REBIRTH..NEW STORY!!! PART 19updated!!! - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey please pm me when u update next and don't be annoyed if i don't reply becoz my exams r from 26th and they r really important so please pm me and i have surely enjoyed the story so far loved it do update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great!
Thanks for the PM.
You really leave us asking for more.pls take care of u'r health.
Waiting for khushi and Arnav's meeting at the fresher's day.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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dear friend it was a nice ff... I liked it.. If u dont mind would u send ths update to my scrap ... pllzz ...coz my exams r near by nd i miss the flow... Plz send to my scrap... Thank u...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice part thnxx for pm
i think arnav will getkhushi
soo khushi dont know that arnav saved her awww
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow...the 24 years back thing is like..holding the readers. waiting for next. thanks for the pm...and get well soon. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow...m luving it...updat soon n plz pm me wen u do so...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
awesome update loving how the story is unfolding keep up the good work thanks for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
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chapter 6:
present:

ASR slowly opened the chit!!
As he read the name,he felt an unknown emotion course through his body...it was as if he had been waiting all these yrs just for this moment...it was as if he was ushered into a new world,a place where he belonged...truly!!!!
"ASR!"...
karan was looking at him with his eyebrows raised!
Infact,everybody was staring at him,waiting for him to say sumthing!!!
oh freak!!
What the hell was he thinking about?...seriously, he was loosing it!!
He looked at his frnds and read the name out for everyone to hear!!
"Khushi!"

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Later on...in the night:

"You are acting as if u are doing it 4 the first tym!
cumon! get a grip on urself!!!
ASR smirked at Aditya!
Aditya:" oh yeah!
How can i not be nervous?
We are sneaking inside the girl's hostel afterall!
It is another thing that we have done this umpteen no of tymes...
that doesn't make it less dangerous!!!
What if the warden caught us redhanded?
Oh god!"
ASR started laughing , seeing the tensed face of his buddy!!!
But one look in front of him and he stopped laughing abruptly!!!
oops...
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Sidhi was a part and parcel of all the outings made by her bro and his buddies...
But then, she always needed sumbody's help in sneaking out of the hostel,unnoticed!!!
The risky job of getting her out always fell on ASR and he always dragged Aditya along with him for company!!!
It was night 10:30 and sidhi was getting restless in her room!!!
Where the hell was ASR and Aditya???

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ASR and Aditya looked at each other,fear reflecting in their eyes!!!
They were standing frozen,at one end of the corrider and the warden was on her way,advancing in on them,her attention still riveted on the conversation she was having with sumbody on her phone!!!

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ASR did not wait to think...
he just took the only option that was available to him...
he ran up the flight of stairs that led to the new wing of the hostel!!!

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Aditya was on the verge of following ASR when he saw a door on his left side,which read 'store room!'

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oh heck!!!
could this get any worse?
He could hear the warden's footsteps on the stairs...he was a gonner!
What a mess!
ASR took one glance at the shadow that was now getting bigger and bigger!
she was nearing him!
That was wen is eyes fell on the door on his side...
Room no.503...

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Khushi looked around her room ...the one she shared with Tina...
The moment she had stepped into the room,she had loved it!!!
Hey devimaiyah...yeh Tina bhi na!
"Are u gonna sleep in the bathroom or what? "
khushi was about to bang on the door of the bathroom,when Tina opened the door...
Khushi: "argh!
What happened to ur face?"
Tina: "Hey! Don't over react... k!
That is just a face pack!!
so just chillax!!!"
I will be out in another 15 min...u can sleep!! Don't wait for me!!"
Khushi switched off the light in her room and was moving 2wards her bed,when sumbody opened the door of the room...
Room no 503!!!

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24 yrs before:

Arnav Malik turned towards them and said:"Yes..."
He paused before continuing..."I saw a girl running in that direction!"
He pointed 2wards the greenary that was bordering the road!
But then,as they turned to hunt down their prey, a phone rang...breaking the silence of the night!!
They looked at Arnav's phone in his hand and then...towards the car,from where the ringing continued!!!

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Khushi did not know what made her do it!
she had taken shelter in a stranger's car!
she did not even know,what kind of person he was...she had not even seen him properly,even though she had bumped into him!!!
When the person glanced at the car before answering,she had prayed to her devi maiyah,to make him understand the situation...she had willed him to lie!!!
Her heart had skipped a beat,when he said 'yes'!
she had gotten ready to run out of the car,when she heard the rest of the sentence!
Thank god!
But before she could relax herself,her phone rang out,giving her an almost heart attack!!
she fumbled frantically in an effort to get her hands on her phone...finally,after what seemed lyk an eternity,she switched it off!
One look outside the car and she realised that the damage was already done!!!

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Arnav looked on in shock,as the guys took in the situation and he could literally see them making the connection!
oh shit!!!
And then Arnav took his decision!!!

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OK GUYS!! THIS IS IT FOR NOW!!!
PLZ DO READ AND REVIEW!!!
SILENT READERS PLZ ATLEAST HIT THE LYK BUTTON IF U ACTUALLY LYKED IT!!!
SO THAT I CAN KNOW PPL R ENJOYING IT AND I M NOT WASTING MY TYM...THE NEXT PART WILL B UPDATED ONLY AFTER I GET ENOUGH RESPONSE!!!😊
YEAH I KNW I AM BECUMING A LITTLE EVIL!!!😈



chapter 7 on page 13...
Edited by saikrishnars - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
nice update...the first thing i do when i log in is..to look for ur story update!! im loving it😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Wow... you are making me hooked to this story line... pls continue... 👍🏼

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