Fatal Attraction: Thread 4 {Chapters 16-18}

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ragaya

@ragaya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#211

I'll be fair-disappointing chapter 16. And since you promised 17 would be better, looking forward to it:) methinks Khushi is going to be the showstopper and Anna is going to have a fullblown catfight with her.

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#212

The last part was hilarious.!!🤣

Arnav your brother is making such efforts from his behalf,show them you've taken steps as well 😃

The first half oh-so-yum.! The description,the ambiance and the perfect pose which these two have permanently booked If I sound shameless blame the encounter of Arnav-Khushi.!😳

This is for the 4th thread

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Posted: 13 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: pgm7
The last part was hilarious.!!🤣
Arnav your brother is making such efforts from his behalf,show them you've taken steps as well 😃
The first half oh-so-yum.! The description,the ambiance and the perfect pose which these two have permanently booked If I sound shameless blame the encounter of Arnav-Khushi.!😳

This is for the 4th thread

Haha shameless comments are most welcome! ☺️
And thank you so much! Glad you liked it! :D

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gauranitai

@gauranitai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#214

lmao!! i lovd it!! ur story's goin awesome so far...evry update has me craving 4 more!

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tina_1234

@tina_1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#215

congo for new thread

awesome part

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#216

That was short :/ but sweet though liked it update soon

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karisma

@karisma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#217

please get ur fifth thread ready. i won't comment. will just like!

loool

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is on a Barun Sobti detox program. Not luking at his pics 4 more than 2 secs.Closing my eyes when he comes on screen. In all Honesty. HA.

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@RKDramebaaz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#218

Hey Shreya! Finally got a chance to comment! (Seriously, IB essays make your life a living hell!)

So this is my first comment, and I usually dont comment much. But your FF is too good to not comment! I absolutely love the way the story is unfolding! I have always loved mysteries! (Yeah, am a nerd!) And on top of that the love stories that so very well play themselves! I read the OS from Arnav's side too! I seriously can't wait! You are on the 4th thread and 16th chapter (Congratulaions by the way!) And Aditya is still remote! LOL.

It's hard. You know, to keep the story at a certain pace! I write FFs, but when it comes to some points, I fast forward it. You story has a perfect tone to it. I just loved it so much! The thing I appreciated most in the 16th chapter was the way you addressed Bulimia. It is something that very rare writers have the talent to do. Stepping out of the story to give out a moral message! And the ending cracked me up! Lol, Aman! So cute. I like Karan Wahi and Aakash Kapoor too! The Cute Hotties! ;)

Please do PM me when you update. I will read your other works soon as well.

Keep up the great work, and if you are going to di this for future, don't forget to send me a copy of your novel ;)

Love

Prach

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Homairah

@daydreamerr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#219

Woo new thread- congratulations!
Awesomeee update, absolutely loved it! 😃
My favourite part was when Arnav came to see Khushi and his face was all up close and lit by the moonlight, what a beautiful description!
Can't wait to see what the story has in store for Arnav and Khushi in the next update ;)
Well done for all your hard work! :)

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pc17

@pc17

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#220

what did i say ey? 😉 I just knew Arnie baby would turn up in her room! "Enduring" hmmm...gosh you are testing my patience woman! Only joking! I love how the story is progressing but Arnav must have an iron will. Come on...she's practically begging for it and I am too!!! 😆

Love how you built up the tension! The last bit was jokes. Great update!

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