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Originally posted by: Prach_VirMan
Hey Shreya! Finally got a chance to comment! (Seriously, IB essays make your life a living hell!)
So this is my first comment, and I usually dont comment much. But your FF is too good to not comment! I absolutely love the way the story is unfolding! I have always loved mysteries! (Yeah, am a nerd!) And on top of that the love stories that so very well play themselves! I read the OS from Arnav's side too! I seriously can't wait! You are on the 4th thread and 16th chapter (Congratulaions by the way!) And Aditya is still remote! LOL.It's hard. You know, to keep the story at a certain pace! I write FFs, but when it comes to some points, I fast forward it. You story has a perfect tone to it. I just loved it so much! The thing I appreciated most in the 16th chapter was the way you addressed Bulimia. It is something that very rare writers have the talent to do. Stepping out of the story to give out a moral message! And the ending cracked me up! Lol, Aman! So cute. I like Karan Wahi and Aakash Kapoor too! The Cute Hotties! ;)Please do PM me when you update. I will read your other works soon as well.Keep up the great work, and if you are going to di this for future, don't forget to send me a copy of your novel ;)LovePrach
Originally posted by: reyabear
Aww I'm sorry to hear that! Good luck with your essays though! Hope you do well :D
Haha yeah, I want to get the romance going before I actually have the whole Aditya mystery unfold, which will be very soon! :D
Thank you so much! I feel I might not be doing justice to the people that have been through bulimia since I don't know much about it but it's good to hear that you like it :)
Hahah novel?! Hardly! But thank you for the wonderful comment! 🤗
Okay, so as you can see, I'm doing this from the beginning… even though I'm a good 6-7 chapters in. But I like doing this from the beginning! :D Haha! It's so cool! Okay, here I got with my ramblings!
K is Khushi
A is Arnav
The other characters will be named in full. HAHAH!
Prologue:
Okay K was super brave to do that. Pulling a stunt like that in the middle of a dark, deserted alley, with 4 men. Haha! Well, I'd do the same too, because well, we girls could be like that sometimes. And just to her luck, the guys had to be so handsome. Super duper handsome. It's Arnav. Duh. Bloody hell. What would I do to have him in my house, all alone, in the dark, and BEG THE 30 MILLION GODS ABOVE to have him gasp at my sight (unfortunately, never happening). Sigh. This is bad. Alright, on to the next one.
WAIT. A. MINUTE. SWEETU?! YOUR PYAARA SA DOGGY IS A CHARACTER IN THIS FF?! How cute! :D haha!
Chapter 1 – Evacuate the Dance Floor
I love the song. So, dancy wancy! HAHA! If we ever meet outside this virtual world, I'm gonna make you dance to this one! :P
I was watching HOUSE M.D. the other day, and I FINALLY KNOW WHAT'S THE TERMINOLOGY USED FOR SHRIVELLING SKIN. It's called Pruning. :P hahah! A very medical terminology. BWAHAHAHA! Did I ever mention I wanted to be a doc? I didn't. okay never mind. On with my ramblings.
Alright. Wow. I snapped my eyes shut, when I read that line being repeated in her head. "That's for me to know and you to find out." HAHAHA! I could imagine Arnav drawling that out. Gah. Super delicious that guy is.
And then, Arnav, mistaking her for Anna, HE DANCED OH-SO-SEXILY WITH HER!
Shreya you tease! :P
Chapter 2 – Trouble
Okay. So, Khushi liked being kissed by him. EXPERT HIMSELF?! Shreya, get me an expert too! :P hahah!
Okay, so the confrontation was interesting. Obviously Aditya did something wrong in the past to have Arnav send him to jail and Arnav prevented Aditya to do whatever he wanted to do, in the nick of time. And like the goons said, he hates him for that. And now, even though Aditya hates him, he's sill scared of him. But I guess, such kinds of villains will be deadlier. So, let's see how things turn out.
WOAH. She grabbed him by the collar. NAICE. I want a collar to grab. Shraya. Give me one. NOW. :P haha! And Arnav seemed annoyed at Priya's mention of Expert at Kissing. Maybe he thought Khushi and Aditya kissed in the loo? Could be right?
Chapter 3 – With a little help from my friends
Okay skip. Haha! NO ARNIE in this one! :P I've nothing to say. LOL.
Chapter 4 – Knock you out
OH. NICE PUNCH. I ALWAYS WANTED TO PUNCH SOMEONE. And KKG did it, so I'm happy! :D eee!
Chapter 5 – Hate
O. M. G. I'm shocked. AGAIN. He just let her fall! :O Bloody hell. I can't get over how dangerous and mean this ASR is!
Chapter 6 – In my shoes
I like the pun the title poses as. Very nice touch. AND I LOVE YOUR DOG MAN! Hahaha! Pee-ed on ASR's shoes!!! HAHAHAHAHA!!! Bloody hell. That cracked me right up! :P
Chapter 7 – life in a glass house
The baby is familiar? WHAT. :O How did Khushi know him?!
btw,
THIS ONE CRACKED ME RIGHT UP.
"He was as bipolar as they came and it was best not to think about his constant mood changes and tire herself."
BWHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! xD
Chapter 8 – Fake Love
""Yeah, right. And I'm super-man." She retorted."
HAHAHAHAH! I love this KKG. I'm gonna definitely learn something from her.
And she wore a CUTE little saree! :D awwie! <3 I love you Arnav Babua! :D
Now I'm gonna only wear sarees! :P
BWHAAHAHAH!!! Time to get Arnav jealous eh? :P ahahaha! But I gotta say, all your characters are irresistible. Especially Karan Wahi.
Chapter 9 – just another new year's eve
"Her body felt hot suddenly, and she could feel the hairs on the back of her neck standing up as pleasant shivers ran up and down her spine. Her eyes travelled around the room before landing on his.
He was looking directly at her.
His lips pulled up in slow, small smirk as he put his arm around Anna's shoulder before leaning in towards her and kissing her on the cheek, keeping his eyes locked on hers all the while.
She shivered and looked away."
TALK ABOUT FATAL ATTRACTION. That would have killed me on the spot! Haye! *faints*
And Arnav did follow her. Nice. Good boy! FOLLOW ME HOME TOOO!!!
Bloody hell. You're making me desperate by the minute Shreya! :P
And they did see each other at midnight, didn't they? :D yaaay!
Chapter 10 – Alone
I HATE YOU.
BLOODY HELL.
THAT WAS A BAD BAD BADDD CLIFF HANGER!
HOW COULD YOU?!
MAKE THEM KISS ALREADY WOMAN!
Chapter 11 – eternal flame
That was one awesome dream! :O office romance! ooo! NAUGHTY NAUGHTY! 😆
*droool*
HAHAHAHA! Shreya, tell me honestly, did you dream that bit? :P HAHAHAHAHA!
I think you did, didn't you! xD
Chapter 12 – the show goes on
BABY BOY. EYES.
It's shyam's, isn't it? Shyam is connected to her horrible past. Her family and stuff. I BLOODY KNEW IT!
Shit. Aditya. He sent that message to her didn't he? THAT BITCH! :P
And the famous "GET OUT!" is back! Thanks uh. -__-
Chapter 13 – I can't tell you why
Nice. One night stand. GOOD GIRL, shreya.
BTW, you just scared me. Enmity about something bigger? What can it possibly be? :S
But I must point out one thing, you should really stop describing how gorgeous Arnav is you know. Firstly, it makes my heart flutter, but on a negative side, IT REMINDS ME OF EDWARD CULLEN AND HOW MEYER GOES ON AND ON ABOUT HIM IN A SIMPERING MANNER. Although Arnav's hotter than him. OKAY FINE! YOU WRITE COUNTLESS CHAPTERS ON HIM! *sigh*
Chapter 14 – with you
Aww. He laughed. :D yay! And the bear part was quite funny! Hehehe.. but poor arnie! He's heart-broken! Oh man! Damn it. I wanted to hug him too, Khushi!
Shreya. One hug. JUST ONE HUG PLEASE?!
Chapter 15 – Empire state of mind.
So he's back to being a dick, is he? I see. WHATEVER. I LOVE HIM NONETHELESS. Although his being bipolar is funny! I really would have laughed really!
And he's not hungry either. Aww! :'( Shreya. Why so serious?!
Chapter 16 – Model Behaviour
HAHAHAHAHA!!! AMAN IS SOOO CUTE! I can totally imagine Karan Wahi doing that!
"AAHHH! MY EYES!!" hahahahaha!!! That was super epic! xD
Btw. I WANT MY UPDATE. NOW.
P.S. you got your reviews! 😳 I hope this makes up for my absence! 😳
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