghray

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Posted: 13 years ago

#226

hey
great part
arnav's stalking her in their home lol liking it :p
poor khushi... she's stuck between desires n principles
waiting for ur next installment
update soon :)

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Sophia Ali

@SweetSophie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#227

oh my...nani and anjali have such gutter minds...I think they've been haunting IF a tad too much😆

Arnav's character just ooozes sensuality, whether it's his thoughts or his actions. My one complaint is you've made khushi a bit too innocent, but the story's still great so far. Keep writing.

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Applebee

@Applebee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: SweetSophie
oh my...nani and anjali have such gutter minds...I think they've been haunting IF a tad too much😆
Arnav's character just ooozes sensuality, whether it's his thoughts or his actions. My one complaint is you've made khushi a bit too innocent, but the story's still great so far. Keep writing.

haha! I tried to think realistically. You, know inside Khushi's skin and all that. Payal never seems particularly innocent to me but Khushi's isn't exactly innocence. It's more of naivety. It's a quality some has, and then some don't :P