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nicely wriiten...u have well captured the characters without going overboard with apologies regret etc...perhaps that is for the next update...but like the way the MU is getting cleared. I always want it to be spelt out as feel its much more effective to clear any MU mutually rather than by a 3rd person. Picture is worth thousand words etc no longer holds with today's avl technologies and aankhein dhoka dey sakti hai again etc. So Q & A sessions are better trust biulding exercises.
There after that lecture which am no longer sure what sparked it...must be that I woke up on wrong side, I will zip it with a Liked the update plszz continue.
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