OS: Unanswered Questions. (Update - Page 13)

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hari93

@hari93

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Beautifully written...

Hope this is wat happens in the Show...

Loved the concern Khushi has for Arnav after all tat he did to her...

Loved Arnav's hope tat my be he is wrong abt her... it shows how much he loves her.. he knows tat she is innocent but the ASR in him is not letting him completely trust her...

Their emotions have been portrayed beautifully...

Loved it... nice work...

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ARSHIfan001

@ARSHIfan001

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Nice update ... Finally he realized his mistake is unforgivable

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Sana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Loved both the parts! 👍🏼 The way you portrayed Arnav's hurt, his anguish.. too good!! You write really well... 👏And Khushi answer to him was aptly described.. I loved your other OS: Trapped too.. Please continue both of these OS's... 😉

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velangini

@velangini

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

hey loved it so much

it was amazing👏

small points like khushi looking at stars for strength show how much you stuck to the characteristics of her⭐️

khushi stood up for herself at last

you have brought out their emotions in a subtle and perfect way

please continue

will love to read more

thanks for pm🤗

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sarra0

@sarra0

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

great update, loved how Khushi was dignified and got her point across without theatrics. update soon

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jenshad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Amazing :) ArHi Are Living In A Misunderstanding :(

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Tejal Felicia

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

good going! This is the young, mature and determined Khushi that I want when she finally faces Arnav over Shyam and shows her disgust at his belief of a stupid scene he didn't understand. EXACTLY THIS!

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nareshSV

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

woah...thats intense...khushi is really smart...where as arnav poor guy...

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snoopy84

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

that was great hope something like this happens on the show were khushi stands her ground and doesnt apologise and allow him to get away with how he has treated her because as much as i want them happy and together i want to him to have to grovel and suffer a little first

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smitar

@smitar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#90

It is good that all the pain is finally out in the open. Healthier than being bottled up.

Earlier Bitwaa was killing himself with thoughts of khushi in Jijaji's arms. Now he can munch on having misunderstood and hurt Khushi.