REBIRTH..NEW STORY!!! PART 19updated!!!

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Rkingini

@Rkingini

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: saikrishnars

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I WAS PLANNING STG ALONG THOSE LINES ONLY!!!!
SUGGESTION ACCEPTED!!!
...thanku
Edited by Rkingini - 13 years ago

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vaselisa

@vaselisa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

I agree give them a grand meeting...also i can suggest writing something...like...khushi is trying hard to thank him...but is not able to meet him everytym...or see him...something like that...just a suggestion...or u can write other way u like...but...really nice one!!

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saikrishnars

@saikrishnars

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: vaselisa
I agree give them a grand meeting...also i can suggest writing something...like...khushi is trying hard to thank him...but is not able to meet him everytym...or see him...something like that...just a suggestion...or u can write other way u like...but...really nice one!!

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wow!!!!

i am getin so many nice suggestions!!!!

thanx!!!

wil surely take it up...i will try and cum up with sth interesting!!!!

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prabhata

@prabhata

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Beautiful 😊... pls PM me when u update it...

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PRI

@ambishika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

really nice plzz do pm when you continue

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Prachi

@1Rudrani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

hey... that's a nice start...
go for it...👏
but remember ... don't do that typicals like he saves her, 😲... n cause of that she is being teasing by all ppl intentionaly provoked xeviour 😭... she is broken 😭. 😭...asr supports her..😊. fights with vamps or goons for her ...etc. etc. 😡 IT SOUNDS LIKE CRAP NOW-A-DAYS...😕
plz dont do that typical hindi style... keep their characters like they r... he is ASR ( + soft Arnav inside...) and she is bubbly Khushi ( + remember She doesn't lool like but she is lioness inside...) 😛😉
make it unique...all the best...👍🏼
and don't forget to pm me...😉

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Light_Rose

@Arshi_lovergal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Nice one keep it up👍🏼

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lmathew77

@lmathew77

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

This story is so good. It's a new concept. Loved that ASR protected Khushi even before knowing her. What a hero! Please continue.

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saikrishnars

@saikrishnars

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: 1Rudrani
hey... that's a nice start...
go for it...👏
but remember ... don't do that typicals like he saves her, 😲... n cause of that she is being teasing by all ppl intentionaly provoked xeviour 😭... she is broken 😭. 😭...asr supports her..😊. fights with vamps or goons for her ...etc. etc. 😡 IT SOUNDS LIKE CRAP NOW-A-DAYS...😕
plz dont do that typical hindi style... keep their characters like they r... he is ASR ( + soft Arnav inside...) and she is bubbly Khushi ( + remember She doesn't lool like but she is lioness inside...) 😛😉
make it unique...all the best...👍🏼
and don't forget to pm me...😉