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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: muqualp

great part yaar! love it! make angad's entry soon! come on!

thanx muqu! angad's entry🤔, i will think abt it😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
hello guys, i thought u people will try to guess wats on the poster, but no one did 😆 neways here is the next part.

PART 9

kripa was staring at the poster on which it was written

" hello everyone. me the 11 year prefect welcome u all to our rocking guitarist george's show, this is on this friday at 7pm in the school academy. don't miss it!!!"

(shaz-s, si-simran, simon-sim)
k: shaz, who is george? ( guitarist reminded kripa angad)
s: george? oh he is...
someone: hai shaz and simon
both: hai simran!
s: kripa she is...
k: i know. another indian girl. hello simran
si: hi kripa
sim: don't u guys think we r getting late for the class
s: oh yeah, come on kripa.
si: see u guys later
everyone: bye simran
k: i am confused wiht ur names. everyone has s at the starting.
s: yeah, i know 😆

their first period was Pe(physical education). kripa, shaz, simon changed into their pe dresses. they had trampolining that day.

s: kripa do u know trampolining?
k: no
s: then go and say to miss bono, she will help u.
k: miss bono?
s: she is our trampoline instructor
k: ok.

kripa went and told miss bono abt it.

b: don't worry kripa, can u come today here in the lunch break. i am sure u will get everything in just 15 mins.
k: ok mam, i will come in the lunch break.
b: kripa, u can watch them doing it for the time being
k: ok miss

simon and shaz were equally good as the other english girls.
after the first class its break.

k: wow shaz and simon, u both r great at it.
s: no kripa, we r nothing in front of caitlin and her friends.
k: caitlin? oh yeah, that girl who came and said hai to me today in our class. is she, u know a bad character?
s: not at all, she is really good but we don't like some of her friends.
k: why? any special reasons?
sim: nop. but they r very beauty concious, they think that they r the most beautiful women in the world. but caitline, she hardly puts some make up on. but she is really beautiful
k: right!

the bell rang and they were going to their classes.
sim: sorry kripa but u don't have ur english class with us.
k: wat? omg . now how will i know where it is?
s: wait a sec, u have ur eng clas with caitline, we will ask her.

just they were speaking, caitline passed them.
c: hello everyone
everyone: hai caitline, canu help u s, please
c: of course!
s: can u please take kripa to ur class as she is having her eng class with u
c: why not.

kripa went with caitline and she got to meet some friends of caitline's. while she was listening to her eng class, she felt someone staring at her. she turned to the back and she saw a boy smiling at her and he said

boy: hai kripa
k: 😕 hai.

ok thats it guys. hope u like this part. i will continue tomorrow


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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey!

I like ur fan fic -i like that its set like when they are kids - lol!

I bet its Angad that said Hi to her!!

But I was just wondering - if her dad n mum had moved there 2gether it would make sense but y would her mum leave her dad for a job ?like the whole point of being married is stayin together... n y would she wana go to england sooo bad if her dad wasnt gona b there? - n her dad will b all alone = thats so shady!

oh well I guess its just a story!
nice update continue sooN!
Chandini (",)
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Chandini

Hey!

I like ur fan fic -i like that its set like when they are kids - lol!

I bet its Angad that said Hi to her!!

But I was just wondering - if her dad n mum had moved there 2gether it would make sense but y would her mum leave her dad for a job ?like the whole point of being married is stayin together... n y would she wana go to england sooo bad if her dad wasnt gona b there? - n her dad will b all alone = thats so shady!

oh well I guess its just a story!
nice update continue sooN!
Chandini (",)

thanx and wonderful questions.😃 mum left dad b'coz she thought that if she get a job in england she can fulfill kripa's wish of going to england. kripa thought that her mother was happy that she could fulfill kripa's wish and now if she says i don't want to go to england, she might sumtimes make her mom sad.. yeah, ur right, its shady. but i will try my level best to get them together. hope i answered ur questions.

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Mehandikhan

great plz cont soon. 👏

thanx a lot and i will continue tomorrow

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Posted: 19 years ago
wow loved the last part.....actually all the parts i think the boy might be angad or josh
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: khushi19

wow loved the last part.....actually all the parts i think the boy might be angad or josh

thanx and keep reading to find out 😉

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Posted: 19 years ago

here is the next part

PART 10

boy: hai kripa
k: 😕 hai
k: ( to caitline) caitline who is that boy?
c: oh him, u should have seen the posters outside, right?
k: yeah. is he george?
c: yeah, every girls r mad about him. they just luv him!
k: ok, do u like him?
c: wat a question, of course i do! he is so handsome 😳

for the next 5 mins caitline kept on describing him and how good he is and kripa was getting bored like anything.

finally, the bell rang and along with everyone kripa went out with caitline.

g: bye kripa
k: huh?😕 (then she sees george.) oh bye george!

the next period was free for kripa but she went with caitline to the french class.

miss ramsden(french teacher) had a word with kripa and then the class started.

r: students, kripa won't be doing french with u people and she will be doing some other work this period. so i don't want anyone to disturb her.
spencer: ut, why can't she do french with us?
r: b'coz she doesn't know that language and u people have to do GCSE's this year, she is not doing french GCSE.
s: ok
after teaching miss ramsden started asking questions on the topic that they studied.

r: so, wat do we say for color black in french?

kripa was doing some english work but also concentrated in wat miss was saying during the class and she put her hand up expecting everyone's hand up. but she was shocked to see that only her hand went up.

r: kripa 😕
k: erm. is it noire?
r: how did u know dear?
k: is it right
r: yes it is.

miss ramsden continued asking questions and kripa answered most of them along with spencer, shaz, alex and simon.

kripa was feeling someone's stare at her whole the time. now she couldn't control herself and she turned back and she saw spencer staring at her. she turned to the front very quickly ignoring it.

the bell rang and it was lunch break.while leaving the french class..
shaz: wow kripa, u r amazing. without knowing french u can say this much. my god! i am jealous of u
k: oh please, don't praise me. oh,i have to go to miss bonno. catch u later.
shaz and simon: bye kripa
k: bye

kripa went to meet miss bonno, she knocked at the door but no one opened, she waited. somene was coming that way and it was george.

g: hai kripa
k: hai george
g: wat r u doing here?
k: i came to meet miss bonno
now george was walking closer and closer to kripa and she was feeling uncomfortable.
k: george, i am leaving, i don't think she is here. bye

kripa was leaving but george caught her hand.
k: excuse me 😕
g: yes
k: can u please leave my hand
g: no
k: wat? i said leave my hand 😡
george still didn't leave her handbut kripa somehow freed her hand from his. she gave him a cold stare and left. but george just smiled and luked at her.

ok thats it for today. i will continue tomorrow. i know its boring, but i will try my level best to make the other parts interesting.






Edited by del_geo - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
aww that was good 😊 👏 nerdie kripa 😆 .. continue soon 😃

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