FF(Arhi): Lavender [Thread 2 link - p. 159]

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Chapter 6:

why was my heart beating at that conversation... her in his arms...

"You have certainly come a long way since peeping through the hole in this very room into someone else' afternoon tryst and telling me that you don't know whether you are f**king with my clients or watching four play."

😊

damn i think my heart stopped at the end...the hair pin... the kicking out of the building which to my romantic heart just means him wanting her to go home...

Chapter 7:

he has this underlying vulnerability... that i wish would just scream out and break through... the slightly hidden caring nature- that may be one reason I keep watching the show... waiting for it to just explode where he will be unbearably too caring!

agitation at not seeing her...

Ms. Khushi Kumari Gupta was the single best example.

softening

helpless

whisper

way to clench my heart...

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#152

annnddd this just keeps getting better and better...as expected!

"Only the things I hide from myself, Lee. Nothing else."

BRILLIANT!!!

damn... so reading the first 8 chapters in one go... i don't know if that was a good or bad idea. I seem to now be sitting here 2 in the morning... wanting MORE!

Very excited for more!! :)

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ashred12

@ashred12

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#153

*sigh* no arhi... but lee-bee scene was cute n sweet...wont be surprised if lavanya starts matchmaking...

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savvz

@savvz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

nice update..

girls bonding over soup... :)

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#155

great update loving the female bonding was real sweet cant wait for the next update

thanks for the pm

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3llie

@3llie

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Your story really grips the reader, I just keep on wondering what will happen next. And you tell the story effortlessly, it doesn't seem like your trying to be artsy and write in a pretentious manner. Your words flow naturally

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#157

At least Lavanya is there for her! Even she could tell that something might be cooking here 😆

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-publicenemy-

@-publicenemy-

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: 3llie
Your story really grips the reader, I just keep on wondering what will happen next. And you tell the story effortlessly, it doesn't seem like your trying to be artsy and write in a pretentious manner. Your words flow naturally

That's a great compliment :) Thank you!

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Soumya

@Siaa_Rickman

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#159

I lovve Lee and I might as well add I love you for back to back updates :D That was awesome... Loved the way Arnav was so casual abt talking abt periods with her and even I was shocked ' as a friend' didn't expect that from high n mighty ASR!!! Khushi calls him devil which I find damn adorable for some odd reason..haha..!!

He found her with the hairpin he gave her...now he's gonna rack his brain..poor guy to find the various the various reasons why she wore it!!

Awaiting eagerly the next, update ASAP and thanks a ton n more for the pm :)