KYPH FF- PYAAR?PG108! at last

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lol, i was thinking of starting my own ff in relation to KYPH. its my first attempt to write a ff so kindly bear with me😆. this one is gonna be different. this starts from angad's and kripa's childhood and let me be truthful, this one has some relation with my real life. one more thing - there won't be romance and stuff for a long time😆, mostly its fighting, suspense and love, only at last!!!!!!!

so here goes my first part, i will introduce the characters when u come across them.

PART 1

we see a huge building, on which it is written Bhavans Vidya Mandir its one of the famous school in India ( i don't know abt that😆) the camera takes us to different classrooms . on reaching one classroom it stops! year 7 is written outside the classroom. we see two girls sitting at a corner. one of them luks annoyed, the other one is having fun by irritating her. ht egirl who is annoyed now puts her head down not showing her face.

( i will name them G1 and G2)

G1: stop annoying me! how many times i should say i don't like him, then why r u irritating me?

G2: from 4th year i started this and do u think if u say to me now to stop it , i will? of course not! by the way, i know it very well that u don't like him, but it s really fun u know.

G1: its fun for u, but not for me!!!

(the girl now stands up and we see her face, its our childhood kripa😆!!, then we see another girl laughing at her, she is her friend sruthi)

Kripa - K, Sruthi -S

S: don't ask me why i am laughing. i will give u one reason, i like the way ur face luks when u get annoyed.

K: Sruthi, agar wo thoda be handsome hota na tho mein tumse kuch nahin kehthi, lekin he is.....er . he just knows how to play a guitar and he is good in studies, but he is not at all handsome🤢

S: wat?😕

K:- just kidding! but he is not handsome .

some one enters the classroom, kripa becomes silent, but sruthi can't stop giggling. the boy comes and sits far way from them. he stares at kripa and her friend. now sruthi goes silent. the environment is completely changed when a group of boys and girls enters the room. along with them, came the tutor of the class, Miss Margherita(M)

M: good morning students!

E: good morning miss!

M: first answer ur names( like we say present miss )

the boy who was staring at kripa was talking to another boy sitting next to him. the boy who stared at kripa, was searchign for something in his bag now, he gets it at last.

B: got it!

now we see his face, its none other than our childhood angad.

M: (miss now reaches kripa's name) Kripa Angad.

Kripa and angad: Present miss.

Sruthi: here they go again! (she starts laughing)

A: sorry miss, i thought u called my name. its really confusing.

M: anagd this is not the first time i am calling the attendance, how much time i have to say kripa comes before u in the attendance, i know kripa's surname and ur name is the same! but if u listen, u wouldn't make any more mistakes.

A: ok miss

K:(kripa to sruthi) stop laughing! there is nothing funny going on here!

S: sorry, but i can't stop laughing. just think abt it from 4th year...........

...........

actually, what the problem is, Kripa's full name is Kripa Angad! and Angad's full name is Angad Khanna. from 4th year both of them have studied in the same class and one or the other gets confused with their full names. it happened that one time miss called kripa angad and both kripa and angad came to her when she actually wanted only kripa! the next time miss wanted both kripa and angad, she called kripa angad and ngad thought she is only calling kripa and he stayed in his seat. so now classmates have started pairing them as thier name goes very well kripa angad khanna! they call this pair KAK. kripa is really annoyed b'coz of this. wherever she goes people started asking abt angad to her.

well, i think i will stop here! i will only continue if someone wants to read it. so i need ur comments please.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey great first part!! taht was just awesome ...seems really different...continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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sounds very interesting and cute continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!it's such a fantastic idea of pairing up their names!!! omg!! plz plz plz do cont. soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanx alot for ur comments. i am happy that u people liked it. i will post the next part today itself but it will take time.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow i love the beggining! little A-K cho cute! really different! sounds interesting! please cont soon!
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thanx for ur comments. i will continue today
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here is the second part. this one is really a stupid part, but i will try my level best to make the next part interesting.( not a joke but angad is ugly in my story 😆 )

PART 2
kripa - k, kripa's mom gayathri - G
k: mom papa ka nam angad kisne rekha?
g: tumare dadaji ne
k: yuk, kitna stupid name hain na?
g: kripa, behave urself! i think angad is a very nice name.
k: sorry mom. but angad is not a good name as u think. i just don't like it.
g:- thats enough kripa.wat happended to u today? do u have any idea wat rubbish u r speaking?
k: sorry mom.
g: ok its fine.
k:now go and change and do ur homeworks.
g:ok mom. sorry again.
k: its ok beta.
gayathri leaves and kripa goes to her room

next day in her school. sruthi comes running towards kripa in the break)

s: hello kripa ...... angad khanna is..
k: shut up. there is a limit for everything.
s: 😕 wat r u saying? i was saying that kripa, angad khanna is standing back of u.
k: wat? (kripa turns back and sees angad)oh, hi angad.
a: hai kripa , hi sruthi. well, i just came to say that, i am going to England for my studies.
s: no way. u can't go like that. now how can i annoy kripa if u r going?
a: wat?
k: its nothing. she is just speaking some kind of rubbish. ur really going(she is very happy lol)
a: yeah, i am going
k: i wish u all the bestfor ur future, have a gr8 time there..
s :and never forget kripa
k: (whispering to sruthi -shut up). ok, when r u going?
a: just after the final examination
k:- ok, so u r with us upto the end of year 7
a: yeah (the bell rings)i have to go. see u later .
(angad goes)
k: yipee! i am so happy that he is going. now u will stop annoying me and now i have some scope in my studies b'coz that brainy is going.
s: its ok kripa. i am not going ot leave u like that.
k: sorry darling. but for ur information, in our school, there r no students having name angad. ok? did i make it clear now?
s: ok ok

( final exams came. everyone did well and as expected angad topped the class. it was the last day of their exam and 7th year.)

angad came to kripa and sruthi after his exam)

a: hello, just came to say bye
k: bye angad study well, well that comment is useless, b'coz u r super at studies. well have a gr8 time there.
s: me and kripa r gonna miss u very much( kripa gives a pinch on sruthi's hand without angad seeing)
s: ouch!
a: any problem?
s: nothing just...
k: ok angad, i think me and sruthi have to leave now. goodbye, some day or the other if we r lucky ( kripa thinks to herself, if i am unlucky) we will surely meet.
s: bye angad
a: bye

sorry guys, i know it was a stupid part, but its very hard to like write some real incident into a script.

now i understand how much hardwork these ff writers have put to entertain us. i put my hats off to all ff writers. i promise to write a good one very soon

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey nice ff sooo far...itz different!!!! i like it!!! btw im gonna update mine today 😊
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Originally posted by: hawoo

hey nice ff sooo far...itz different!!!! i like it!!! btw im gonna update mine today 😊

yipee! i am looking forward to reading ur ff.

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