REBIRTH..NEW STORY!!! PART 19updated!!!

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prologue and chapter 1 link:
index
chapter 2 and 3:page 1

chapter 4:page 3

chapter 5:page 6

chapter 6:page 8

chapter 7:page 13

chapter 8:page 17

chapter 9:page 20

chapter 10:page 24

chapter 11:page 28

chapter 12:page 32

chapter 13:page 36

chapter 14:page 43

chapter 15:page 47

chapter 16:page 52

chapter 17:page 58

chapter 18:page 62

chapter 19:page 66

CHAPTER 2

" Arnav! are u ok?"
Arnav's scream had woken karan up from his slumber!
"Was it the same one?" asked karan...
Arnav looked up to meet the anxious eyes of his best frnd Karan Malhotra...
"Yes! It is becoming more and more clear nowadays!! I don't know what to make of these dreams! It is as if i am missing sumthing obvious...a part of me!!!"
"And everytym it is the same girl,in the same white dress, except that i haven't seen her face till now!"
"It is so wierd"
"What is happening to me karan?"
karan was as perplexed as his best buddy...
he knew that Arnav started having these dreams sum months ago after he had gone to Nainital with his family 4 a vaccation...
It was a mystery they had yet to solve!!!
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To say that ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA was popular in the college would have been an understatement!!!
He was the most happening person in the campus and ppl would hve given a hand and leg just to be in his frnds circle...but then,it was not to be!
ASR as he was popularly known as was quite choosy when it came to his close frnds and tht elite, most talked about group constituted of karan Malhotra and his sister Sidhi Malhotra and Aditya Bhatra!
ASR was rich,intelligent,charming and most important of all - he was the most HANDSOM guy in the campus( ofcourse that goes without saying😃)
It was a treat to watch ASR and Karan enter the clg campus on their bikes,drawing attention from each and every female member of the campus!!
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As Aditya raised his hand 4 a high five with karan,he noticed that ASR was completely lost in his thoughts...
Aditya: " Don't tell me it is abt those dreams again!"
Arnav snapped to attention...
Aditya: "cumon ASR, drop will u! It is sth u can't explain,neither can we 4 tht matter!
It has been going on 4 sumtym right! Just forget abt it...it will stop abrubtly just lyk how it started!
They don't mean anything! so stop wasting ur tym contemplating!!!! ok?
Today our junis are cuming and don't u wanna hear the preperations we have done to welcum them?"
Aditya winked at karan!
karan:"oh yeah! How culd i hve forgotten tht?"
"cumon ASR..."
ASR: "U guys go along! I will be in a min"
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Mr. Shah was getting tensed thinking about how his daughter would be coping up in her new college...after all it was her first day!
The new scholarship programme launched by the govt had landed her in one of the most elite colleges in darjeeling and she had left two days before to stay with her best frnd Roopanjana...
It had taken all of his willpower,not to stop her from going bcoz she was everything to him...it was as if a part of him had been torn away from him...it was physically painful to see his bundle of joy leave him...
YES!
HIS BUNDLE OF JOY...
HIS HAPPINESS...
KHUSHI!!!!
he always remembered in wonder,how she had got that particular name...sure,it was apt 4 her! but then...it was kind of a mystery too!
flash back***
Everybody had gathered for the naming ceremony!
"Ridhima"
" lavanya"
"No! cumon! that is too common nowadays!"
"let her father decide!"
"why can't her mom decide?"
Finally after hours of going around in circles and not able to reach a consensus, he had asked everybody to write down their choice in small chits...
he had put all of those tiny chits in front of the idol of devi maiyah and completely surrendered the task of naming his daughter to Her!
What came out was 'khushi'...
He held the chit out and said..."khushi...so whose suggestion was that?"
Nobody came forward!
His eyes scanned the grp of realatives neighbours and wellwishers in front of him...
still no response!!!
How culd tht b possible?
"Subh muharat nikla jaraha hai...jaldi karo!"
pandit ji had urged him...
He glanced at his devi maiyah who radiated serenity and whispered the name 'khushi' into the ears of his cutiepie!
end of flashback****
And now she had grown into a bubbly young girl and he was proud of his daughter who radiated happiness wherever she went!!!!
He prayed 4 his daughter's wellbeing...afterall it was her first day in the clg!!!!
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now guys...wat i am trying to do is make a proper base 4 the story...introducing the characters and all...the real confrontation is due!!!
but tht wld b only wen i recieve enough feedback on wat i hve written so far!!!!😃
sooo plz read and review!!!!
it is my first attempt at writing sth...hope it is not absolute crap!😕

CHAPTER 3 - SCROLL DOWN!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hmmmz nice update. pm me plz
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CHAPTER 3

Khushi did not know whether to be awed or to be intimidated by what she saw in front of her!
Her new clg campus was simply enormous and breathtakingly beautiful!
It had an aura of serenity!
She was completely taken in by the sight that she was oblivious of the glances others were giving her!!!


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All the junis were rounded up in the spacious auditorium!
They were in 4 a little treat now...thought Aditya excitedly!!!!
What kind of seniors wld hve wasted a golden opportunity to rag their juniors,on their first day?
Noway...!
Haq bante hai yaar!!!
As he sat on the dias of the auditorium with karan, his eyes searched 4 the first bakra!!!
The junis were huddled 2gether in one corner of the room, each one trying to hide behind the other!!!
"You...in that red shirt over there ...Come forward!!" Aditya's voice rang out!!!!
The boy moved ahead, trembling from head to toe,only to be asked to enact out a scene from Devdas!!!
As he fumbled through the dialogues,Aditya and karan moved behind their frnds to relax themselves and watch the show...
After a while,one of the seniors motioned a girl forward and as she came into view,Aditya shared an 'unbelievable' kinda look with karan!!
She was wearing a pom-pom or watever the hell it was called...
That too in one of the elite colleges of darjeeling!
She was in for it...thought karan as he took in the duppatta clad figure in front of him!!!


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Khushi froze with fear!!!
"Hey Devi maiyah! raksha karna!"
She could feel everybody's gaze on her...and she was self-conscious as she moved ahead,nervously!!!

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Xavier looked at the girl in front of him with disdain!!!
Typical village belle!
What the hell was she doing in a clg lyk this?
clearly she was looking completely out of place!
And he was gonna show her the result of trying to fit herself into a place,where she had no right to be!
"So tell me baby! wanna shake a leg with me?" Xavier asked, leaning towards her...
khushi: "ji?"
Xavier: "oops...
I should have asked in hindi I guess!!!
Right???"
As everbody started laughing,khushi could not stand it anymore...but as she turned, she felt a pull at her dupatta!!
It was as if her heart stopped beating!
She stood rooted to the spot, when suddenly Xavier removed her dupatta in one tug and threw it on the floor beside him!!!
Khushi was shocked beyond words!
she hoped that the earth would open up and take her in!!
she felt exposed!
As she tried to cover her front with her hands,Xavier moved forward as if to touch her!!!

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karan was feeling uneasy regarding the turn of events!!!
karan: "Aditya! dont u think Xavier has gone too far?"
Aditya: "yeah! He always gets a little carried away!! Bugger!!! Guess we have to interfere before the matter gets out of hand!!!"
But before any of them could even move a muscle, a resounding slap reverberated throughout the room!!!

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Khushi had closed her eyes in fear and disgust,when she heard the sound of the slap!!!

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Xavier looked up at the person who had slapped him and his eyes widened in disbelief!!!!!

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karan looked at the drama that was unfolding right in front of him...
karan glanced at his buddy and saw that Aditya was as stunned as he was!!!!
Everyone had a shocked expression to see a bewildered Xavier staring at a furious ASR!!!!!!

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GUYS...THIS IS IT FOR NOW...WILL UPDATE AFTER I SEE THE RESPONSE...SO PLZ READ AND COMMENT!😊


chapter 4 on page 3...



Edited by saikrishnars - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome.
btw thanks 4 the pm...
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goood!!!👏

great job Arnav!!!





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Edited by karisma - 13 years ago
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pls continue...i loved it...its kinda fresh...hey i have a suggestion...dont make khushi see arnav now...give them a grant 1st meeting...if u dont do it ...no probs...
Edited by Rkingini - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rkingini

pls continue...i loved it...its kinda fresh...hey i have a suggestion...dont make khushi see arnav now...give them a grant 1st meeting...if u dont do it ...no probs...


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Originally posted by: karisma

goood!!!👏


great job Arnav!!!





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is on a Barun Sobti detox program. Not luking at his pics 4 more than 2 secs.Closing my eyes when he comes on screen. In all Honesty. HA.




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THANX 4 BEING SUCH A DEAR AND ENCOURAGING ME!!!!

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this is real good, please continueee
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A very different one.
pls continue.

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