OS The Maha Twist - UPDATED CHAPTER 10 PAGE 22

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Awesome update x
Loved it
Yah defo keep PMin me babz <3
Im glad da famo knws da truth now x
Precap is scarin me it better not have sumefin 2 do with Snake-wa :/
Update soon
Thanks 4 da PM
Umuahhh
xoxoxoxo

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neha2005

@neha2005

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Great update! I am so glad that nani knows everything now but I hope nothing happens to khushi. Thanks for the pm!

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laksh65

@laksh65

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

thanks for the pm, loved the update of chapter 8. continue soon.

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priya

@priasweet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

nice update
now except anjali everyone knows about the matter

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Cliffhanger! u'll just have to update soon.😊

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Cheryl

@britishgirl

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

I had wrote chapter 9 already...but my 3 year old deleted it :( that will teach me not to lose the laptop when he around i guess lol.

Will update later chapter 9 when i have re-written it :)

Thanks for all your kind comments, i really appreciate it

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-Mayuri-

@-Mayuri-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Really good! Loving it! Continue soon!

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

wow so Nani could tell that something was wrong lame prick just wanted Arnav's money but his explanation was wonderful

hmm al ging to temple and Khushi going missing UH OH!

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bluetaj

@bluetaj

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

thanks for the pm...I like that the whole family(almost) is supportive now. You have given good character to aakash...for once he spoke up..ha ha ha...please do continue, I like ur narration and style.