OS:Take me out! (pg. 12 part 2A, part 2B pg.16)

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tibs09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

excellent ...so Rakshas was not expecting he spent 50 freaking lakhs on this girl ..eh...

hope Aman still has a job ...eh ...LOL

loved it ...look forward to the second part...

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SanzBarbie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Awesome OS dear.. loved khushi and payal's freindship here..

but why is Arnav startled to see Khushi.. was not he expecting her??

Pls dear write a part 2 of this..

loved it so much..

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DhwaniKS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Y is he surprised ...pls continue

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SedonaScarlet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Are you kidding me?!

THAT ROCKED! :D

I cant wait for the next one! :D

Thanks for the PM!

Do update soon!! :D

P.S-Update Retribution? Pretty Please!! I'm dying for an update :]

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pc17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: SedonaScarlet
Are you kidding me?!
THAT ROCKED! :D
I cant wait for the next one! :D
Thanks for the PM!
Do update soon!! :D

P.S-Update Retribution? Pretty Please!! I'm dying for an update :]

Oh gosh you people with your demands! 😆 Only joking! Retribution...hmmm yes I vaguely remember that...the ff I write...hmm yes. Ok I will do. I'm kind of suffering from a block on that front. I just feel really crappy due to a damn cold at the moment so I' trying to transport myself to a happy place. Once I'm settled down I'll attempt to switch on angst mode and give you a decent update.

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Homeslice

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

OMG GOD!!
This 🤬 AWESOMEE!!! :)
Please I BEG OF YOU TO MAKE A SERIES of ATLEAST 10 PARTS!!
PLEASEE!! :D

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pc17

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Asr_BsLover
OMG GOD!!
This 🤬 AWESOMEE!!! :)
Please I BEG OF YOU TO MAKE A SERIES of ATLEAST 10 PARTS!!
PLEASEE!! :D

LOL! NO please don't beg me! Please! I can barely keep up with the two measly ffs I have at the moment. I am such a failure-other writers seem to have 5 or 6 going at once. Don't know how they do it! Kudos to them 😊

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snoopy84

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

loved it why was he so shocked didnt he ask aman to bid on her?

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Swati Hansraj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

FIRST of all plz do write the second part and Plz plz PM me. IT has been ages that i have read something this interesting. Just loved it. Loved all Khushi's self-talks and most of all loved the last thought that she muttered to herself looking at the bluetooth that ASR had in his ears.

"He'll probably have to get it surgically removed now. It's been stuck in his ear for so long…"

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Applebee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#70

oh! continue! Please please please won't you continue? :D Mills & Boons wrapped up and Indianized so prettily! It's hardly ever done with such panache! Kudos. I hope you continue soon <3

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