FF(Arhi): Lavender [Thread 2 link - p. 159] - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago
cant wait for the next part...thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

I love Lavanya 😊

And so as per precedent...will we end up loving Lavanya and the DC comic crazy Sohan more than AJR/K...waiting and watching...
Edited by serialwatcher16 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb twas...i just love lavanya in here...i wish she was similar in d show as well...playing an imp role in arhi z life
Kudos to deir frndship...i hope lee does something about d doubts dat r dre in her mind...and plays a cupid...and v get to c some arhi moments...

Plz plz...keep updating...
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was so sweet, loved the update😊
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hmm La is right,, The lady doth protest too much!! Khushi if you think Arnav doesn't have the hots for you then you are clearly in denial! LOL
Loved the update.. Loved how well they get along
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOL Lee to the rescue! Hope Lee understands this relationship because apparently khushi and arnav don't have a clue! loved the update though. again ur writing captivates me! cant wait to find out what happens next!
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Posted: 13 years ago
The like button isn't cooperating! >:( thanks for the pm, and please continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
OKKKAAAYYY...

so just started reading this!! And can i just express my initial happiness? I know some aren't a fan of certain characters or plots in this show... but there is something that keeps making me watch it. i know from being the avid fan I am (of your writing) that this will be a completely different take and perspective something that i will come to love way more than the show... very excited!

now onto this interestingly refreshing... different... yet signature...FF.

Chapter 1:

LOVED IT! oh man I could actually visualize the expressions and wished that she would actually act like this. there are moments when i think in the show that she is about to burst out... then she doesn't but i liked how you have painted her.
the 'birthright' part- brilliant!
the silly twit---- her repeating it as her mantra, him calling her that...slightly broke my heart.
omg!! perfection:
Please do not call me by all three of my names all the time. You know what my name is. I know what my name is. Adding all three all the time would not alter our knowledge one way or the other.
damn what a powerful start!

Chapter 2:

Get laid! freaken priceless! this is such a different FF... i am seriously smiling through it... for now at least... lets hope it lasts.
"I am ignorant, Ms. Kashyap. Not Good. I don't know why people confuse the two."
very interestingly put... Sometimes I do think experience robs one of their innocence!

Chapter 3:

just to start off... not read the chapter yet (writing comments as i read) BUT from the title... does this have anything to do from her experiencing "getting laid"?

edit--- awesome!!!
i like how she is so keen on learning... the words and the actions. :)
damn i am liking this comedic side of you!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 4:

wohhh a leap? and a damn big one! the flowers bit was very cool... each one signifying something about the woman.

what a question to ask? damn I wasn't thinking he was going to come out and ask it!

damn he doesn't give an inch eh?

Chapter 5:

YAYAYYAY his perspective!!!
the description of her clothing made me actually see it. her hair falling, the file falling, him grabbing her...

you realize you make me want jalebis now

its the last bit... that bit of him noticing certain things... her clothes, her earrings, her smell...that make me sigh for him.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update.
I like d bonding b/w lee & bee:-)
thanks 4 d pm

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