SS Part 6 of My Avenging Angel (Arhi, A Kiss)

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Cannot wait til the next update

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Wow Mary!

Firstly, let me tell you that I just read last 3 of your work back to back, and I couldn't stop reading!

Secondly, I apologize for not reading sooner, I was away on a family wedding, and Internet was terrible.

Last, but not the least, these twists are amaing! You did hint at Arnav's mom and Khushi's chachu when you had him talking about her in #3. I love how you write, you introduce a morsel of something, let it simmer, and then bring it back with more flesh! Additionally, the characters stay true to their nature, the emotional upheavals are dealt with so much of sensitivity, and the situations all seem logical. The pictures help visualize, and the music is amazing! I've always like the song from hum apke dil mein rahte hain!

I can't wait to read more, waiting to see what happens next and please Pm me, if possible when you do! 👏

Edited by Sjm15 - 13 years ago

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arnav21

@arnav21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

It was fabulous . So that was arnav n kushi first kiss , that was beautifully described , kushi concern ,arnavs guilt , regret , love , was perfect . I just make out scenario in fornt . Well done . Waitin next part . Tank u very much 4 ur pm . N by d way ur new avatar is gd , it tink it suits u .

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arnav21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

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Sumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Good update...especially the twist about Arnav's mom and Chachu. And yes when she bandaged his hand ...very touching...

Loved it...Btw you can start another parallel story with Imaad as the lead...very hot...

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tina

@cpervaiz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

really cute first part...wow arnav's mom and Khushi's chachu.Thanx for the pm and plz do cont. soon:)

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vanesha230

@vanesha230

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

love love love love it!!!!! thnxs!!! :)

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: arnav21
It was fabulous . So that was arnav n kushi first kiss , that was beautifully described , kushi concern ,arnavs guilt , regret , love , was perfect . I just make out scenario in fornt . Well done . Waitin next part . Tank u very much 4 ur pm . N by d way ur new avatar is gd , it suits u .

Thank you sweety, I think he suit me too 😉

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: mouse72
Good update...especially the twist about Arnav's mom and Chachu. And yes when she bandaged his hand ...very touching...

Loved it...Btw you can start another parallel story with Imaad as the lead...very hot...

A bulb just went TING in my head as soon as you said it. 😉